A Child in a Mountain Village, Where Is the Road?

In fact, realistic novels can also be very charming. I have kept the author's book on my bookshelf for some time. I finally leveled up enough to be able to post book reviews. I have some personal feelings, and I have absolutely no intention of disparaging you. The first point is also mentioned by other book friends. Paragraphs should not be too long. Generally, one paragraph of three or four lines is enough. If it is exceeded, it will easily cause visual fatigue. The second point is that the detailed descriptions in the book are not enough, and they are mainly white descriptions. Scenery description is a kind of side description, which uses changes in the scenery to show the character's personality. The third point is that the writing technique may lack highlights. Although life is very ordinary, we must write about it. The changes in personality are highlighted through psychological changes and pave the way for the future. The fourth point is that the plot develops too fast, resulting in insufficient sense of substitution. For example, in the part about buying clothes in the book, I wanted to see what he was thinking. He might have unconfidence on his face, or he might blush. The woman selling clothes will also bargain with him. During the discussion, he may also describe the protagonist's attitude towards clothes, what his living habits were in the past, and why he was reluctant to part with them. But places that should be described in detail are often left out. The fifth point is that the characters are not full and the personality is not outstanding. Neither grandma nor parents were carefully described. We must know that family members have a particularly great influence on children. From their every move, readers can actively analyze the protagonist's character. The same goes for his friends. Nothing meant to disparage you. A little personal feeling.

To dear readers: It is my luck that you can click on my books; it is my honor that you can read my stories; it is my happiness that you can understand the meaning of the book! Thank you for your support!

Good. In this era of great change, the belief that knowledge can change destiny is collapsing, especially in rural areas. The young people who represent the future destiny of rural areas are worth writing about. Come on!

I also came from a rural area and went to college. To be honest, the most embarrassing thing is that we, a group of people, have no ability to establish ourselves in the city, and it is impossible to go back to the countryside. Compared with the children in the city, our attitude has been worse in all aspects since childhood. Hey, life is really difficult!

New Year's Eve is coming soon. Thank you to all readers for your support in 2018. My enthusiasm has not increased or decreased in the past two days like the collection of small books. From the first day of 2019, I will still insist on updating and strive to keep updating. I wish you all success in your work, a happy family, lots of blessings, and all the best in the new year!

It's well written and very touching. Many mothers are like this! ! !

Not bad, keep paying attention, continue

They are both from the countryside, they are also authors, and they also write realistic works, which is very relatable! Come on, author! ! !

Personally, I think this book is a good one. It is suitable for all ages. Young people can read it and be more prepared for their future career in society. Those who continue to pursue scientific research can use this book to understand some of the difficulties they may face on the road to scientific research and the correct mentality. Those who plan to work should regard it as an experience for the soul. Those who start a business will help you comprehensively consider the consequences of your actions. For elders, it is also helpful to understand the mental process of children at this stage and promote mutual understanding and tolerance with children. Come on!

New Year's Eve, still updated as usual, the author has worked hard 👍👍

Book until you can't do anything else, come on!

Congratulations on finishing this book😁

Realistic novels are very cold. Even if they are well written, they don't get many clicks. I will do my best. There is no starting point for this account, so I can use another account to subscribe for you.

The paragraph is too long, just like me, it's still a traditional habit! If online novels are full of periods and paragraphs, check out the great ones!

Sure enough, it broke out😴

Come on, author😃

Dear readers, in order to write better works, I have decided to postpone the opening of a new book. The time is uncertain. Thank you for your attention!

After reading your novel, I have the urge to write a novel again!

Articles come from the heart, beautiful articles are appreciated by all, I am new here, please give me some advice, I am the author of "The Useless Class". Asking for mutual visits. Already placed on bookshelf

In April you said it was going to break out, so I was still looking forward to it.

Come and see if the fan has any new works

Good book, I have collected it, and I would like to ask if the author is a girl?

I've been waiting for a big update for a long time... Finally it's here 😢

Hey, I just wrote "Longyou Swordsman" in the past two days. It is a funny and passionate martial arts. I hope you can give me some advice.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that the reading was not very smooth.