A Reborn Female Is Not Worthy of Cannon Fodder

After reading the first chapter, I can't stand it. Although the author has tried very hard, it may be due to lack of writing skills. The writing is immature and the logic is unclear. The murderer of the protagonist is Xia Lian. This person seems to appear out of thin air. There is no foreshadowing or twist. I think it is very difficult to be able to write 100,000 words without encouragement. Most people, including myself, cannot do it. This is a very good quality. But now the author's writing style is indeed too immature, he can't grasp the rhythm of writing, and there are also problems with his writing style. I think the author's top priority now is not how to write this book to make it more popular, but to fundamentally improve his aesthetic ability and writing ability. A little tip: when reading a book, don't just read it for fun, take it apart and read it, and study its structure, main line, foreshadowing, rhythm, etc. When you study a book, you will have a "routine" for writing in your mind. One of the biggest problems in the world is "plagiarism". The "plagiarism" here does not mean direct plagiarism. It means humbly studying and researching how to write good articles. Of course these are just my family's opinions, feel free to write down, don't criticize me

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