Horse Thief Water Ghost

As the saying goes, the bandits in the mountains and the ghosts in the water are not people who can be put on the table. However, Han Lian, who boarded the pirate ship, had to live and die as a ghost on earth and a thief on the water. Could he be attracted to Zhang Kui? (Just kidding, refer to Lei Xiaojing and Yi Yang Qianbi) On one side, there are five big and three big heads, snoring loudly like thunder when sleeping. On one side is a man with fair skin, a pretty face, and elegant behavior. The fierce Zhang Kui intercepted Qiao Liansheng, and met the lower Liba people in the high mountains and flowing water. If we don't say that the author is clever, the conflict will arise just as soon as these two people stand together. To elaborate, the white-faced scholar and the black-faced strong man were in the same boat and planned to rob the official ship. "Yellow smoke is still floating overhead, the sails are noisy, and the storm is soaking my feet. I can't dry the corners of my eyes. I can't care about howling in the strong wind..." If you want to know what happened, read it in a book!

Come and try the poison according to the review I feel that this book has opened well, and the atmosphere of the rivers and lakes is coming to my face The tone and psychology of the people in the grass are vivid, and they have written a unique road of "rural areas surrounding the city". The shortcoming is that brother, did you leave a message saying that it was 1 million to 2 million? Hurry up and code!

The author's language is very fluent and the writing is very clear. It allows people to understand at a glance what you want to say and what you want to express. This is actually better than many online article writers. Many people write books as soon as their minds are hot, and they write confidently for a long time. As a result, readers have no idea what they read. Then the next question is what do you want to write about? A story written for oneself, or a story written for readers? Is it a story for the majority of people, or a story for a small group of people? In my opinion, your story has a slow beginning and a biased subject matter. Only a special group of people who have a special liking for it can bear to read it, but it is difficult for most readers to follow it. The quality of online readers varies, and only novels that are popular, cheap, and instantly enjoyable can attract most people. If you write about this subject and use this kind of beginning, your reader base is destined to be very small. Let's talk about the more fatal problem. Your updates are too slow. It can be said that your editor has completely given up on you. This means that you will not have any recommendation positions in the future. As expected, the book will basically be a standalone until the completion of the book. Without readers, do you still have enough creative passion to continue writing? I don't know you, and I don't know what your thoughts are on writing, so just tell me and you can decide for yourself.

I'm a very demanding person. Don't be angry if I tell you the truth. The writing is really good.

Brother, no, the update speed is as fast as mine.

The writing style makes me envious, but this update makes me afraid to compliment it.

Brothers and sisters, please take note! This is not martial arts! Please don't position yourself as a martial artist! If it is positioned as a martial arts, you will definitely be disappointed! If it's martial arts, let's let martial arts go. This book is all about team battles. Team battle! It's a team fight! The trickster robs the salt. In this ambush battle, my ability is not good enough. I'm sorry. But it can't be saved. I admit it and will work hard in the future to write exciting team battles. I regard Zhang Kui as a general. Han Liansheng is Zhang Kui's golden finger. Zhang Kui is Han Liansheng's guide and life-saving medicine. Never position this book as martial arts. It's really like watching me write Chuanwu, leave a message below. I write articles really, really, really not for money. But if there are many people watching, I will be in a good mood. I really think my writing is good. I'm looking forward to writing Chuanwu. Just give me a shout.

Daily support, the writing is excellent, cheers for the author!

One year has passed, and your update volume seems to be a little ( ｰ̀дｰ́ )?

Are you writing for yourself or for others? It seems that your livelihood is not a problem and you don't need to rely on online articles to support yourself, so why bother to work so hard just to please others and gain their approval. Are you still happy writing like this? Will the creative vitality not be affected? Some people will say that what you are doing is wrong, but it is difficult to agree. I saw your answer on Zhihu, and you seem to be a little crazy. You are young and have no other pressure, so it is better to regard writing as fun and just follow your heart.