Go Back to Ancient Times and Become a King

From the outside, I was expecting an invention behind pig's feet, but it turned out that the author didn't even know how to refine copper. He had never taken a junior high school chemistry experiment class? The science and technology and productivity of the Xia Dynasty should not be unified. It would be good to have a loose alliance. What about Europe? From here to there for several years, you can rule a piece of wool. If you don't know agricultural knowledge and don't know how to make iron farm tools, you can't even think about having a population of tens of millions. You won't learn anything from other novels and give it to craftsmen and expect them to come up with it, right? Can you please neutralize it? Either you think that technological advancement is extremely difficult and even modern people can't achieve it, or you think it's child's play and ancient craftsmen can do it. Can't you moderate it a bit? It is very simple for modern people to understand technology, such as iron smelting, gunpowder, stirrups, saddles, and shoes for cavalry. It was impossible for ancient craftsmen, because they didn't have the knowledge to think hard and couldn't do it. They didn't know why the evil gold was so brittle, and they didn't know how to increase the temperature of the furnace. In the Warring States period, there was only one way to practice. There was a gap of thousands of years. Don't dream of relying on craftsmen's research.

Let me tell you my personal opinion What can I say about this book It is very, very special to my taste I have been reading novels for more than 6 years, and I have been reading novels for more than half a year now. I saw this novel last night and it really attracted me I hope the author will continue writing it.

I don't know what the author's brain circuit is like In my opinion, only by conquering, annexing, and digesting can we grow stronger But I read the first ten chapters and found that the protagonist's words to his subordinates , his management of his subordinates, and the protagonist also wants to invent Trade I knew this kind of book at that time, and I didn't want to read it

I'm a man, but I'm very disgusted by the protagonist's character, who discriminates against women and seems to be arrogant. You don't have to talk about democracy and public equality between men and women. Even if you treat other women as goods to your subordinates, I can understand it. I also agree with you about feudal women. , But what is the protagonist's attitude towards his own woman? It's disgusting. He only knows how to get angry at women. A charming girl provokes you. He gets lucky when his head gets hot. He turns into a hot-tempered man instantly after he is done. You stare at her hard for a few times to feel good. He thinks that a woman is a woman, and all sex are better than women. Psychiatric thoughts. If the protagonist Y had a mother in her previous life, what would she think? Author, you can give this book to female readers to see what they think. Also, the protagonist's splash can be the biggest reputation of the book. , "Always leave your good looks to outsiders, and leave your coldness to the people around you who spend your life together." You are chinese? Are you Chinese? Is there Chinese blood? Do you speak Chinese? A man shouldn't hurt a woman who treats him well until death, let alone a woman who loves you, a teenage woman, what's wrong with being primitive! If you dare to bring modern knowledge back, you should bring back the bloody nature of men. Is it meaningful to live so uncomfortable, not trusting the people around you, cold-blooded, and disgusting? It's not for China, but for your own better life. Let me ask the protagonist what your good life is? What's the point! I became more and more perverted after reading Chapter 50

Yang Hao: No! How is this possible! The paper is written with modern English or super-era information.

Here I present a map of mountains and seas from the Xia Dynasty!

I hope to speed up the construction of modern times, quickly realize modernization in all aspects, and then come up with steam engines and firearms, and then sweep across the world and unify the world! It is recommended to use a dualist constitutional monarchy or a national socialist government I hope the author can write more about external expansion... That's about it. I'll mention the rest as I think of them.

The moment I saw the Holy Roman Empire, I knew it was going to be cool. The Pre-Qin period is not very suitable for writing as a traditional historical time travel article, because there are too few relevant historical documents. My personal suggestion is to combine some of the myths, stories, legends, and epics of the time, unify the world, and use your imagination to write a half-fantasy, half-historical novel.

The title and introduction of the book are not critical. The content is very immersive and I haven't found any poisonous points so far. Come on, write more and update more. By the way: How many updates a day and at what time? Can't wait to see what's next! ! !

Long review: The plot has not yet been developed, but I have to say that the author found this entry point really well. I am an old reader of your last book, and it did seem quite young. I could read it simply because I really like the original subject matter, where the king came to the barbaric era and lit the torch of civilization in the eternal night. From then on, history was divided into two parts. I got this book from a recommendation. I say it's a good starting point because most of the original novels fall into a weird routine. At first glance, the routines of many original novels are almost the same. It's not because the authors have nothing to write, but because they have too much to write. , Just like the dinosaurs in your last book (it should be this one), it is either an alien invasion or an environmental crisis... There are so many things to write about, but everyone starts with the same thing. This is so strange, because there are so many things that can be written, and there are so many starting points that can be used. This is a good starting point. It replaces the main contradiction in the original novel: the contradiction between man and nature with a more complex and reasonable one: the struggle between the protagonist and other people, and against nature. This kind of development has a liberating meaning in it, rather than just because I want to live a better life and I want to promote technology, which is a big but empty argument. I think the author has obviously learned a lesson from the previous book and has a preliminary understanding of his own rhythm. To be honest, slow-paced books are not very popular in the market (this is one of the reasons why primitive genres are rare), and your current book has a relatively tight rhythm. I hope to keep this advantage in mind. It is best to have a refreshing point within every five chapters. In addition, let me talk about a few shortcomings: 1. The update speed is too slow (I just think it is slow, funny) 2. The writing power is not good. Thanks to this decent beginning, there are many details that have not been written out, such as the world view, the cultural economy at that time, etc. Either you have not made detailed settings and just started with this outline, or let's put it mildly and say that the writing power is not good. 3. Rhythm! Rhythm! Don't forget what happened in your last book. I won't say too much about the previous book so as not to mislead new readers. Anyway, you know it in your mind and it's over. Don't try to become Zentraedi Star Technology all of a sudden. In addition to water technology, you must have the concept of character creation in your eyes. Regarding the second question, it is in conflict with the first question. If you want to rely on this pen to make a living, your current writing power is definitely not good. Concentrate on writing a chapter with a longer word count. It depends on whether you can control it and write what should be written. Check for omissions and fill in the gaps. It is better than anything else. Don't lose your beginning.

Sitting there is a brain disorder, fighting from Europe to Asia, the logistics are dragging him to death, plus there are high mountains and deserts, if he wants to fight over, it is not in the steam era, so he can't even think about it. It is very troublesome to attack the entire Central Plains. From Europe to Asia, you will only do this unless you have a brain.

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It was impossible for Europe to reach the east. The Roman Empire was too far away from China. There were virgin forests halfway along the way. How could they march? I'm afraid that before reaching the protagonist's territory, all the enemies will die due to various diseases, hunger, and cold.

It turns out that the author of Wild Footprints has opened a new book. I can't tell whether it's good or bad in eight chapters. I'll give it a book and support it first.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is that artillery has been invented since primitive times.

It would be too crooked to write about Rome reaching China. In this era where virgin forests are everywhere, it is impossible to achieve. Even if they come to China, Roman travelers should know what period China is in. They can't eat Europe, Central Asia, Africa, and Russia, let alone China, so don't go too far. And instead of an expedition to China, it is better to expedition to Africa. There is no difference between Africa and China in this period. They are all virgin forests, and Africa is closer. It would be great for Roman travelers to develop Africa in their lifetime.

The protagonist is a typical double-standard dog. He is a slave and hates the slave master. This is true. Now that he has become the leader, it is also true to attack other tribes. What's unpleasant is that no matter what he does, the protagonist feels that he is righteous, which is disgusting.

For thousands of years, the idea that slaves are slaves can only be said by one person to move a group of people who have never read books?

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the introduction, I don't want to read it. If it's a fantasy genre, it's okay, but if you want to unify the world before the Xia Dynasty, it's simply impossible to unify the world. Poor transportation conditions, short life expectancy, backward medical conditions and other factors are connected in series, and it will be troublesome to unify the whole country! Not to mention that the protagonist is a time traveler, so you can ignore those objective factors, some things can only rely on accumulation and precipitation

Why does this book discriminate against women? Women should have the right to education. Even in feudal society, women should not be treated so differently. They are all carbon-based life forms with the same composition. Just because they have different physiological functions on the road of evolution, it is wrong to use a lot of feudal dross such as female virtues to cover up their gender discrimination. Of course, the protagonist of this book is just a mortal, and he has indeed asked for it, but he does not say it out, and he feels unhappy. The more he reads, the more he feels that it is full of discrimination against women. (I'm not a woman, maybe a little bit feminist)

The protagonist is really a villain. Those women are so innocent. They can just reward the soldiers separately. Thinking that doing so means killing decisively will only make people disgusted and incompetent. If such a person can achieve great things, God is blind.

Slaves are people from other tribes who are reduced to slaves and cannot understand the language. How can they riot? Do you think it was a unified language during the Qin and Han Dynasties? People who are not full can't even hold a knife. A hundred people can be destroyed.

Author Jun, in Chapter 157, I don't have a problem with you criticizing Xia Qi, but it's too much to involve Dayu! (Said that Xia Qi had an affair with Dayu's wife and was a low-born or something) As a descendant of the Chinese nation, this is inappropriate for you! Dayu said he was a sage (Dayu controlled floods, and Yu surrendered to Boyi). Everyone has no objection, so you really went too far!

Both this book and Footprints of the Wilderness are very well written by the author. Especially the protagonist writes about the domineering power of an emperor, which is a different style than the Qin Li time traveler. Both are good-looking, but why this book has such a low score is a bit incomprehensible.

One thing is actually quite unreasonable. Sitting on one's knees is extremely unreasonable. I don't understand what the author is thinking. Many places mention where the protagonist is sitting on his knees. Could it be that there was such a polite sitting posture in the ancient Xia Qi era? If not, how could such an anti-human sitting posture be such as kneeling on one's knees?

It is obvious that the eunuch has finished loading the book. This book is too nonsense. The first one is to create a European time traveler and return it to the enemy. Do you know how long it will take for European troops to come over? Even in modern times, the journey is far away. What kind of threat was there in ancient times? The second one is In order to make enemies for the protagonist, the author keeps using them to attack the enemy. If an enemy escapes to the grassland, he will unify the grassland in a few years. Tens of thousands of troops can be sent to attack immediately. The grassland can't even attack the iron. This operation has been done more than once. Is this a retard?

Refer to Xia, Shang, Zhou, Spring and Autumn documents. You will find that warfare in ancient times was primitive and inefficient. Mainly due to insufficient social productivity! The lack of productivity lies in 1. Edible plants have not been fully domesticated, and high-yielding crops have not been fully domesticated. Some of the foods eaten by modern people were poisonous in ancient times, or lacked fruits and could not be used, or simply lacked breeding technology and could not be artificially bred and planted on a large scale. 2. Lack of agricultural technology, from simple shelling machines to more complex livestock domestication, agricultural assistance, waterwheels, plowing, intensive farming, retting, and water conservancy are all lacking. 3. Lack of production conditions, primitive society can almost be said to be a water-driven society. The diversion of the Yellow River will destroy a circle of civilization. It can be said that it can solve water conservancy and strengthen productivity. Yu was also elected as the tribal leader because of water conservancy. Army reinforcements. Because the ancient military wives were rubbish. As long as the protagonist strengthens the cohesion of the army (basic education, law, brainwashing) train the array and strengthen the logistics supply capability. Developed bronze smelting technology, domesticated horses, saddled, mounted archery, and black powder. Damn it, which tribe can resist this! ! ! You don't need to do anything else, build cities with earth, ride and shoot gunpowder to plunder every day, plunder the population, destroy farming, the world is yours. About the human heart, it is even simpler. Religious brainwashing, establishment of schools, training of spies from an early age, establishment of laws, manipulation and suppression of dissidents, all in a safe and sound manner.

The most uncomfortable thing about this book for me is the organization of the army 😆 The military system of the Han Dynasty, the feudal dynasty of our country, was a two-five system, the modern Soviet Union was a three-three system, and the Republic of my country was a four-four system. I really can't understand the author's eight characters as corps commanders. I personally have some ideas: there are five people to set up a corps commander, the second corps to have a commander, the fifth to have a captain, the second team to have a hundred people to set up a camp commander, the fifth camp to have a battalion commander to have 500 people, the second battalion to have a thousand people to set up a regiment commander, the fifth battalion to have a brigade commander to have 5,000 people, the second brigade to have a division commander of 10,000 people, the fifth division to have a corps commander of 50,000 people, and the second army to have a corps commander of 100,000 people. Then set corresponding military ranks for each level

Without historical materialism, we only have Xia Dynasty to the west, but Rome is the only one. The timeline is not right, and we look down on China

I recommend Aztec's Immortal, which is well written.