The Trajectory of the Heavens

The book is good, but updates are a bit slow.

I'm worried about the speed of updating, so I'll wait until it's released...

Some of my behaviors in reality are a bit pretentious. Although I explained that I was under the influence, it is really not good. After all, invisible pretense is popular now. I am awesome but I don't say that you can really see my awesomeness. That is the highest level. I hope the author can consider it.

Come on, I'm here! If heaven had not given birth to my skin as a mouse, my skin would have lasted forever like night! Come on! ! ! At this very moment, I, Pipi Mouse, have re-entered the realm of infinite dermis!

The infinite stand-alone terminal system is turned into a card game, and it is full of inferior little devil tricks. It is better to follow the immortal cultivation system to transcend the heavens. The power system is too confusing.

In the future, when merging the world, we can integrate less points, and we have to prioritize and at least do it one by one. This is too messy and has a certain impact on viewing.

Chapters 10 and 12 are so disgusting, really. Everything else is pretty good, but when I saw someone deliberately looking for trouble to break the legs and feet of a child like 67, and deliberately causing trouble by being too sly, you are doing your job, it was disgusting to death.

Your book is almost the same as the American comic that started with Hong Kong films... Did you copy each other's outlines?

This is comfortable, just want to be wanton. No one stipulates that hot weapons cannot be used in the martial arts world. If you use it twice to affect your martial arts heart, it is too unstable. Everything is for getting stronger, how can you have so many worries~

The protagonist has a mediocre start, but the plot is fluent, and there are no ordinary poisonous plots. The author's description of the fight is a highlight. It was a good read in the early stage. I look forward to more updates to see how the plot unfolds and whether the addition of new plots will lead to a better story.

The main character is too much of a virgin. It's boring to watch. The writing gets worse and worse later on. It's not interesting to watch.

It's okay, just a little bit holy.

A strong chuuni flavor. Gunfights everywhere in America? Brother, have you watched too many movies? Can't figure out the difference between reality and movies? Or have you watched too much of a certain hookup? And also wrote about the arrogance of the American emperor's tea drinkers who can kill gangsters and passers-by at any time? Brother, which planet are you an American emperor from? So cool and awesome? You, a guy who is squatting at home and can't even connect to the Internet, have quite a rich imagination. 😅

It's annoying to have some devil's abilities.

There are many poisonous points. Since you asked the villain to transfer 10 million US dollars to you, why don't you ask the silly girl to transfer the money from the bank to you? You are leaving that world anyway? Also, the Substitution Technique in Naruto requires the preparation of props, and the fusion world is really poisonous. I can't think of so many fusions in the first world. Why haven't the people of Hong Kong died yet? Slipped away

In the latest chapter, you said that the qi in the dragon balls is only for destruction, and the health-preserving effect is not as good as the internal power in martial arts novels. This is nonsense. You didn't look at how long the Turtle Immortal and the Crane Immortal lived, and how long the cat in Kalin Tower lived? Also, the qi in the original work can not only be used for destruction. I remember that in the session that the protagonist participated in, Turtle Sennin had used Qi to perform hypnosis, body-holding techniques, and the Ten Thousand Kingdoms Shocking Palm. The Qi in the Dragon Ball is a kind of life energy. It would be ridiculous to say that it can only destroy. To be honest, among so many anime I have watched, if there is any kind of energy that is closest to the essence and life, it is the Qi in the Dragon Balls, and the other is the spirit son in the Shinigami (but the spirit son is the constituent material of the soul). Other energy attributes, whether they are chakra, domineering, nen, magic, etc., Are composed of life energy and other things.

It's not a rant, but a very poisonous point. The protagonist's concept is that the world of Longmen Inn is not as powerful as the world of Zhongnanhai Bodyguard. You know, in the world of Longmen Inn, there are people with internal strength and sword energy. The violent organizations include the Jin Yiwei and the black cavalry archery team of Dongchang, whose arrows can also turn. What kind of rubbish IQ would make him feel inferior to Zhongnanhai's bodyguards? Author?

I hope the author writes carefully, especially the logic of the protagonist's behavior. It really needs to fit the plot, power system, and upgrade speed of the book. Whether a book is good or not, and whether it is popular or not really requires patience. Author, have you noticed what will happen when the protagonist in the book drifts away, which seriously does not conform to the plot logic and character setting of the book?

Drive the Super Seminary out of the earth, a group of aliens.