The Iron I Forged Has Light

After reading ten chapters, I can't stand it any longer. For those who are majoring in materials, let me briefly explain. The author is probably not an engineering student. He has participated in a metalworking internship and should not be able to write such a layman's thing. Let's take the first chapter. Let's talk about the most basic thing first, making a sickle. Generally, agricultural composite steel is used instead of pig iron. Of course, this will be discussed later, so let's put it down first. The second point is the forging method. Since it has already been quenched, we assume that it has been forged, polished and normalized. Although I don't know how many hours the protagonist used the Qing Dynasty forging method without an air hammer, and then quenched it with water? ! Your family has been quenched by water for generations and you are still very proud? ! Did you study for a bachelor's degree in materials science and still do water quenching? ! The heat treatment teacher's coffin board can't even be pressed! Then, after water quenching, just press it directly onto the hoe pole. Is it complete? ! What about your annealing? What about surface treatment? You are knocking your heat treatment teacher back into the coffin board! I would like to advise the author. If you want to write a novel with knowledge content, you should check the information first. I don't ask you to be really professional. There are so many blacksmith videos on the Internet. At least watch a few before writing.

I just complained a lot in this chapter, but then I felt that the author's bacteria might not be able to see it, so I came here to complain again! First point: It can be seen from the article that the author's writing skills are still very immature, a bit wordy, and there is too much nonsense! Here I would like to give the author a sentence: "If you talk too much, you will make mistakes." Be more decisive and do everything that needs to be done. Second point: There is absolutely no need to add the game plot of Blizzard and Monster Hunter, no need! ! ! Can the weapons created in reality be reflected in the data in the game? If I change the weapon's attack power in the game to 9999999999, can I cut through the earth with one sword? Gou planned to change one data himself, and he could destroy the entire server! Regardless of how rigorous the data in the game is, it is not a standard for measuring craftsmen! It can detect the weight, length, and width, and what else can it do? The attack power can be changed at will! The third point: I have always emphasized ingenuity and so on, but do you understand the meaning of ingenuity? The first meaning of ingenuity is practicality, and the second is its own spiritual embodiment. What's the point of making something if it can't be used, let alone in a competition! Finally! Since you, the author, are writing stories about craftsmen, don't write and enter game data, compete in games, etc. There's no point in using all the bells and whistles! ! ! Moreover, the male protagonist is a blacksmith, neither a professional gamer nor a martial arts practitioner, he is just a blacksmith! Blacksmith! Blacksmith! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Seriously, author, you are not in front of me, otherwise I will really beat you, and beat you very badly! ! ! !

To be honest, the subject matter of this book is really good. But as I write, I don't know where it goes. The writing style shows that the author has very little professional knowledge and social experience. Although I am not a professional, I can use Baidu. A lot of things are embarrassing to watch. Suitable for mindless viewing. But when I saw Chapter 85, I really couldn't bear to take it for granted. Come on, author. I withdrew first.

To be honest, I came in to read the book when I saw the title, but I couldn't stand it anymore. The author is a layman on blacksmiths.

I don't know if the author has watched the documentary on manual exercise. I recommend watching it. I recommend Extraordinary Craftsmanship, as well as CCTV documentaries about craftsmen. I feel that the writing process is too simple, and the charm of craftsmanship lies in the meticulous craftsmanship.

The author works hard. The structure of the book is very attractive, but the details are too poor. Learn more about the professional knowledge you don't understand and describe it more correctly.

I really like the idea of ​​this book, but it's a pity that the setting is a bit too toxic. It would be perfect if there was a system similar to that of a gourmet supplier to improve skills. The food system also provides a variety of out-of-print materials. In this book, you can use a sickle to chop pig iron, and use a kitchen knife to add 5 delicacies? ? Quite exaggerated, off-topic, and too high-life!

If the author wants to write a book on building materials, he must understand materials science. I have never heard that adding carbon to pig iron can create steel.

An exam-oriented essay written around the settings of the appliance is average.

There is really no logic at all. Do you think this is an artifact made by gods? Don't hit everything randomly! It depends on the use! Sword collectibles are of high value, but ordinary farm tools such as sickles have good attributes and are also sickles.

In fact, this novel should add some fighting scenes. As the saying goes, a good sword matches a hero, and a good sword should not be allowed to gather dust.

To be honest, I feel that these kinds of books are a bit anti-intellectual. Hand-made iron, no matter how good the technology is, no matter how skilled the master is, no matter how many times the pig iron is tempered, the pig iron will not be better than modern technology and the metal formula obtained by scientists through thousands of experiments. Not to mention the special steel used on aircraft carriers, the spoons and dining jars used by ordinary people are generally made of austenitic stainless steel, which is an iron-nickel alloy. It not only does not rust, but also resists corrosion. Its strength and toughness are much higher than those of ancient swords. After all, if blacksmiths are really that powerful, why don't we have so many eighth-level fitters, eighth-level lathes, and eighth-level forgers in our country to hammer out the materials for aircraft engines? When the protagonist buys steel, he can try to buy high-grade stainless steel directly. In this environment, it will not be a few cents more expensive than pig iron. It is even said that due to the overall progress of production technology, sometimes stainless steel is cheaper than pig iron

🤫The education I received since I was a child is that if you have a problem, go to the police and the police will help you. It's a pity that we police uncles don't think so. ←_←The thief didn't break open your door. Why call the police at night? Just mind your own business. (Manual funny)

It's a bit of a noob, but it's well written. I just can't stand it after reading it for a long time.

This book is not rigorously written, but it is still okay as a novel. What I want to say here is not that, but that reviews are much more interesting and interesting than novels! ! ! Let me just say here that I am here to read the comments! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I gave up my books, sat down and renounced my original intention. This made me feel useless.

You can let the protagonist try to create an earring with fusion ability.

The effect of persuading people to retreat in the first three chapters is first-rate, tempering it with their own blood, a 3,000 yuan sickle? Who to play?

Exemption is limited. Exemption is limited. Exemption is limited. Exemption is limited. Exemption is limited.

Read four chapters🙂🙂🙂

I finished reading it without realizing it, and I feel great. I look forward to the update. I will give you a few recommendations and some rewards 😁. If you have a monthly pass, I will give you a monthly pass. The author will continue to work hard 🌹, and I am waiting for the paid subscription 👍

Isn't it true that blacksmiths can make everything? All the pots, pans, chopping boards, chopsticks, plates, tables and chairs, hoes, plows, buckets, etc. In the kitchen all shine 😍😍😍

I've read about ten chapters, and it's very good. I plan to gain weight. I really like this genre. There have been some novels about making items with attributes recently, but I only read one online.

The author can create a craftsman system. Experience and points can be gained after creation. Experience can be upgraded. Points can be used to purchase attributes. After the item is created, how many attribute slots are given to the item according to the level (each attribute can be used unlimitedly as long as it is purchased once. For example, if the solid attribute is purchased and the chair has three attribute slots, then 3 solid attributes can be put in, which is solid +3. Of course, the consumption attribute can also be set, just like the red pill in the game, you will continue to buy it after it is used up). Attributes can be put into the attribute slot, so that the item has attributes. This setting is to prevent the attributes of the created items from not meeting the needs. For example, if a chair is sharp, it will be useless. If the relevant attributes are customized, it will be OK. After upgrading to a certain level, a binding workshop or factory can appear. Pig's feet can control the attributes of specified items produced in the workshop, so that they can be mass-produced. Workers can gain a small amount of experience by simply producing pig's feet in the factory.

After reading Chapter 90, I was persuaded to quit.

The more I write about it, the more rubbish it becomes. The traditional blacksmith at the beginning is interesting, and the consecration is also good. Later, I go to collect herbs and sell them for no reason, and I can understand it after practicing my skills. I sold it for 500 in the morning, so I was so happy. I have a brain disease. Then I got a horse, and I ran out to survive in the wild at night, and I even went to work as a virgin. I kept getting poisonous. It was really awesome.

I was really poisoned. Has the author never seen what a sickle looks like? ? And chop! ! ! How to chop with a sickle? ? ? The sickle looks like this: 77777777777777! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! How to chop! ! ! ! ! You tell me! ! ! ! ! Even if the first sickle costs 100 yuan, I'll count your labor costs! The second one costs 3,000 yuan. . . The third one is 10,000 yuan. . . . Do you think that readers don't read books with their brains in mind? . . . .

Emmm, I just saw the male protagonist going to sell sickles with bonuses. The male protagonist sets the sickles at different prices according to the different bonuses. I think it is not worth buying an extremely sharp sickle at a high price. After all, sickles are used for farm work. It is written in the book that an ordinary sickle costs 20 per piece. Buying a farm tool sickle that is hundreds of times as powerful as an ordinary sickle is just right. Ordinary people would not do this. To say that sharp tools are good for work, wouldn't it be better to buy a small farm machine? Therefore, it is very appropriate for the male protagonist to build these agricultural tools and sell them at a high price to replenish water. Because hand-making is time-consuming and laborious, and because the tools made by Goldfinger have bonuses, the price is high. It is understandable, but will anyone buy such expensive farm tools?

A hundred sickles can kill you from starvation in the countryside. Finally, when I saw 3,000 sickles, I gave them up. I couldn't bear to stand them, so I forced myself to surrender.

I would like to ask, would an ordinary person really buy a sickle worth 3,000 yuan?