Good Father-In-Law of Tang Dynasty

Author, the most intolerable thing for readers is typos. Do you want me to guess the original meaning of the sentence? There are just a few typos in the first chapters, but there are mistakes in phrases in the following chapters. The wrong phrases cannot be connected with your sentences at all. I am worried that I don't know whether it is because I am not knowledgeable enough to understand the content of your narrative or the method. Really, I am really tired of reading.

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Novels of the Tang Dynasty keep appearing "young master" and "young lady", which feels very strange. It would be better if it could be changed 😥

The author needs to improve his basic literacy in literature. This is not a rant, but a real suggestion. The description is too colloquial, and many words and sentences do not make sense. Also, you have to read it yourself after writing. There are too many typos, and the names of the characters are also written wrong. The subject matter is good, but I just hope that the author can complete the novel with a better writing attitude.

Typos, missing words, wrong semantics, misuse of idioms to force pretentiousness, and unclear sentences make it uncomfortable to read. If these are removed, the writing is actually okay. There are still many poisonous points, so it is okay for newcomers.

The story is pretty good, but unfortunately, the author's language proficiency is probably not up to par. It can be seen that the writing talent is limited, and there are bad sentences and common sense errors throughout the article. It makes me feel uncomfortable after reading it. Now, even if it is a short story with a naive plot, most of the sentences can still be read smoothly. I suggest that the author find someone to proofread it every time he writes it.

This is a novel with a very novel concept. Only the author's faulty sentences and wrong words cost the book a lot of points! I'm almost halfway through reading it, and I wanted to vote for a monthly vote to encourage it, but after thinking about it, I decided not to. I'll vote again when the author can correct the two points above! !

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I won't mention some common sense errors. There are so many typos. I thought it would be difficult for a novice, so I can tolerate it. But I looked through the recent comment area and found that the author is still like this after hundreds of chapters. I was surprised. Is there anyone who still pays to read this kind of writing attitude? After reading so many books at Qidian for so many years, this author is the best! Since the author doesn't respect the readers, there is no need for me to make a fuss here, so I give it up decisively...

There are typos, too many words, too few words, and unclear sentences. There are some chapters, some paragraphs, and some lines. I really have enough. There's nothing I can say about the free chapters. You have paid for a chapter subscription, but do you still have some basic literacy? Can I take a snack after paying for the chapter?

Tsk tsk tsk... Li He's "Fifth of the Thirteen Poems of Nanyuan"... Why don't men bring Wu hooks and collect the fifty states in Guanshan? Please come to Lingyan Pavilion for a while. If you are a scholar and a marquis of ten thousand households? ……Author, do you know the meaning of the poem? ? ? Were you forced to stand on the playground in Chinese class? ? ? ?

After reading eighty chapters, let me briefly explain 1:) You need to know the whole article 2:) There are a lot of typos 3:) I forcefully awkward verses 4:) I don't understand the meaning of the words and use them randomly 5:) Well, the imagination is still okay, it's not very discouraging... Right?

The idea of ​​the book is good. I have read it in a Naruto fanfic before, and it seems more attractive when used to write about historical themes. But this should be the only advantage of this book. The rest of it looks like it was written by a junior high school student. The historical data is inaccurate and the wording is inappropriate. Of course, this is an online novel and it doesn't have to be so demanding. But what the hell are the sick sentences everywhere? There are some sentences that even a junior high school student who is a little better at Chinese would not make. This is really unbearable. A good idea is ruined by an author with no background. How can you write a historical article without a reserve of knowledge? Wouldn't the idea of ​​living longer and younger apply to other themes as well? You can make up the fantasy city however you want. Usually when I encounter this kind of poisonous weed, I just delete it and stop reading it. But I really feel sorry for this idea. So I won't be happy if I don't vomit here.

After reading the introduction, I have a question. Does living younger and younger refer to mentality or age? If it's about mentality, that's fine, but if it's about age, then this book will look tired. Because if it is this kind of routine, then the book will most likely become a stallion novel.

This book is my second good historical time travel book after Tang Zhuan that is fully subscribed and fully voted for every month. It is the best among the best. I hope that the author will not be like the humble sect who only has a good book and then disappears! The second book is unbearable

There are so many typos, and the sentences are not fluent. The word "know" is repeated repeatedly to show off. Sentences that can be expressed well by knowing this word suddenly become obscure and difficult to understand. It looks like the author's self-portrait.

The creativity of this book is okay, but the writing is too poor. There are endless errors in sentences and typos. At the same time, various common sense errors also keep appearing. I can't read it anymore and it slipped away.

Do you know Baidu and Xinhua Dictionary?

I want to see foodies curing the locust plague. As a big foodie in my dynasty, how can I not come to feed the locusts? As I was eating, I suddenly realized that there was not enough food to cause a locust famine! 😁

Predicted ending of the novel: In the 23rd year of Zhenguan, Li Shimin became increasingly obsessed with the way of immortality. Seeing that An Xuan Gong could have children even after he was over a hundred years old, he doubted the immortal and asked for immortal magic. Emperor Gaozong couldn't bear this human tragedy and deleted his history, so future generations never heard of An Xuan Gong.

I've read a little bit, and I'll finish the free chapter later. Can I tell you some of my opinions? The first is the difference between names and characters. Let's take Du Ruhui as an example. His surname is Du, his given name is Ruhui and his courtesy name is Keming. As he calls himself, he cannot call himself "Keming", he must call himself "Ruhui". When others call him, he is called "Keming". Regarding this, you can learn something about it from the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Liu Bei calls himself "Bei", Cao Cao calls him "Xuande", and there are many more. If you are really unclear, you can use personal pronouns like you, me and him instead of non-literary ones, and the result will be half-literary. The second is humility and respect. Use "Father" as an example. Someone came to my place as a guest and asked: "Li Yinshu, how is your father's health?" I can answer: "My father is in good health." Changed into pretentious words: "Li Yinshu, how is your father's health?" The answer is, "My father is fine." But he wanted to ask "How is my father's health?" This became him asking me how his father's health was. How do I know how his father is doing? Also, ancient China, including the Tang Dynasty, was an agricultural country. At the beginning of spring, the emperor had to personally cultivate the fields. One of the official achievements was to "encourage teaching to cultivate mulberry trees." Therefore, it is said that the prince is a peasant, and before the officials can congratulate the emperor, they go to impeach the prince for his peasants, and that person is actually Wei Zheng! Although it is an online article, everyone just wants to be happy and lively, but this... I don't have to make a point, but you should also follow the Basic Law when writing novels!

Can the old man pretend to be a big dick and beat up Li Er with a set of bastard punches with his backhand?

This is the most useless system and... Protagonist I have ever seen since reading a book! You've been on a mission for sixty years and you still can't have sex, yet you endure it. Let's call him a great Confucian. He hasn't even copied a thousand-character essay or a three-character classic. He has accomplished nothing except studying food! Oh, in addition to raising a queen, practicing a good calligraphy song and giving concerts gave birth to a few so-called high-ranking students! Sixty years later, I remembered to invent a plow and steal a few poems! He has no skills in literature, no martial arts, no medicine, no Taoism, no increase in food production, no invention of gunpowder, glass cement soap, salt, sugar and steel, petroleum and coal, knitting machines, cotton, potatoes, corn, sweet potato hybrid rice... He learned a set of radio gymnastics, and he actually wants to be called a saint by it!

You all like to change the fate of Changsun Wugu's children, but you just don't help Li Chengqian. Just like the author said about Li Tai, Li Chengqian's character has not deteriorated at all. They are all your grandchildren and are treated differently. And Li Chengqian is still capable in history. Why does his character change? It was because of his legs that Li Shimin thought he did not have the image of an emperor. Why Li Zhi became emperor was not because of his ability. Because Li Shimin had no other choice. Look at Li Zhi and Li Ke died when Li Zhi came to power. Li Shimin's sons did not end well. Li Shimin himself got it by rebelling. The throne of Li Zhi was basically promoted. The rule of Yonghui was based on the rule of Zhenguan. Look at Wu Zetian and those who came after them as long as they had ambitions to play with power. After Li Shimin, the Tang Dynasty was a history of various rebellions. In the early stage, the military was strong. It is undeniable that in the later stage, the foundation He is a scumbag. Can anyone compare the Tang Dynasty with the Ming Dynasty and the Han Dynasty? Li Shimin played with his brother's wife. Li Zhi played with his father's little wife. Li Longji played with his son's wife. Li Zhi's wife played with all kinds of men. Haha, Li Shimin made a good start. The people behind him must learn from it.

Seeing a man in his 80s, the author also arranged for a female protagonist, one of whom is a teenager and the other is still an apprentice. It can only be said to be abnormal.

If you start with a sixty-year-old man, don't look for a female protagonist. . .

Huo Qubing was impulsive when he shot Li Gan, but what about Li Guanggong avenging himself and killing Ba Lingwei? ? Li Guang had already violated the regulations, but Ba Lingwei was just enforcing the law impartially, and he still resented Li Guang for this trivial matter, and finally wanted the person to be killed by his own hands. An Xuan Gong looked down on Huo Qubing's impulsiveness (not to mention that it was Li Gan who clashed with Wei Qing first) but instead praised Li Guang's narrow-mindedness and awesomeness.

Is this the father-in-law? This is brother-in-law! "You marry my daughter, and I will marry your sister!" A man in his sixties or seventies marries a girl in her twenties, which is almost like a sage and an old pervert. The author must be very fond of Zhu Xi, right? The fun of developing it should be great, right? Raise a little girl at the age of forty, and you can have sex when you are sixty 👍 The author is quite powerful, and he actually likes this tone. Anyway, I would never have thought of falling in love with my grandfather 👍 Based on my own experience, I advise everyone to be careful when reading the article, and it is best not to book it all easily, because if you are not careful, you will step on the head of the lazy sheep, give up the loss, and be angry_

The author didn't choose the right topic, and the overall idea is good, but the historical article is very detail-oriented. Consistent mistakes can be found in ten articles, which proves that the author knows very little about historical details. There are many such errors. Li Chengqin was not lame from the beginning. Many big guys know the details better than me. You can read book reviews. Here's the point. Doesn't the author read book reviews? There are many details that you can just come back and correct when you have time. It's not that you are asked to change the outline or the plot, but just the details, so that people who watch it later will feel much more comfortable, and more people will watch it. In contrast, you are making a lot of mistakes now, and there are a lot of people trying to persuade you to quit. If you don't pounce, who will? A good hand of cards will be messed up. Such a good idea and subject matter will be defeated by the details. Now The bosses from the History Channel still write wrong details, but they always correct them later. If you read it too late, you won't even see the original mistakes. It's hundreds of chapters like yours, and the mistakes in the first twenty chapters are still there, which proves that there is no intention to change them. So I am posting a long review to remind you that I am very optimistic about this book. I just need you to pay more attention to the details and don't take it for granted. History is sometimes harder than you think.

There are so many things to know and need to know in each chapter, which makes it very uncomfortable to read. Readers all have their own basic understanding ability, so there is really no need to write a paragraph of explanation. The sentence is really too wordy.

I can't understand anymore, and my tone is not fluent. Now there are only three things in my mind - you need to know (Shen Nong's personal test: don't look carefully, otherwise you won't be able to bear it)