Avenue Cleanup Plan

After reading novels for so many years, you are the second book I have read with the table of contents written like this. Moreover, there are a lot of poems in the chapters. I don't know whether I made them up or copied them. Five percent of the whole text is composed of poems. The main reason is that it doesn't make sense. I rarely disparage the novels I have read. Even if I can't stand it anymore, I just change it. The framework of your novel is good, but there are too many poems. I hope the author can make some changes.

This book is really good. I have been reading it for a few years and there are very few books like this. I hope the author will not collapse later and write better and better. P. S. When will the third volume start? I am already looking forward to the fourth volume.

The writing style is very good, the plot is good, and it is a pretty good book. If it were me a year ago, I would have held this book in my arms from morning till night, staring at the author's anus, and poked it after reading a chapter. However, when I look at it now, I feel that it is not compatible with me. As for opinions, I won't mention them. The thinking circuits are a bit different. I have read a lot of cognitive streams in the past year. As long as you see the rules of the world, the will of the world, etc., You feel that there is an old coin behind it... So I won't complain too much. Come on, author.

After reading it for a few days, the overall storyline is pretty good in each chapter, but I feel like it doesn't leave much foreshadowing, the baggage is thrown away, and there are few pitfalls. I feel that it will be difficult to connect the previous chapters in the later stage, which will probably lose a lot of fun, but it is still very interesting. Come on, author

The author responded to the book review, and I saw it. It is really amazing 👍👍👍

The author is rich in connotations. Every word or two in the article made me stunned for a while. It was also very powerful to deliberately write the first four pictures to drive away countless readers. Fortunately, this book was recommended by others and made me endure the first few pictures. Otherwise, I would have missed the chance.

"Dear, if your mother and I fell into the water at the same time, who would you save first?" "I'm sorry, your question is seriously inconsistent with the values of human civilization. It is an attempt to disturb the husband's correct subjective judgment by using the mother's safety. This has constituted serious hidden social harm and disrespect for women. Please remember that mothers are sacred. Now according to the safety committee regulations, I refuse to answer this question, and your name will be written on the shooting list next month. Thank you for your cooperation."

I feel like what the author wrote is very real, but a little too otherworldly. The protagonist is a bit impure, he should be a bit unpretentious and should have various aspects of life, incarnate into all things. Moreover, I think the relationship between the ideal set by the author and the reality is a bit strange, a bit far-fetched, and to put it ugly, extremely biased. It is said that all living beings are equal. I don't know what kind of universe this is. Is it a pure ancient Chinese mythological universe? I think it should be more dimensional, with lots of avenues and lots of names. See if the author has such writing power. After all, if you write well, you will improve your quality; if you write poorly, you will become a bad person. ......... One more thing, isn't that what the Great Way is? It's natural for the universe to develop and the universe to perish!

I forgot a sentence I read in that book, Immortality is precious, but there is no way to measure people. To be honest, this sentence expresses the immortality in my mind. Those who kill people to seize treasures, and use people to make elixirs are really filled with evil spirits, and there is no flavor of immortality at all.

In the second world, I feel that the so-called enlightenment is still respected by the strong who have changed their shell. What the Taiping Sect is doing now feels no different from what it is doing in martial arts, it's just that the Taiping Sect has put on a good-looking appearance. Compared with the first world, I feel that everything is different. The Taiping Sect, like martial arts, only uses force to force change.

Why is it that when the protagonist meets a monk, all of them are female? Although I know that there are nuns and female monks, but you have so many worlds, you are a bit outrageous, right?

Thanks, for a novel that at least understands Taoism and Taoism, Dashan

Maybe it was some coincidence in the past, or maybe it was something I didn't pay attention to. Looking back, I already have a yearning for Tao. In my free time, I would explore the implications of Taoism from time to time. Over the past few years, I have been able to observe and read extensively, search extensively and think about it, and enjoy it. In my spare time, I read a few chapters of the novel, but I found that the plots that I have recounted are unattractive, and the straightforward works are even more vulgar and boring. I only selected some articles with advanced ideas to add to my imagination. I recently came across the author's article, which is indeed a rare masterpiece. As mentioned before, the idea itself is very good. As far as my personal experience is concerned, it is in line with some Taoist ideas. When it comes to writing style, most of the time it can be said to be smooth but not deliberate, sincere but not limited to refinement. The poems and essays often mention Taoist vocabulary. If readers have dabbled in it, they will surely be impressed. What is written is a masterpiece. But I'm just afraid of being high and low. Although there are three thousand ways, there is no distinction between superior and inferior. I'm afraid that the high is in a dangerous place and no one cares about it. I don't have much money right now, so I have to subscribe. I hope that the author can be consistent and leave a good story that will be passed down to many people in this vast world of novels. Speaking of which, if it were another novel, I might use my bit of classical Chinese skills to write a simple classical Chinese to praise it. It's just that with such skill as Mr. Sir, I don't dare to make any comments without being ridiculed. In fact, as a young man, even though he is surrounded by motorcycles and high-rise buildings, and the society is dominated by materialism, his pursuit of Tao in his heart has become increasingly clear and firm. Sometimes I feel a pity that others are so far away, but when I think about the endless road, it is difficult to understand the truth. "Prosperity" and "hiddenness" are both part of her, and they naturally have their own reasons, so my heart is broad and clear. Alas, it's just that my parents' expectations are carried on my body. It's really hard to repay the kindness in this life, so I don't dare to leave it and seek immortality. Even so, if I understand the meaning of Tao clearly, I won't be bothered by most of the utilitarian benefits. However, I had no choice but to do what my parents wanted, but even if I got it, I would never be happy. I should fulfill my parents' wishes and fulfill my filial piety. What's more, even if I don't go to the mountains and rivers, I believe that as long as my heart is sincere and strong, I will face the judgment of going there one day, and it can also determine a fate for me in the next life. There's no logic to this, I hope you won't be offended Now I have no choice but to live up to the expectations of the public and enter the world of materialistic desires. When I come back one day, I hope that works like this will remain the same as the fairy spirit!

If I hadn't seen it later, I would have thought the protagonist was a 250-year-old

Good things are like water. All things live on him but do not delay. He achieves all things but does not take credit. He nourishes all things but does not respect him. In fact, Taoism is a science among sciences. Taoism is to find the origin of the world. In the Tao Te Ching, the author tells a theory of the formation of the world. We call it Tao before all things exist, and the source of the formation of all things is called 1. With 1, 2 will appear. 2 Is defined as two poles, which are opposite sides. For example, heaven and earth are yin and yang, and if there is 2, there must be 3. Everything will move forward. Progress is what we call time. The emergence of all things requires space, which is called space. Simply put, those who have read Darwin's (Purification Theory) know that there are similarities between thoughts and the Tao Te Ching. Tao is to seek the origin of all things and seek truth, which is called the science of science. Taoism has never said that you can become an immortal, but later many people are not smart enough and misinterpret Tao. If you really like Tao, you can slowly understand it. Taoist thought will at least improve your understanding of the world and increase your wisdom.

The author's first world has a very fairy-like artistic conception, which makes people know what immortality and Tao are, and the explanation is very clear. But in the second world, there is a feeling of suddenly falling from immortality to mortal world. There is an indescribable awkwardness, as if there is an extra hint of fireworks. The overall look is a bit chaotic and not refined, so it looks a bit messy when you recognize people. I hope the author can write better in the future. I believe the author can finally become a god with one book.

Nowadays, there are very few poems in novels that are not embarrassing. The author of this book likes to write, many of them are original, and the writing is quite good. The most important thing is to fit the plot. It's not like some authors who can't copy poems well and make them up randomly that don't fit the situation. . Although this book is not a cool article that is popular nowadays, it is a rare and wonderful article. Please give it a thumbs up.

It's really well written. I send you the recommendation vote with all my heart.

It feels like every supporting character is a protagonist and could write a book

This is the first time I have seen such a pure fairy tale novel, and I really like it. It's a pity that there are too few updates and they are short and weak.

After reading seven chapters, I was persuaded to quit. I had no idea what to say

What a world where the smell of meat is everywhere, and the dog Ruyi is actually the leading actor! ! !

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No wonder this novel is not popular. I read this novel to seek abuse. They are childhood sweethearts, and their thoughts are so vicious. The story is so well-written. Tsk, tsk, tsk, disgusting.

What's the height of the protagonist? Don't you think 1.9 Meters is too tall?

This book is well written, but if you want it to be better, you have to put aside distracting thoughts and treat everything equally.

One of the "Five Ancestors of the Southern Sect" Ziqingming Taoist Bai Yuchan, whose original name was Ge Changgeng, had the courtesy names of Baosou, Ruhui, Yiyue, and Zhongfu, and his nicknames were Haiqiongzi, Haichan, Yunwaizi, Qiongshan Taoist, Hainan Weng, and Wuyi Weng. He was known as Mr. Ziqing in the world. In the Northern Song Dynasty, Qiong Guan appeased the people of Wuyuan Duxianwushang Village, Qiongshan County (now Diandu Village, Shishan Town, Qiongshan County, Hainan Province).

I feel that after the rectification, the entire starting point is lifeless, only the official Dot Circle and some hot Dot Circles are still popular.

Can you see it? Haha

Author, you put me, a brainless person, to shame. I can't understand even one of the poems in it. 😂😂😂😂😂( 0 X 0 )