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Actually, I'm not saying how good this book is, but I just want to know why novels with male protagonists often include female protagonists. What does this mean?

There are very few texts about Mingyue in the Qin Dynasty. Why haven't I written them down?

It's so Mary Sue that I can't stand it anymore.

Someone, send the author 'Zhao Lao' to Thailand

Dear author, you have a lot of typos 😵 I suggest you correct them.

I would like to make some small suggestions. It is best not to show too much intelligence in the system. It is best to have a mechanical and rigid feel. Nowadays, high-IQ system elves are not very popular. If the writing is good, then it is okay. The worst thing is that the writing is poor. No matter how good the story is, it will be ruined by this setting.

Update soon, good looking (♥∀♥)

Composition readers, I accept your **!

Can you proofread the typos?😰😰

In fact, at present, I think the most important thing is the invention of Tukang. Let's briefly talk about the functions of Tukang: First, it naturally allows people to survive the severe cold and reduce the loss of body heat in winter and at night. At the same time, it reduces the chance of catching colds and colds Second, reduce the consumption of firewood. There were a lot of firewood in ancient times, but with the earthen kang, two parts of firewood for heating and cooking can be reduced to one part, which reduces the physical exertion of carrying firewood. Thirdly, with a Tukang, chickens can be hatched artificially. In ancient times, if you wanted to hatch chickens, ducks and geese, you would let the poultry hatch on their own, and the yield was not high. With the earth kang, every family can hatch chicks. With meat and eggs, people's physical fitness will be improved. Fourth, Tukang is also a weapon that allows the Han people to develop northward, which is conducive to the Han people taking root in the white mountains and black waters.

The recommendation vote is given to you, come on!