Entertainment Rookie

Can you release some popular classic songs? Don't flatter yourself, and don't regard some of the inexplicably popular songs nowadays as classics, it's so embarrassing!

After so many chapters, the male and female protagonists are still like this, I vomited

It's a bit fake, brother. Even though I'm a singer, I don't dare to create a song in three days. It's still a proposition song. I can only adapt it at most. You're too fake, brother. Ordinary musicians can't even make up the melody of a track in three days.

I have to write a song in three days, and I have to specify a theme. I think everyone is a pornographic person.

The overall writing style is quite smooth, there are not many poisonous points, and there are no suffocating logic problems. It can pass the time. In my opinion, the two most toxic aspects are: 1. It's too watery... A movie plot is watered down by ten... 2. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is too entangled and inexplicable. The original protagonist and the heroine's childhood sweethearts have a two-way secret love. Then why did the male protagonist travel through time and be so passionately in love... Did he really like the female protagonist or was it because of the influence of the original protagonist's feelings? Just lick it hard Finally, let's talk about the heroine. It may be because of the author's creation, but also because I don't particularly like incompetent helpers. Personally, I don't like the heroine very much. The female protagonist is the assistant of the male protagonist, but I saw that the male protagonist did everything and even gave her 5% of the shares. She is obviously a graduate with little experience, but what the author said seems to have compromised her talents... Not to mention the 996 blessing report, at least work hard... I feel that she has been just hanging out and waiting to die, and the male protagonist likes her for no reason.

The most awesome thing this author has done is that it will be released soon. The last 10 chapters were ruined, and I was immediately confused. This is not an original plot. I didn't understand it. I didn't feel like I wanted to order it for the first time...

The author's heart is really big. One movie can be filled with ten chapters before it is put on the shelves... I gave up decisively.

The first part was okay, but the content was a bit boring starting from the remake of "The Longing for Life". Then after the movie came out, it was directly translated into a novel according to the plot of the movie. . . . So many chapters in a row, I'm speechless😓

Dear author, there is actually nothing wrong with your writing style. The writing is very good. However, I personally think that there are many parts of this plot that can be omitted, and there are not enough exciting points, or it is too bland and not exciting. I think your situation now is like a director who has finished shooting a film. There is a lot of material, but there is no editor to cut it for you. You just put the final extended version on the screen. Finally, I really hope that the author can pay attention to the plot rhythm in the next book and not urinate so much. There are too few good novels in this entertainment genre nowadays.

Also, when the protagonist posted a song on K-site, the heroine couldn't tell that it was the voice of her childhood sweetheart. In addition, his voice was famous, and the protagonist's K-site had so many fans that they didn't recognize that it was the voice of a person. None of the authors explained why K-site used a falsetto or something like that. It felt like this was all a bug.

This protagonist always gives me a feeling of being unruly.

Duck: Awkwkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

To be honest, the writing, logic and plot of this book are quite high quality. The poor score may be due to the lack of recommendations. Also, try to solve the plot of the movie within two chapters, otherwise book friends who have watched the movie will not be able to stand your ten-chapter summary. Don't dwell on the past. I'll skip directly to the fifth or sixth chapter about the farmhouse. This isn't considered a novel, but few book friends like this kind of chapter. No other poisonous points were found. Please help the author recommend this book, and you will get a free recommendation ticket. This grade is not worthy of this kind of writing, and the author deserves better.

It's so bland that I feel bored just watching it. It's not that the book is not good, hey…

I saw that about ten chapters after it was released, I accidentally went back in time and space? ? Why does it seem like I'm suddenly back to the past? .

I really want to read entertainment articles these days, and I found a lot of them at Qidian. I have read more than twenty chapters of this article. It's pretty good, nothing poisonous, and not a stallion. The disadvantage is that it is too bland and not very catchy.

Writing about the first meeting like this, Mo Ji: When will the male and female protagonists get together?

This novel is too much like boiling water. That's not to say it's not good, but it's just a bit bland. . .

By the way, the author has clearly copied your songs, so the movie should also be clear about it. What the hell is the movie Youth Party in the article? I've never heard of it.

I've read Chapter 35, and it's okay, a little bland.

One word water, especially after the good song ends

I think the writing is okay Except for the commercial department signing the contract, which is a little bit annoying There is also the feeling that something is wrong How can I put it The first part is very good, but I skipped watching the second part It always feels like it is not what I want to see~ The plot development? Still the writing is not clear enough? Not exciting enough to get people excited? I'm not sure anyway~ Come on~

Come on, author, although I didn't fully subscribe to it, I jumped to see the latest chapter and got a monthly pass 😁. I think you can add a little contrast. The pig's feet don't feel like a rival, and the plot is not intense enough.

Let's see when the male and female protagonists are together! I'm really sorry, I feel like I'm reading a romance novel