Empress of Heaven

All in all, it's pretty good. In a book full of two-dimensional transformations, you have such a fantasy book. Try to write it down

How can I put it this way? I just started to persuade people to quit with my name, and then I went to Rock Kingdom to persuade them to quit once 😅. It felt like I was trying to persuade people to quit throughout the whole process. It was really awesome.

I've only read about 200 chapters, and I hope you won't make promises like taking care of the hawker's family for a lifetime without worries. This is a fantasy novel, not a beautiful world. The protagonist has a very holy, mother, and bitch character. Even if the protagonist's bloody enemies are written, it only makes people feel disharmonious and not a werewolf. Most fantasy novels try to avoid dragging the family with the family. You'd better take the initiative to drag the family with the family. Dozens of chapters are written around a family of small vendors, and the more you read, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist has his own style, but this is a fantasy novel, not a story about life and farming. The skills and elixirs do not highlight their importance and preciousness. The same goes for property. It feels like the protagonist is a resource dealer. He gets whatever he wants without any effort at all. How can you let those who work so hard to grab resources live? The whole book needs to be improved in terms of plot and foreshadowing. If you don't want others to read it, they will either think that your writing is poor or that your word count is too low. Readers who have read a lot of novels can probably see this. I think the only interesting thing is the fantasy setting of a woman transforming into a girl. After all, big novel authors generally have no idea of ​​writing in this area. If you don't like it, don't spray it, thank you. If the author thinks what I said is wrong, he can delete it and treat it as if I didn't say it.

To test the poison, Chapter 28, not recommended to read

Just started watching. This city lord has such a big heart! ! Even if the little beggar suddenly turned into a warrior, he wouldn't be able to remain humble or arrogant under the pressure of the city lord, a warrior! What's more, after the protagonist takes a shower, it's obvious that he comes from a wealthy family! ! You send a person of unknown origin to be your daughter's playmate?

When I saw Nie Nichang being raped, I couldn't stand it anymore.

The author wants to change the title of the book Transformation into a Female Martial Emperor. Everyone is welcome to express their opinions.

After seeing Nie Nichang being raped and decisively abandoning the article, I thought it would be better to write about committing suicide when she was about to be insulted. I had to write about being insulted, being rescued and then committing suicide.

The author is a little out of his mind, and one person's novel is not perfect. Readers, if you have any characters you want to see in this book, please tell me!

To be honest, it's not bad

Another highly poisonous novel, awesome, I was caught off guard and got poisoned again. I read a single novel before which was quite good, with no bloody plot. I thought I could accept the single novel, until I saw this one.

Isn't it good to make the heroine look like a giant, 1.65 Meters tall? To write a woman so tall, a 1.8 Meter woman is really drunk

After reading this book, I miraculously discovered that my brain is gone, hahaha, it's gone, I feel like I'm going to fly, fly~, go away, I'm not sick, I don't take medicine, hahaha, you are all bad people, don't try to trick me into taking medicine!

Can I Beat You? It was about a story where the main character's friend was raped and committed suicide. People were very angry when I read it. I was reading the novel to have fun. You came here to persuade countless people to quit.

I don't know how the protagonist came up with the name. It was either Dugu Yue or Gu Yue. What is Dugu Yue called?

This book is indeed very poisonous: 1. The city lord's mansion was robbed, and Dugu Yue (the protagonist) calmly made elixirs despite being successful in cultivation (it feels like the protagonist wishes the city lord and his family were wiped out 😥) 2. Dugu Yue could have directly charged up the Earth Seal and killed Dewey in seconds, but Que had to waste time, lure him out and then kill him, and also destroy Dewey at once (Dewey did not die here, the protagonist went to fight in the wild again before killing Dewey) 3. After Dugu Yue (the protagonist) killed Dewey, he did not immediately go to save people, but practiced for another day before saving people (I thought that the protagonist did not suffer any injuries when he killed Dewey, so why did he need to return to the spring to replenish his health? It is superfluous) 4. When Dugu Yue (the protagonist) was refining alchemy above, the Alchemist Guild was able to temporarily protect the city owner and his family. I don't know what happened later, but the people from the Alchemist Guild didn't show up at all (I just thought we came together, so why were the people from the Alchemist Guild gone? Disappeared out of thin air? 🤔🤔) 5. After the protagonist killed Dewey, the Wu family did not know that Dewey was dead (as mentioned above, the protagonist killed Dewey after luring him out), so how could they dare to touch someone who was forbidden by Marquis Wu? Attachment: Dewey is the Wuhou who threatens the city lord's palace ps: The protagonist is a typical Tongfenglanglang. After the team wins, he does not push the tower, and returns to the fountain with full health to replenish the status 🤭🤭 Poison point prediction in the following article (I haven't read the following article, it is purely yy) The bandits can't survive (or want to kidnap the protagonist) and attack the protagonist, and then the protagonist kills two Wuhou alone (the protagonist is also a Wuhou at this time) Poison point: Aren't the two Wuhou more powerful than that small town? Why not attack the city directly? And since Wuhou is so powerful, why would he become a bandit? 😥😥

A plot in which a female character is raped is a taboo. There are actually authors writing such plots. Is it because Xian's own popularity is too high? Or do you deliberately release shit to disgust people?

If you don't get poisoned after reading Chapter 28, I respect you for being a man.

Author, what you said in front of you is simply too poisonous. One chapter is missing. Knowing that the city lord was arrested, he calmly went to make elixirs to slap the face of the alchemy guild. Are you really going to save your benefactor? It's better to say that you won't save them 😅

After reading the free chapter, and then reading the table of contents and comments, Reasons for not being popular (personal opinion): There are no supporting characters. The supporting characters are all mute and never speak, so there is no personality. The protagonist is not suitable. Looking at the transformation stories, the protagonist you want is either cute, relaxed, funny, everyday, or this kind of killing and decisive writing, invincible and invincible, suppressing everything, the supporting characters are all heartbroken, but I only see that the protagonist works hard to practice, and then the supporting character blames the protagonist, the protagonist Kill the whole family, and then continue to practice hard, the supporting character will blame the supporting character, the protagonist will kill the whole family, and then become too famous, change the map, the supporting character will criticize the protagonist, the protagonist will kill the whole family, continue to practice hard, the supporting character will criticize the supporting character, the protagonist will continue to kill the whole family, and then After that, I continued to practice hard. During this process, the protagonist did not communicate with the supporting characters, but they had a clear understanding of each other. The supporting characters were all mute. 😅 Tell me, what are the advantages of the transformation novel? What plot do most people who watch the transformation novel watch? Look how beautiful the heroine is? The problem is that not many supporting characters think she is beautiful, nor does she highlight her beauty. A true goddess, even in the prehistoric world, must have a large group of quasi-saints, or even saints' licking dogs. Then a true goddess can easily do whatever she wants every day, and her personal strength is beyond the limit. For such a plot, the writing style should be better, at least The average order is above 4000, ok, it's darker, like the character of the ruthless man who covers the sky. You have to highlight the majesty of the environment and a big scene. There is a terrible turmoil that has been dormant. The protagonist does not need those fancy skills. Just slap him with a slap, and slap it with a delicate hand, and everything will be destroyed. Treat The clown kept yelling, you can't "I'll give you a chance, I'll give you another chance, there's no chance, I'm going to kill you now," isn't it boring? With the power of the world and the disillusionment of the rules, slowly, like a boneless slap, thousands of roars, the imperial power is permeated 😰 This way, it feels like the empress, even if it is weaker, without the thousands of roars and the imperial power is permeated, it is the ultimate of the physical body, no matter whether you are a spiritual weapon, an imperial weapon or a Taoist weapon, it will split with one slap.

Although I turned into a literary person, I even think that the swordswoman is much better than the poor ghost. But I think Gu Nan is ten thousand times stronger than Ling Xue even if she reveals a little bit of temperament. Even that useless white snake Bai Yujun is much stronger than that great emperor.

I gave up after seeing Lian Nishang being raped before, but I didn't expect to read it again today.

Is this a mistake or have I forgotten to finish the book?

Trolls and so on are just a bunch of idle people who write novels based on their own brainpower. Why do you deny other people's achievements and despise other people's bad writing? Why don't you write it yourself? Is it the kind of feeling of superiority that makes you happy by criticizing other people's achievements?

As a fantasy novel, the storyline at least feels less cliche than other fantasy novels, and I feel that the author's writing is also very good. I hope the author can continue to complete it, come on!

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Generally speaking, if you remove those poisonous points, the plot is okay, but the protagonist likes to act too emotionally.

Finally found the transformation article again, I almost had to write it myself 😭