The Infinite Traversal System of Dou Po

I've read a few chapters, extremely poisonous 😅

Why do so many people like to write about random dressing? Can't you finish writing one by one and then wear it?

Brother, I am also an author, but of course I am just a novice. But I took a look at what you wrote, and there are a lot of typos, which may make readers a little disgusted, so I might as well correct them. Also, when writing about the film and television world, I would rather take the time to watch it again than write based on memory, as there will be errors. For example: Coolie Qiang, you wrote "Coolie".

Chapter 2: Inexplicably, the nails are embedded in the flesh? With so much anger, how could Xiao Huohuo be so confused? Just after saying that you should be patient at the beginning, you are forced to follow the pig's feet template later. When you meet a woman, you must lick you, or else she looks down on you? ?

I'll kick your stool over with my kick.

The protagonist didn't even say goodbye to his parents when he went out for training, and said he didn't have a deep relationship with them. What would the protagonist's parents think if he did this? It can be seen from this that the protagonist is a very indifferent person. Also, do you have any misunderstandings about the butterfly effect? I guess you don't even understand what the butterfly effect is, so you just wrote it like this. Always use butterfly effect to explain randomly.

After reading the first chapter, a strong smell of stallion came to my face, and the identification of stallion was completed.

The author persuaded me to quit in the second chapter. It was so scary and the mentality of a loser was turbulent. Although I am a loser, I don't even have moral standards. It's really uncomfortable to see.

To be honest, if the time travel was after growing up, Xiao Xun'er wouldn't want it... Except for Zhuqing, there is no sense of existence (after Zhuqing is destroyed, will it still be Xiao Xun'er?)

I suggest you delete the part about watching the movie, and don't use stallion. Love is popular now, not sex.

It's embarrassing to watch. . Sorry

It's so damn poisonous, and it doesn't feel any better at the beginning. The protagonist has a halo of wisdom, and he is also Xiao Xun'er's licking dog. Why did I just talk about the front? Because I haven't read the rest, I can't stand it anymore. If you think you have enough poison resistance, check it out. (Personal opinion, please don't comment)

I don't know what you're writing about. It's obviously Dou Po, but now you're writing about mythology. The protagonist is of no use, and he can't get anything useful in the mythical plane. I don't understand the author.

Write more about Dou Po... Basically all of them are writing about other worlds.

If you want to accept Xiao Xun'er, don't write about being touched by Xiao Yan. It feels really weird.

I finally got to Chapter 70, but I still can't hold on.

I just read other people's novels, and I found that I actually have quite a conscience. I used the same font to read other people's novels. Each chapter only has 9 pages, but mine does have more than a dozen pages. I write about 3,000 words in each chapter of the novel, and the others are almost only more than 2,000. This is just my own opinion. If I am wrong... Then I will never change it 😂😂