Pursue the Qing Dynasty and Cultivate Immortality

In fact, when it comes to the Qingchuan female majoring in immortal literature, one of the most powerful girls I have ever seen practiced silently as a maid in the palace. Later, she formed a golden elixir, destroyed the palace, and established a sect on the spot.

The drug test is over, the book is not good, the heroine is a noob, the father is a scumbag, the grandmother is bad, there is also a true love aunt, a time-traveling sister, the heroine's IQ is not online, the training is a mess, the plot is flat, the logic is poor, and it is long-winded.

Speechless =_=, I bought it stupidly, but after reading half of it, I have to say that I was really disgusted. I felt like there was a piece of shit stuck in my throat. It was disgusting to spit it out, but it was even more disgusting not to spit it out. It was very depressing The author, the subject matter is actually very novel, and many parts are very exciting and really written. It makes me want to read it, but you can't write about cultivating immortality like this... I don't know what to say. After reading so many articles about cultivating immortality, this is the only one that I don't know how to complain about... I suggest you read more other articles about cultivating immortality and work hard. Except for the part about cultivating immortality, the writing is good. Come on.

I just want to say that the heroine's golden fingers are so wide open and she lives such a useless life. I'm really speechless. She's so white and holy, but she's still alive...

I have a question. Is the purpose of cultivating immortality just to lower your IQ? For an example, please refer to the heroine of this article.

It's better for me to wear it, the heroine's intelligence really worries her

I am a cultivator, I live as long as the sky, and my magic power is boundless, so all the princes and emperors dote on me, I listen to the emperor, and I give birth to children for the princes and emperors... This logic does not work at all. Immortal cultivators and mortals are just like elephants and ants, pursuing completely different things.

The heroine is a bit too virginal and not suitable for me. I think the common sense of the heroine is a little too weak. Everyone knows that she is not her sister, and they have never gotten along with each other, so she actually feels sorry for her? ! ! 🤔🤔I accept that I can't 😠😠

Can't the author write about the palace battles well? The heroine's IQ is like that of a primary school student, and cultivating immortals has not helped the heroine improve her IQ. You can imagine how stiff her head is.

How good can it be to see an article that pushes people to death without having to take any responsibility?

Chapter 30: Can any book friend help me check, what is the cause of motion sickness? As a monk who has attained the Great Perfection of Foundation Establishment and is about to form an elixir, will he still get motion sickness while riding in a carriage?

Even Yuanying is trash in romance novels and even ordinary people can't handle it and have to plot and plot.

The subject matter is good and the author has a good idea, but the writing is not good, the storyline is not good, the character setting is not good, the heroine's IQ is not enough, so the IQ of the supporting characters can only be lower to set off her. There are too many bloody plots, too much nonsense, forced to pretend... When you should pretend, you should drop the chain, be aloof and detached, but you have to pretend..., Either pretend... To the end, or watch the drama seriously! The author has a lot of room for improvement, and I look forward to your better works.

Your sister is already a cultivator, why don't you rebel?

Such a childish novel, I won't read it anymore

The Immortal City has been built, and it has been struck by thunder, but you still care about a secular emperor! Still an emperor with decentralized powers! Okay, if you don't want to get blood, then you can always use scaring, right? If nothing else works, how about using passive defense to save your family's life? No! Not at all! This heroine taught her brother martial arts skills, but she had to hide them and only use them to slap her in the face. I'm so frustrated! This is not magic! Once again, the author has a misunderstanding about "Qingchuan"...

I really want to complain. But he was speechless.

The plot of the story is protracted and the characters are not clear-cut. The character setting seemed to be good, but the writing was a bit broken.

If you wear it clean and don't rebel, your chrysanthemum will be loved by thousands of people. Nongy

After reading so many chapters, I feel that Kangxi's IQ is very low, and I can't stand it anymore. It's like a fairy tale wrapped in the shell of a clear-cut novel. Although it doesn't suit my personal taste, I still hope the author will continue to work hard.

As a cultivator, since he does not rebel, thousands of people will stab him 🤫

I came here with "The Days of Qingchuang".

The heroine's low IQ is probably inherited from her weak and bullying mother. . . .

I have never read such a poisonous novel. The more I read it, the more angry I became. It was even more poisonous than Xiaobai, so I gave it up decisively.

It's tasteless😅Throw it away

I came here with "The Day of Purification" and wish you to become a god soon.