Reincarnation Scavenger

The overall writing style is good, but the details of the plot are a bit wrong. After all, not everyone has watched the anime, so I will give you a little introduction to the plot, even if you use joking words to summarize the plot, for example, Demi-Gods and Dragons can be summarized like this: Introductions such as Where Are Dad? And I wish all lovers in the world will eventually become brothers and sisters. Overall, it will be much better. I participated in the plot as soon as I entered and I, who have never watched most anime, was quite confused. In order to set off the protagonist, some prominent plot characters can also be introduced for everyone. For example, if I like a certain character, the author also puts this person Write it out and introduce it. I will also agree with this paragraph. It is very useful for the development of the book. The reincarnation space. The tasks are not very important and clear, making it difficult for people to understand the main tasks. When killing the task targets, there is no need to always display the number of tasks and the number of targets. It is recommended to write a repeated paragraph and skip it. The following quantities can be described in fractions. , There are too many... In the book, which is not suitable for the strict reincarnation style. There is no need to write too much about the supporting characters, and not many people care about the supporting characters. Just write down a few prominent characters and organizations. After all, there are too many names to write down, and there are too many readers to remember. The word "please" appears a bit too much, and the chess pieces should not use the word "please". Continuous statements about powerful relationships and so on are in line with the identity of the reincarnation space. Although the cruelty of reincarnation is necessary, as a protagonist, there are too few exciting plots. The protagonist who is not written is powerful, and it is not very suitable for readers to grind and upgrade. After all, infinite horror has been out for so long, be more innovative, reincarnation is a good subject, the author should work hard

It's so miserable, the book review section is so empty

Is He Zhe's defense power approximately the same in reality?

This book does not have such a tense sense of conflict and can relieve people's stress. It is a good book.

The monthly vote has been cast, and the writing by the author JOJO is okay

Author, after finishing this book, should you consider writing a Wuji comprehensive comic? I really want to read it. Does Qidian have any good Chinese comics to recommend?

It's too ridiculous to always talk about the percentage of life.

The world the author chose really sucks. Ghouls are notoriously unpopular. JOJO is not suitable for existence as a web text at all. Range is very useful as a power system, second only to the Six Styles.

The protagonist is Yazi who doesn't seem very smart

JOJO can write well, the author is np

Can this new ability be understood like this: if the protagonist is on this side of the street, if he punches the opponent on the other side of the street, he will be hit, and the opponent cannot hit the protagonist. If he activates perspective and the vision of the ultimate creature at the same time, can he reach Lord Geshan?

A somewhat inexplicable start, and the description of the battle is also poor.

I don't even know what you wrote, but the first three pictures are very important.

Only blood and talent can maximize the benefits. Some talents are super abnormal, such as the darling of the world, the son of nature, the son of the elements, time stop, space mastery, evolution, mechanical mastery, the heart of the insect hive, etc.

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There are so few people. It took me a long time to read the JOJO article before I saw a single comment. The place is also empty, with half of the author's posts~

It's well written, but it's too disgusting to reset the world just by killing the protagonist. What's the point of playing it?

I looked at the catalog and JOJO accounted for half of it... I have watched anime...

When you return to the world for the first time, have you used the attribute points that the protagonist obtained? If you don't know when you will encounter a dangerous situation, why should you keep the attribute points?

I don't know about cannibalism, but I've seen children who are very hungry or curious bite their fingers and eat it. My nephew bit off his finger in front of me and cried while looking at it. A large piece of the belly of his finger was bitten off, which scares me even thinking about it (he is only five years old).