The Supreme Heavenly Master Meets Uncle Jiu

Brother author, please don't be a eunuch. . I am so poor that I support you by reading the original version. If you become a eunuch, I will definitely curse you for eating instant noodles without seasoning packets. I will scold you eighteen times a day. . .

Come on, although I think your novel makes the protagonist a little too invincible and his level rises too quickly. It's not easy to continue with it. Just a random monster or a thunderbolt in your palm will disappear? It's too buggy. With this attitude, I think you have nothing to write about. . . But maybe I don't have enough imagination, and I'm really looking forward to your thoughts,,,,, but if my grades are good and there's nothing left to write, I can continue it and switch it to Infinite Stream, Liaozhai, Journey to the West, and Fengshen, and I'll pass it along,,, come on!

The beginning is quite good, but the character of the protagonist and the supporting characters are not clear enough, and the punctuation marks of the dialogues between the characters are not well divided. In general, the sense of introduction is poor. The author should read more and learn from similar works, and revise and revise it. Hope to witness your growth Come on

I just read a book (my junior brother is Uncle Jiu) and I feel like some of the passages he wrote are exactly the same as yours.

It's very well written. I like this opening.

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist levels up too quickly and is a bit too invincible, and there are too many typos.

I really have Uncle Jiu who I can't stop worshiping, Old Master Ren who I can't stop beating, and the protagonist who is like running water!

I just want to say if there can be fewer typos. It's really annoying.

Does the author have a misunderstanding about the power system of I Have a Date with a Zombie? Although there is a lot of chaos from the Pangu clan in it, from the TV series it seems that the power system is not too strong, right? It makes sense that a second-generation zombie can compete with Daluo Jinxian, and the general must at least be a quasi-sage, but any quasi-sage Daluo, even the most basic human immortal, is a world-destroying existence, and the earth will be destroyed with a wave of his hand. However, in the TV series, it seems that the strength is probably that of transcending tribulations or Mahayana. Ma Xiaoling estimates that the Jindan Yuanying is too powerful. After all, this is a small world. It is impossible to come to a top world like the prehistoric world. It is the level of immortals such as Da Luo Quasi Sage. Moreover, my brother has thought about it. Since this TV series involves the Maoshan lineage, how can the power system be so high? There are also various issues such as spiritual energy. The power is extremely unbalanced. If it is based on the author's power system, is it possible to experience GG at most in one world? Personally, I feel that the author should not take too big a step and feel that his strength will collapse. I hope the author will consider it. After all, I still like this novel a lot, but it's so different.

I just read a book of the same type as this one, called "Nine Uncles Open the Yizhuang Opposite Door". Well, it's very good. Come on you guys

Books with titles like "Supreme King" and "The King of Soldiers" are all rubbish novels. You don't need to read them.

Recently, there are many novels written by Uncle Jiu as their teacher. I want to say, why not Mao Xiaofang? After worshiping Mao Xiaofang, you can have long legs, and you can become a strong general and defeat your fate.

I feel like vomiting, so I always give me the name Xiaoyao, Xiaoyao, I feel like vomiting.

There are all typos and the plot is written in a mess.

It looks great and I love it so much, cheers⊙∀⊙!

I feel that it is not easy to write a book, so I ask all book friends to give me your support! If you like it, just watch it; if you don't like it, don't watch it. How simple! It's not easy for everyone who writes. Haha, I'm quite envious of people who can write such beautiful books. They're so awesome! I hope you can write a better book😜😜, come on＾0＾~

The ending was so hasty and disappointing.

Make an advertisement, the most powerful and invincible shopkeeper, the world is flowing, there is no blood

I've seen so many protagonists who like to kill indiscriminately

Reading this novel is not as good as watching the original movie, nothing has changed . To the birdless stuff

Plagiarism shouldn't be so obvious 😅

If you copy someone else's book, at least change it. Some chapters have the same names, the paragraphs are the same (the words have not changed), and in some places the protagonist's name doesn't match up. If you steal someone else's book and use it to make a profit, be careful of others suing you. I'm going to tell that author now that you're done

Did the author make the protagonist too licky? He has a system, his spells are more powerful than Uncle Jiu's, his cultivation level is higher than Uncle Jiu's, and he eagerly sticks to him and begs for nothing to be his junior disciple. He does whatever he is told, just like a grandson. There is another point that is also introduced in the book. It is said that there are more than 100 sects in the three major departments of Maoshan. The protagonist doesn't even know the name of the so-called master, so Uncle Ninth regards you as his own junior brother? None of his fellow apprentices would command like this.

This new world is not pretty at all! Just wait until this world is finished and then read it! Goodbye first

I'm so dizzy, why has it become an infinite time-travel flow?

I came across this book by accident and clicked on it out of nowhere to see how many chapters I could read.

This book is well written, why isn't it updated?

It's so messed up that I can't see through it.

There were so many typos that I had to guess to understand.

There are a lot of typos and Chapters 14 and 15 are a bit confusing.