I Have a Copying Eye

The promised Shuangwen is not good at all. A novice is not a novice. A Shuangwen is not a Shuangwen. The inside and outside are not human. Why do the authors of Qidian make those rich second generations of ancestral families so stupid? I also know a few rich second generations. To be honest, I am just an ordinary person, but I don't I feel that people are arrogant and lazy. On the contrary, they work harder and are more diligent than ordinary people. When encountering problems, they are much calmer than ordinary people. They rarely do anything that they regret when their brains are hot. I suggest you improve your IQ. I saw Chapter 3 I can't stand it anymore. There is no comparison unit for monetary evaluation. The starting point is written so high at the beginning, and the opponent is so strong (so stupid and so brainless). I won't say anything about the writing for fear that someone will criticize me. The logic is all messed up in a small place (the first three pictures have no introduction book. What level does the area belong to? I guess it is similar to a small county.) A thousand-year-old family, yes, a thousand years of cultivation in the world of immortality is nothing. A little maid knows martial arts 666 and can shoot an arrow into the wood for three points. This thousand-year-old family can just ask him to shoot it in? More than once or twice? No guards? Other people's little maids are so powerful, but you don't have a housekeeper? The chicken is so poisonous

I'll give you a recommendation vote and then I'll go.

As a book lover, it is indeed a pleasure to read a good article. I have just finished reading the twelve chapters. Let me tell you about your feelings. The book is acceptable, the sense of the situation is not low, the setting is not bad, and the idea is very good. However, it is not without reason that the book is not good. The plot is not rigorous and can even be described as exaggerated. Qin Mu Ye Fan Ye Xiu Names such as Lin Dong, Xiao Yan, Wang Lin are not unfamiliar to book fans, and they may even be allergic to them. It is not suitable to emphasize that they are confusing to your background. It is easy to lose the sense of substitution. To get others to support you, you have to endure the names of novels that come to mind again and again after reading this book. It is quite alienating. No matter how good your novel is, don't react against it. Challenge the reader's nerves again. When you have your own new idea, it's counterproductive to use the name of the protagonist of someone else's novel to gain popularity. If you put the background on the earth, it will get extra points. I passed by this book three times and read the book reviews before abandoning it. I was very curious when I saw other people's book reviews recommending it. , I read the book again and the results were not satisfactory. The author repeatedly told me about his family and his health in the book review forum. I still feel speechless. I have a really bad impression of the author. No one has borrowed money from readers or even editors. I guess this is the only one. I guess the author hasn't paid it back yet? If your friend complains when he doesn't want to borrow money, that's a problem with the author's own style. You probably all know how he behaves and know that it's normal for him to borrow money. However, others don't owe you anything, and it's not like you need money urgently. You don't have the resources to borrow money at every turn. It's better to be smart and restrained.

Come to plant grass. The introduction seems to be a mindless and cool article. I hope the content is better.

First of all, this is a creation style fantasy in the skin of a fairy. I suggest that the author should do a better job in creating the world. To be honest, this style of writing is untenable at the starting point. Secondly, let's not talk about the writing style. Just looking at the author's description of the dialogue between the characters is really embarrassing. Judging from the introduction, the subject matter is quite good. Goldfinger also makes people want to read it But it still uses the usual routine of fantasy novels I was persuaded to quit after reading one chapter, but I saw the author's misfortune before and read it patiently Give the author some suggestions If you have time to advertise, think more about the plot There is not much to say about the writing. At least it must be consistent with your own writing style And use less words like "laughing and laughing". Don't just "smile and say" when you appear alone. It will look embarrassing The above is a personal opinion. If you don't like it, you can delete it

A lot of things have happened at home since the end of last year, which made me go through hardships and grow a lot. At the worst time, I couldn't even pay the water and electricity bills😅. It happened to be the Chinese New Year, so I was desperate and asked my peers to borrow money, readers and even the editor🥵 (in reality, several of my friends who played together since childhood did not borrow a penny [fn =12], when I was rich, I would treat them to food, drink and fun every day. The supercilious words are so appropriate, so I won't mention these...) What I want to say is that for the past four years, I have been constantly on the streets and eunuchs, and my income is almost zero. In addition, with bad eyesight and various physical diseases, I almost stay at home and eat the old people every day, a waste 😐. Just last night I gave up on myself and felt like I was a burden😐. There is no way, when the whole family is crumbling, when there is little hope of living like a year, all the negative emotions really come flooding in. Forget it if you don't get results when writing a book. I recovered from a severe cervical spondylosis at the beginning of the year 😐. When the onset of the disease occurred, I was completely paralyzed and could not move. In addition, my mother had a car accident 😐 (single-parent family) at the end of last year. It made me deeply understand that I should make a decision about writing a book. But no matter what, this book "Transcendence at a Glance" is completely reborn on the basis of the previous 404 old book. This is a wonderful idea that I have conceived for a long time. Although it has changed its appearance, I still hope to write it down bit by bit and write it completely 😡. After finishing writing, I may start another Science Fiction🤓, the plot is almost conceived, or it may be a fantasy book, or I won't write it at all. Of course, if this book develops and achieves results, I will naturally want to continue writing 😊. After all, I love it and there are countless stories in my mind. But people, especially an adult, often have to bow to reality and not compromise with reality. Just like every meal and every day's living expenses are borrowed from many friends 😅, I am thinking of publishing it in May and paying the royalties back to them (my space is full. All my friends know it, including several large groups in the Internet literary circle, QidianOfficial The word spread among the group. Of course, before that, there were many people who thought I was a liar and a *** 😵...) I have written so much, I just hope that if there are people who like this book, please accompany me on this final journey to the end. Even if there is only one reader, I will be satisfied 😜. ——Qianlou, written at 2019.2.21.11:49

Although I also like to read novels written by Xiaobai, this book does not have too much "cool" content, and is even a bit sadistic, but I can see that the author Dada wrote this book very carefully, and the plots are closely related to each other, which attracted me very much. The character of the protagonist is also very obvious, and I like this book very much. I just read the introduction, and I feel that the rest of the book will be exciting. There are also extraordinary beings, reincarnated beings, etc. Who are not appearing~ I have signed up for automatic subscription. I hope this book will continue to be exciting.

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I found that this author is very serious and replies to almost every comment. He has a very good temper and attitude, which is rare. The writing is okay, there are flaws but they are not fatal (for example, there are flaws in the economy, but I no longer dare to regard this as a major problem at the starting point, after all, it does not affect the theme logic, and it is easy to modify). There are no major problems with the character's IQ (this is my biggest problem). I saw Chapter 8 and will read it later.

I've only read two chapters, and I'll start with the comments. I can understand that the protagonist's father is sick and sells off his property, but what I don't understand is that an official is bullied to this extent by a doctor. The protagonist wants to go to a brothel to save his father. After going to a restaurant and having a good time, could it be that the protagonist's father suddenly got better within two chapters? In the front, he was a filial son who was willing to sell his butt, but in the back, he was like this, a normal person who knows how to do it. Even if he has some superpowers, this superpower has not been found to make money, which feels unreasonable. But the writing is okay

How can I put it, based on my experience as a bookworm for more than 10 years, the writing is good and the details are OK, but it feels like wholesale without its own characteristics. Not very attractive. But it is still a good novel. Anyway, you can see that the author wrote it carefully and not just in vain! Come on! Try to add some personal characteristics, like the muscle style of rolling away, the 25-year-old poor god of cuttlefish, which will make it easier to succeed if it leaves a deep impression on people. Of course, you must keep updating!

The author said that if he doesn't read it after reading 3 chapters, he can be beaten. I wonder if any book friends have the address. .

How can so many people say that this book is awesome?

To put it simply, the author stopped updating intermittently several times, and I didn't really care. Based on your experience of short updates in previous works, everything is reasonable. Now the author's declaration of monthly updates is a disguised end announcement. Of course, this is the same as short updates, and no one will Mind you, I am not spending time typing these scattered words to express my cynicism. I can also frankly admit that I have not read your novel, so I have no right to speak. It is just that your experience can attract people's attention and make people stop for a while. Today's online literature What is the situation like? There is almost no threshold for writers. Even a primary school student who knows a few words can rebel angrily and join the so-called Internet writers. Because the quality is low and the quantity is large, it is not valuable. No one will care whether you go or stay, they only care about you. It only matters whether you succeed or not, so if you don't have the capital to write, it's best to give up, and you can still call yourself a reformer. If you still want to be a writer, float up and down, and stand out among a group of good and bad online articles, what you need to do is to improve yourself, keep reading, lay a foundation for writing, and stop complaining.

The author's advertisement is really cruel. . . I couldn't help but click in and take a look, and then I saw the author's chapter. Oh my god, it almost made me cry. I can only say that people who have dreams and persevere are really amazing. There are also books that I haven't read yet. I also hope that the author won't write those disgusting old cliches when writing, and don't make the villain's IQ look like shit. I really can't stand it. Don't let the story line be confusing and procrastinating. Also, if the author writes a single heroine, I won't say anything. If you write a harem novel, you should shape each heroine well, describe each person's character well, and don't write a mindless harem. I think the reason why many people don't like to read harem nowadays is It's because very few people can write well about harems. Most of them are mindless and write like shit. What man doesn't have a harem dream in his heart? If the author doesn't think it's easy to write, just write a female protagonist honestly, or don't write a female protagonist at all. The most important thing is not to abuse the protagonist, I really can't stand it, especially since I am a very emotional person (I can cry to death even when I read this novel). I think the author can learn from the writing method of Samsara Paradise, that is, the protagonist never joins the group to kill decisively (if the author doesn't want to write about the harem, you can learn from it, the right way to kill girls☆ﾐ(o*･ω･)ﾉ), there is one more thing I can't write anymore.                      Finally, cheers to the author ＾0＾~ I wish this book will become popular as soon as possible Another 1000 reward will be given to Ganba Daddy! ! ! !