Online Game Collection Master

Overall rating 82. Orthodox holographic online game text, with novel setting, interesting plot, clear main line and careful attention to details. Although there are some unsatisfactory aspects, the flaws are not concealed. It is a complete and rigorous novel worth reading. (The important point is that the author still has the manuscript saved) The opening game is a public beta, and you can enter the game directly. There is no irrelevant content, the rhythm is appropriate, and it is entertaining enough. The game setting is novel and the professions are quite satisfactory, but the character setting is relatively innovative, and it feels like a bright spot. At the same time, there are also many unexpected ideas in terms of specific equipment tasks, such as "+15 epic necklace", "high auspicious number rewards", "hatred lock", monster names and skill names, etc. When reading, you will have the feeling of "Hey, this setting is very interesting", I suggest the author to continue to maintain it. The protagonist has a clear goal. He enters the game as a professional player and has a small group. He can exchange information offline and so on. The setting is relatively complete and self-consistent. You can look forward to the subsequent development. The golden finger should be regarded as luck, coupled with a little skill, it will bring good skills and equipment tasks, a normal routine. The overall focus is on data flow and technology flow. All upgrades, equipment, skills and even monster attributes have clear data support. When the protagonist fights the boss, the details will be carefully designed (the author said), and (should) stand up to scrutiny and appear to be very rigorous. The villain is pretty average, just a small boss in the big guild who fights against others, and with the addition of a white lotus, there is generally nothing outstanding about it. At the same time, I think another advantage of this novel is that the author is very sincere. This sincerity includes but is not limited to having a saved manuscript, being able to reply to this chapter, and commenting in the book review area. He often talks about the thoughts he put into writing, the hard work he put into this book, etc. In the writer's remarks. Personally, I think this will attract the most fans. Then it's time to make suggestions. The first is the "la" at the beginning of the article. I also read that some book friends have reported this issue, and the author also said that changes have been made in subsequent chapters, but I still want to express my opinion. "La" looks very cute and cute, but it is still a bit unserious and dramatic when used in a serialization, especially since the overall writing style is not so colloquial. If the author really prefers this word, he may consider putting it in the dialogue. Secondly, I feel that the author's plot for the protagonist to withdraw money is not particularly appropriate. It feels like it is just starting out and everything has not been settled yet. At the same time, I live at home and don't need money urgently. Especially the later plot also involves the protagonist buying a lot of things and being short of money, so if there is no foreshadowing here, it would always feel a bit strange for the protagonist to sell money in such a hurry. Then, the protagonist encounters several hidden tasks in the novel. Most of the time, the author will give an explanation. The main idea is that the triggering conditions of this hidden task are actually very harsh. It is not easy for the protagonist to encounter this hidden task. I personally feel that this kind of content is a bit too frequent at present. It can be written less directly, or it can be included in the author's remarks. At present, it is a bit tired of aesthetics. Finally, I read other people's comments that I could tell the main plot of the novel from the title. I looked at the title, Master of Collection... Why didn't I see what the main plot was, and it wasn't a card game or a special profession? It was a bit embarrassing. Finally, I saw the author interacting with readers about the number of female protagonists, and I would like to share my views. There are several girls in the novel who have a crush on the male protagonist. This is normal. But if the male protagonist is hesitant and hesitant, or half-heartedly wants to open a harem and rushes to the stallion road, it will be a bit poisonous and shocking. I personally don't like this style of painting - of course this is just a personal whim and has nothing to do with the actual situation of the novel, so you can just ignore it.

Since the protagonist is positioned as a player who makes money from games, when he met the heroine for the first time, he gave gold coins to buy equipment and made the gold coins so valuable, which was too hasty. There is no foreshadowing. And it looked like he was the real son of the game. As soon as he saw Huaguo Mountain, he played 3 or 4 artifacts. Although it is a DNF setting, the definition of artifacts cannot be too high-end. It seems that only the protagonist can explode the equipment, and no one else can explode it. It feels like the shortcomings of the equipment have been highlighted, but the characteristics of the protagonist have not been written. There are unexpected encounters at every turn, and I have beaten them all 😤. There are several artifacts and equipment at level 12, including god-level pets and god-level mounts. It feels so uncomfortable to look at them. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it 😊🤫

，，:      I have always emphasized that I am lucky. Whatever equipment you want, the boss will explode it directly, but who knows how rare the equipment you explode is. Without showing off, there is no ranking list. Only you, a few friends and a limited number of people in the team know how awesome you are, and you rarely have contact with outsiders. So maxing out more equipment is no different from entertaining yourself, just like playing solo in a local area network.                                                                    There are only three plots in this book, which is to find a dungeon, spend five or six hours to clear the dungeon, the boss reveals rare equipment, and then repeat these three processes. There may be other plots in the middle, but the total number is probably only a fraction of the number of words in this book. There are too many descriptions of spawning monsters, too many introductions to monsters, and it takes several chapters to write each monster. Even the skills of miscellaneous monsters can take several chapters. It feels like the number of chapters written for each map is similar, and there is no priority.                                                                                                    but in fact, there are some small details written at the beginning, such as mastering the priest's attack skills, setting up a stall to sell, and making friends. It's not like no one is watching the conventional plot, but in the end, you cheat directly, there are teleport props, and potions explode, and the plot jumps too fast. Regarding the heroine, I wrote about the mage girl at the beginning, thinking that there would be expansion. However, a priest girl appeared. After writing a long chapter, she disappeared directly. She was a bit of a licker and left the girl alone. Then the third girl was the priest girl in the girl union. This was the girl who had the most pictures with the protagonist in the middle period. It was the longest, with more than 1,000 chapters. This girl appeared. I thought there would always be expansion. In the end, she became the heroine of the rumor incident and disappeared. In the end, the heroine returned to the priest girl from before. As you can imagine, the space where the first and second female characters appear is completely overwhelmed by the third female lead. In the end, after reading this book, I feel like I opened a new account with a few friends, looked at the guide and swiped through all the maps, and then it was gone. What can be impressive about the protagonist's good luck? The problem is that there are some online games where the main character is unlucky. Even if the equipment doesn't come out once, it only takes a few more times to get it. It only takes one more sentence to write. After reading it, it feels like I am reading a game introduction and a guide introduction. There is no special poisonous point, nor is there any special refreshing point. There may be some refreshing points, but they have long been covered up by the endless chapters of monster spawning.

It is a very novel setting for online games. I am following the updates every day. The author is very strong~ There will be updates from time to time. I will catch up until the end~

Congratulations on the launch! The first order is here! 🤓🤓🤓

After reading Chapter 91, I had a feeling that the author's outline might have originally been about otherworldly fantasy, but later it was changed to an online game for unknown reasons, but the outline remained unchanged. Delete the real-life plot in the novel, and it becomes a perfect fantasy of another world.

To be honest, I'm a little disappointed. You told me at the beginning that it was hard to punch, but you turned me into a Street Fighter. Street Fighter is also fine. As for Capturing Moon Flame, Street Fighter's only skill with the best visual effect.

After seeing the book list and leaving a message, here are my thoughts after finishing the meal: What I like: 1. Cheerful and cheerful: No matter the writing style, characters or NPCs in the game are very lively and cheerful, it is easy and interesting to read. 2. Small setting and small surprise: +15 epic necklace? Do you need 888 to hunt rabbits? In short, there are many things that make you want to shout at the author: I'll let you go! 3. Unpredictable direction: This may be a mixed bag of advantages and disadvantages. Seeing that the latest chapter is still unable to imagine the next direction, I am a little excited, but also a little impatient. What I personally dislike: 1. Self-pleasure: The protagonist is currently very powerful, so powerful that he has no opponents and almost no friends. Chapter 80 is almost a solo show for the protagonist, but it is also clearly stated that in the future it will be a team or a guild. Looking at it, you will feel like, how long do you have to be happy before entering the theme? 2. Too fast and too slow: There are only a bunch of artifacts in the Novice Village, and the protagonist's arming speed is a bit alarming, but it feels like the game is only 2% in progress. How should we strengthen the protagonist in the remaining 98%? It reads like a teenager's triumph... 3. Regarding women: This is really a very personal preference. In this close to real urban background, I don't really like hugging, or being ambiguous. However, there is nothing in this book that offends me so far. Summary: Although there is still some distance between it and the masterpiece, it is worth reading. The book is enjoyable and not depressing. There is no obvious point of dissatisfaction. The updates are stable. The author is very willing to interact with readers. Personally, I will be willing to subscribe if it is published.

Come, come, the gathering that was bombarded by Bai Yinmeng 😁 (The author's recording posts are very inspiring, I have followed the posts for a long time, and I am very impressed)

I heard that the collection of this book has increased a lot in the past two days, but there are no people in the comment area. Brother Gou, I will come here and say a few words 1. In the front of this book, Brother LJ Lanxiang always uses "LA" for "LA". Brother Gou, I almost vomited 😰 2. The plot of this book is reallybloody! Extremelycruel! Brother Dog, Ican't stand it! It's normal that you can't stand it either. Brother Dog, I understand. However, why don't you spit on such a ** book before leaving? 3. As a deputy leader who doesn't read this book, Brother Dog, I welcome you to scold Brother Lanxiang and this book, but please pay attention to your wording and be careful not to be banned by the system! 4. The last option for post classification in the book review area isFuck Lan Xiang!

Judging from the current chapters of this book, there is nothing poisonous about it. The plot and settings look normal. However, it has a problem, that is, it lacks attractions. Nowadays, there are countless online game novels. Why do you want to stand out? The most important thing is that you need to be different from other books and need some unique ideas. But unfortunately, I haven't seen it yet. Except for the language barrier in the previous system, which was a bright spot when it was required to be entered by a real person, the rest seemed to be ordinary. A very familiar routine, starting from the village elder... Giving the protagonist some adventures. The protagonist's parents in the book are a key point. Currently only the mother appears. Could the father be a hidden boss? In fact, the author must handle the protagonist's game and real life well. Otherwise, readers will feel nondescript and abandon the book. Finally, I wish the author will write better and better^_^

It's been almost a year since I finished the book, and I'm still doing this. This wave of starting point is making a lot of money.

I read this book after receiving a tip for a large reward. I found it to be complete and very pleased with it. After reading more than 80 chapters, I really can't help but vomit: You must read this book without thinking, without thinking, without thinking, and saying it three times shows its importance. The writing in this book is fairly fluent, and the plot is uninspiring, so I can't comment on it. The point is, author, you are writing about a game, and Chapter 80 has made you write: someone else is level 3 and you are level 10, you can get gold or god-level equipment casually, a level-1 pet can help you withstand more than 10,000 fatal attacks, and the equipment attributes can double your skill attack... "The whole world is yours, why are you playing a game!" A game written by you is so unbalanced, what else is there to see, just challenge the final boss to complete the book...

Qin Yan's Q-version vertical painting [Officially customized], so handsome! 😍

After reading the first few chapters, you can tell that the author is taking things for granted. How could a player who makes a living by playing equipment and selling them not understand the background information of the game in advance? How could he choose his career randomly?

This is the level that future platinum writers should have. I bet that if this book is not popular, the author of this book will lose ten years of his life, and he will never eat instant noodles without seasoning packets. Put up a sticker to prove it!

I have some clues, maybe some big guys have recharged tens of millions of coins? , And then suddenly didn't want to read the book anymore and wanted to get out of the trap, and then the author took the coins at a 10% or 20% discount.

Author, why are you smashing old books? Why not open a new book and smash a new one?

Do you expect the author to introduce a system of male-male marriage and female-female marriage in the book? 😁

It feels like the gravity of Mars, even bookworms know it

It's a pity that this book didn't have a good name. If it had a good name, it would have done better. Also, it doesn't have a label, which is also a pity.

Does the author not know the existence of express delivery? He still has to queue up at the distribution point to receive the equipment. This kind of writing is probably from the 2000s. I couldn't stand the first chapter.

Go, it's not a game, it's super painful, there's no big loss if you die, and you have to use the best props to resurrect, is it a game or time travel

How can I be famous without being famous just because I know how to play better than others? You are not qualified to be better than others when others have recharged money! What qualifications do you have if you don't make a fool of yourself?

I don't even know if you are writing about online games or fantasy. Are you speechless😓

Very serious, but the sense of substitution is very weak

In an era where virtual online games are so developed, is there such a simple person as Su Yimo? It's terrifying to think about it. Offline PK is always coming. I think the world is very chaotic. It was right not to reveal the protagonist's name at the beginning ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. Joe, oh, a pencil can stab three people to death. This is such an evil existence. There are so many people in this world with awesome abilities. For example, the red house, young soldiers in the war zone, etc. The protagonist can figure out the future step by step, which shows that he is very awesome.

There are many heroines, please don't write about true love!

Occasionally found a good book, add it to the bookshelf, Brother Lan Xiang is mighty 👍

I haven't watched an online game series in many years. They are all fantasy, fantasy, and urban. I got into the trap today and found the excitement I felt when I was a novice reading the article (I had never been exposed to online games before)