A Basketball Mission

I saw the ad for the book list, read a chapter, and would like to give you some suggestions. The author's writing style is passable, but there is one thing: the written language is too colloquial. In many cases, the two still need to be distinguished, and a large number of onomatopoeias are used in conversations, such as "hehe". In reality, we may talk like this, but when it comes to paper, it needs to be condensed, otherwise it will easily cause dyslexia. My personal opinion, please forgive me if I am wrong.

Come on, keep writing, it's so good, why is there no one?

I feel a bit mindless and easily impulsive. . . .