The Best Point Guard in Basketball

After reading about 100 chapters, I feel that there is something wrong with the author's setting. The first protagonist's physical talent test is only a bit worse than Jordan's speed, but the overall score is only B+. Logically speaking, such physical talent and excellent skills should be A. There is also this system. I have never understood the function of this system. What I know so far is that you can purchase props, eagle eyes, physical potions, lottery draws, and virtual training camps, but this system feels useless. This system costs reputation points, but these props cannot be used. It is for the protagonist, and the star card cannot be used for yourself. The Eagle Eye can be used in the whole game for the first time. After the upgrade, it can only be used 4 times in a game. This upgrade is completely weakened in disguise. I finally got a SSS+ skill, the soul of ball control, and used it in the game. In the end, the system will weaken the protagonist's ability by 90%. Who can stand this? Then when we see a SuperSonics game, the system upgrades Payton's ability to SS+ and requires the protagonist to use 10 million reputation points to activate the soul of ball control. Isn't this a skill that has been drawn? , Why do you still need 10 million to open it? Then I might as well use this reputation value to draw a lottery. The lottery is only worth 10,000 reputation points once. This protagonist is probably fake. If I draw it a thousand times, wouldn't it be better if I draw physical talent? These skills are completely useless, it is better to strengthen the body, and the protagonist himself is very talented. After playing for so long, he is A-. To be able to beat Jordan, the Bulls, and O'Neal, the Lakers, he must be at least S+. Otherwise, with the Grizzlies lineup, Jordan can defeat the Grizzlies alone. The author's system is set up because he is afraid that the golden finger will be too large, which will make it difficult to write in the later part of the book. , In fact, the setting of this system was abnormal at the beginning. You can refer to the book "Feng Xing Tian Xia" written by Still Life. The author's golden finger is very good. The system's sense of purity is not very strong, but it is a virtual training golden finger. However, the talent given to the protagonist is James' body template, coupled with virtual training, he directly led the Lakers to win the championship in the second season and defeated Jordan.

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After reading two chapters, I was poisoned and died. How did I get a quadruple-double of 30 points in 40 minutes in the first and second halves of a high school game? When you were in high school, you signed an agent before you were sure about joining the NBA? Harden is written as an orphan? Do you want to be black about Kobe's father?

NBA in the 1990s was my favorite theme. I patiently read 100 chapters and then skipped to read it. First of all, what you wrote about the opening is a bit hard to describe. Why do you have to report every game (how many points in the first game, how many points in the second game, how many points in the third game because of what, fourth, and fifth). There are also too many repetitive points (nonsense), and the whole article feels a bit like a rundown. The plot advancement is also not rounded enough, and the details are handled a bit too casually, such as the host's rating in the first season, retirement in the second season, and some overly interspersed plots. It's not that this doesn't work, but that the way you set the stage is a bit too stiff, too casual, and too abrupt. The second thing I want to say is that this system in general seems to be a poisonous point. There are also various aspects of the plot, players, and other things. Are your subjective traces a bit too big? It's not that you can't have them. If you add a little more, it will be more interesting and the plot will be more rounded. But you are a bit too subjective, too much is not enough. The writing style is still a bit immature, so I can only say that the author please keep working hard. The next book will be set in the 1990s, and the plot details will be handled more rigorously. I will support you again. By the way, be sure to make an outline. You may not necessarily follow the outline exactly, but at least it will be more organized.

It's okay for you to imitate the basketball mode where a rabbit comes to mow the grass, but can you make the plug-in more normal? It's not fun at all and it keeps abusing the main character. I know you don't want to make it so surreal that you can't handle it later. In fact, you might as well write it without plug-ins. Also, regarding basketball, please can you be a little more professional? I can still watch it in the early stage, but I can't watch it at all after it's put on the shelves. 🙏🙏🙏

Hong Kong True, this is the one with the most poisonous points among the basketball novels I have read. I won't talk about the settings. The game data is completely straightforward. Looking at the protagonist again, he really has both style and style. I admire him.

Although the book has been completed, I still want to complain about that (Sloane's Resentment). Can everyone resent the protagonist? **Novel, suppress the protagonist, don't rely on the skills given by the system, haha, then why do you still write system flow?

Why are there two names named Xiao Tian and Qin Tian in the first few chapters?

Now that we have a system and a golden finger, why should we emphasize working hard? It is like a man who moves bricks, giving him the financial and material resources to build a building. But he had to work hard to move bricks and build the building himself.

After reading a few chapters, the villain is completely mentally retarded

Kobe was drafted so low back then and had to train hard in the later stages to become a superstar. Did the author also come up with a system for Kobe? Many players were not on a certain team at the time and were forcibly assigned to that team by the author.

There is no system, and the main character is also a softie. Not good-looking

The girl walked to the goldfish fishing stall: "It depends on fate. If you catch goldfish in just one use, I will consider being your girlfriend." The boss took the boy's ten yuan and took out a stainless steel colander for hot pot from behind: "I have no change, you can use this to fish."

I want to reduce the presence of the system, but now I feel that the presence is not low and it is very annoying. There is still a problem with the logic. There is a 10,000 lottery draw and a 100,000 upgrade. Both have reputation upgrades. Then they told me that they finally saved up for the lottery, and they were very excited. Please correct any typos, brother.

The setting of this book is unreasonable. The main character can achieve S or even S+ level without using the system when most of his skills are B+ and B with a few A. Is this reasonable? You give S+ for organizational ability and S for passing skills. For other shooting, defense, these low points, the overall strength is A and the Hawk Eyes are used to achieve S level. It is reasonable to cooperate with the system to achieve S+ level. Under this setting of the author, especially when a strong team can achieve good results without using the system, the level of defeating a weak team drops. It only shows that the author is not rigorous.

You must win the championship. If something unexpected happens and you don't win, you will give up. There may be twists and turns, but winning is the goal.

Seeing that the protagonist has turned Google into his own industry, why not turn Facebook into the protagonist's company too! There is also the category of smartphones. In 1998, we started building a Facebook company and developing smartphones.

It's meant to be a fun read, as long as the male protagonist feels good about torturing people, it doesn't matter how poisonous he is. .

Write about your mother's Harden and system

Your plundering system makes my balls hurt and my liver hurts too 😭

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