My Spy Career

The whole novel is like a primary school student's composition. It is estimated that the author has not graduated from junior high school. One agent killed three agents, Superman. I really took the KMT agents for fools. I can't go on, this novel has too many holes.

The plot is confusing and the logic is confusing. Can't stand it

I can't stand it anymore, it's almost lowering my IQ!

The invincible Xiao Qiang? Superman? There are so many injuries on your body, one after another. Even if you are cured, the pain can still torture you to death and affect various physical skills. His IQ is worrisome, he never makes fun of his own life, and even plays Mission Impossible.

As an espionage officer, I am full of loopholes. After reading more than 80 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up the trap decisively.

First of all, serious military officers look down on spies, especially those who are ranked high in each period are almost impossible to enter the army. Spies are born and cannot enter the top ranks, and those who are ranked in each period have a high chance of entering the top military ranks. You would say that Dai Li is considered a high-level person, but his life and death depends on Chiang. If he changes to another leader, he will be gone. But other military bosses cannot be moved by you!

It's better to look at Qingteng's "Dark Shadows"

Do you think it's possible? The Secret Service catches Japanese spies, while the Party Affairs Office catches underground parties. The main business of the Secret Service is to fight against Japanese spies. They will only arrest them when they encounter underground parties. Boss Dai will basically not take the initiative to catch underground parties. You have been catching underground parties and ignoring the Japanese. Can the Party Affairs Office next door accept this? There is a problem with your common sense. How dare you write a spy war article?

I have just read over a hundred chapters. It is a very good book. It would have been nice to have less women in it. Is there any need for the dancer Ah Chen to exist? And Huihui? A progressive young woman? It's really useless at all, it's forced to add drama. Spy stories don't need too many female supporting characters, right?

The protagonist is full of loopholes and the plot is too watery

The protagonist's upline was exposed. At this time, the protagonist went to the upline's house to make contact. After the protagonist left, the upline was arrested. The protagonist heard the gunfire and hurried back and entered the house! The protagonist was never exposed from the beginning to the end, and no one monitored him when he was exposed online? The protagonist's comings and goings were not monitored! How can people see such a big loophole!

ThisClick on this post,,,,,

How could I not know that Keiko is Li Huihui?

Can the author not add a "yah" after each paragraph? Can the author see it? He doesn't consider the readers' feelings. What is your reaction after seeing so many? Does it feel comfortable to read? How does it feel to read? Are you deliberately inflating the number of words? Adding commas, adding periods, exclamation points, question marks, etc., What a chicken neck.

First of all, at that time, people, especially classmates, friends, and colleagues of the same level, mostly called each other by cousin names. There were not many names like Xiaobai, Xiaohuang, and Xiaohong. Secondly, can we stop using modal particles? The ending is always like, ah, etc. It makes me so embarrassed that I feel like having cancer. Have you read too many Japanese comics and written a novel about the Republic of China period in that dialogue style? Third, the author has made too many coincidences to make it easier for the protagonist to do things. But you have to know that the saddest thing about spy stories is that there are too many coincidences. You can completely do things through the protagonist's precise calculations, arrangements and planning, so that everything is smooth and true and logical.

At this level, why do you still read spy novels? In 1936, there was no full-scale anti-Japanese war, or was it that marriage was not allowed during the Secret Service period? With this level of knowledge, how dare you come to Qidian to defraud money? Do you think it's an anti-Japanese drama? Can anyone be a screenwriter?

Please improve! 😂😂This is a great book. It feels very exciting and very good. I continue to read the book. I have read it in 3 days. I hope the author can update it soon! Praise! Come on! 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

To be honest, with the protagonist's IQ + recklessness + self-righteousness + wanting to get involved in everything, it is unreasonable for the protagonist to die...

Mr. Bai Ze? It's such an awkward name. I feel like calling it Bai Goudan sounds better than this one. I slipped away.

Really, there is a problem with the logic of this book. This is the first time I have seen a traitor being investigated and given real information. To find out the traitor, you definitely need to investigate them one by one. Plus, if you give us false information, I really doubt that you are the traitor if you give me real information.

There are reasons for such poor grades. Common sense errors and omissions abound, and having an IQ that is not online is even more fatal. Many of them are taken for granted by the author and are not logical at all. Readers who like seriousness will give up if they can't stand it for long. Those who like short stories can still spend some time.

I wrote a lot, but after reading a little bit, I felt it was too childish. That's not how spy stories are written.

I can only say that the writing lines of this book are different. Other espionage books are more in line with the public's taste, but this book's line is more biased. After reading the comparison, it returned to the route that is more popular with the public. Moreover, the protagonist's exciting points may not be in line with the public's taste. I personally think it's quite interesting, but the previous chapters take more time to get through 😁😁

The male protagonist can contact the Japanese by investigating Qi Zhengyi, but he can't contact the Wen family to rescue Li Huihui and that Li Huihui is also Japanese. Is there anything serious about sitting here and writing like this?

After reading two chapters, I was persuaded to quit. Too much inner drama

I can't stand watching the fun anymore. It's so stupid. I can't stop doing it. Yeah, yeah. Nm.

It's disabled at the beginning, and it can end in 3 chapters.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has more joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

I like to pronounce it so much, what a modal particle