The Witch Must Be Restrained

A typical bad eunuch. . The holes are not fixed. .

Xiaobao, your style of writing is modern and you will cross the line if you are not careful! Ancient times can also be used to satirize the present! How is this done...

Support, post a post to increase the popularity of the new book!

If your book hits the market, even if I invest in it, I will write the next book well!

This is so imaginative that it made me foam at the mouth in the toilet

The big devil is so rich and ready to stud? Expect

I came out a little early, I thought I was going to make a fool of myself with my brothers and sisters. This is a work about beating up elites with a string of eight punches. . .

I'm writing a new book, and I realized that this time it's an urban one! 😁

I didn't slander this book, and I voted for it every day. They actually deleted my post. It was not as well written as the previous two books. It's so embarrassing. . .

The character creation is very successful, but your character, whether the protagonist or the supporting role, exudes a strong aura of disgust. I want to grab the collar and slap you hard in the mouth! Maybe this is the reason why your book is not popular!

Keep the revised style and write interesting stories, that's all. Keep this book popular, and I still recommend it! ! ! Well, come on, Xiaobao, it's a bit interesting.

You can't give a good introduction. Such an introduction will dissuade many people.

The report is coming😁😁😁

Is this witch talking about Wang Xiaoai? Tsk tsk, a little lolita under ten years old!

I'm not used to it. Xiaobao, you're still suitable for writing plots about political struggles. No matter how you look at it, it's a bit confusing. Let's see if you can express the feeling later. If not, I'll abandon the book.

I said, can you stop interspersing some pretentious plots from time to time? Can you just accept it regardless of whether it's good or bad and it's a female? Are you a fully automatic garbage cleaning and recycling device? Are there people who read your book who want to read this kind of cool novel from five years ago?

Two recommendations a day, essential

The first is typos. There are so many typos that it affects the reading experience. Sometimes I don't even understand what they mean. The second is that the characters who appear are not evenly distributed. Sometimes there are only two or three, sometimes close to ten. It is easy to confuse the relationship between the characters. The writing is actually quite interesting, with a sense of intangible pretense like Bones, but I don't quite understand why the original protagonist is so wretched... I'm a bit concerned about this.

Are you done with all the pitfalls before you fill them in? I stayed up all night and read the whole book and then you sue me and it's over? Brother, you have gone too far. At least fill in all the holes.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that it ended after just one hit.

I've been raising it for so long that I'm going to die...

Damn it, it's over before I even started watching it. To put it in Jianghu terms: I have taken off my pants, and you want me to see this?

The characters follow the outline, and the plot follows the characters. This is my advice. Don't lose your character for the plot

Xiaobao is not very good at collecting this book! The characters are a bit confusing, and there are no connecting clues.

I really want to complain about you┐('～`;)┌

After reading it, there are many changes,,,, this is a warning, what the hell?

I feel like the writing is messy and I can't understand it. Hey, but I just want to read it. I'm such a bitch...

It's a bit interesting. If the protagonist's name is nicer and the author's writing style is clearer, I feel that this book will be very good. Keep it in its original state after revision, and don't make urban writing too trivial! ! ! As for the little loli in the front, I had already thought about developing a loli, but after time travel, the loli disappeared, which was a bit bad!

Actually, you don't have to write your name every time, it looks a bit annoying.

Well, the little loli comes out in Chapter 5. I hope the loli will develop into a good girl, even though she is a bit evil. But it's not good to leave such a cute loli to someone else