The Lost Treasure of Traveling with the Sword

The author's writing style is excellent, and the writing has the unique beauty of classic martial arts. The scene switching is crisp and clear, and the narrative rhythm is quick and clear, which is quite Tsui Hark's taste. There are not many areas for improvement, mainly for the sense of reading. For example, in the first chapter, when the heroes enter the inn, it is better to show it step by step. The details can be as specific as the water on the eaves, the wine in the bowl, the low-hanging bamboo hat and the snow-white knife. Since there are a lot of fights in this chapter, it looks even better when broken down. You can watch the inn in Zhang Yimou's movie. In addition, the part in Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon is also a classic. There are also details that have been optimized, such as the villain talking more, his men having more expressions, no need to explain when exiting, and the killer not showing murderous intent. These details are made more perfect, and the scene switching and rhythm of this article will have a grand atmosphere. Mutual fans of my humble work "No More Regrets YF" ~

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The opening chapter is great, but why isn't it popular? Isn't it unbearable?

This work mainly tells the story of a young man who graduated from school, met a group of friends by chance, and went on an adventure together after being involved in a turmoil in the world. It may be a bit slow in the early stage, but as the plot develops, it will gradually become more exciting. I hope all readers will express their opinions and comments!

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After reading part of it, the writing is okay, the writing is smooth, and the plot is average. It is not enough to render a traditional martial arts plot. It is not as exciting as a web article. But it is better than more than 80% of the writers on Qidian. Com Come on, give you a thumbs up By the way, your name will not attract readers, any type of readers.