The Lord of Light of Super Seminary

I'm a novice, I don't mind reading junk articles.

Hello everyone, let's play a game: we create a little girl who grows one year older on each floor and tells a story at each age, with no upper limit. Don't be too cruel...

When I looked at it, it was relatively in the middle. If I remember correctly, it should be the first-generation super warriors [like ordinary demon soldiers], the second-generation super warriors [like Qiangwei], and the third-generation super warriors [like Angel Yan who has not become a god]. The above is the division of super soldiers. The third-generation divine body [Rena, still called Di Leina, and the newly-become a god Angel Yan], this one is actually based on the third-generation super warrior, with the characteristics of the divine body added. Therefore, in the super seminary, the minimum standard for gods should be the third-generation divine body. The fourth-generation divine body [Demon Queen Morgana], the fourth-generation divine body-the sacred body [King of Angels Kesha]. In fact, I don't really understand the difference between the two, I just know that the latter is slightly stronger. [Karl should have been at Kesha's level in the beginning, but of course it's just a guess] As well as the fifth-generation divine bodies that appeared later, some are also called phantom bodies, [such as Karl, which was upgraded after Kesha died]

Can someone please give me some advice and suggestions on plot communication, writing guidance, and writing style of this book...

How to say it? This book gave me the feeling that it was too frivolous. I couldn't hold on until Chapter 27. Later, I felt that it was just trying to be funny, which made me embarrassed. I'll wait and see. After all, the setting is good. Also, this book gave me an inspiration, hey hey hey 😁 I won't tell you what it is. Wait for my news.

When I get enough red envelopes, I will give you a reward, but the value is not high, don't mind, after all, I am a student, finally, come on ＾0＾~!

Can the author get rid of the catchphrase "What the hell"? The protagonist wants to become the God of Light. Such a tone of voice is completely like a gangster. There is also no need to have too many narrations in the article.

After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist developed a civilization on his own, but ended up entering the academy. 9 Of the 10 books in the academy couldn't there be some original plot? There was too much in the academy.

In these chapters Shui's subordinates forcefully arouse hatred for the protagonist, which is a bit poisonous

Shui Zishu forcibly persuaded him to leave and said goodbye.

What are you writing about? The donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. I can't connect the previous one with the next one.

I felt like I was reading an online game novel with a supernatural character, rather than a fan novel. The setting was too ridiculous.

It feels a bit messy😒

This book is going to be a eunuch. Kesha was fucked by Hua Ye. The author can't write anymore. The manual is funny.

Why eunuch?

This was updated a year ago. What does it mean?

I would like to call you a pigeon god that is rare in the pigeon world.

The protagonist is a bitch, don't get into it if you don't like it

Is it a single heroine

You force me to automatically subscribe, you are so awesome.

Have you ever seen someone start a dark plane computer and issue a task? What is this? Mercenary union?