Desert Island Survival: Escape

There are still too few novels of this type, and even fewer are well written. I hope the author will persevere.

I've added a book list for you. The idea of ​​writing a book is very clear and reasonable. The first person is also a unique feature. It's pretty good. Come on.

It's a very good survival novel. I hope that it will be more exciting in the future. The most annoying thing is that there are a lot of beauties in the system. I hate such novels the most. I have read De Ge Survival and Australian Brother before. They are really good. The author can learn from them when writing survival novels.

The writing is pretty good, but I stopped reading when I saw a female survivor appear in chapter 193. It's not that the novel is not good. It's just that I don't want to watch chatting with women.

I stopped watching it when I saw it was in first person!

You dig the hole yourself and jump into it. At the end of Chapter 174, it is said that the bacon was taken back into the house. Chapter 175 says that the bacon had been smoked the next morning, and then it was taken back into the house. You sleepwalked and hung up the bacon again in the middle of the night? Even if the writing is poor, there are still many flaws, so I won't list them one by one 😫

It's the first time I've seen such a refreshing survival article. Come on, author✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

It's not bad, but it's a bit unrealistic to be too optimistic on a desert island. It should describe a person's loneliness. This feeling is terrible. A little description will make it more immersive. Save it. However, I still hope to have someone in the middle and later stages. Being alone all the time is still a bit boring. Just don't include beautiful women. Come on, author.

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Catching grasshoppers with your bare hands? Not cost-effective and consumes far more energy than it can provide. Bei Ye eats bugs, hehe, it's just a gimmick. In the same way, only small ingredients that are readily available are meaningful.

I am new here 😁, the writing is very good 👍, please come on the author ✊, it makes me feel like I am back when I was a child watching Robinson Crusoe 😄

I don't want the heroine and the system is correct

I feel that the protagonist doesn't need to eat staple food. He eats meat and fruits every day. The three major nutrients are indispensable. What I can't figure out is that there are obviously a lot of taro, but he just doesn't eat them.

Are there any female celebrities? This is the most annoying. The wilderness is just wilderness. I have to add a few female celebrities. Let's go and take a look first.

The writing is very nice, as long as there are no so-called beauties suddenly added, it will be fine. You can add some animal companions, such as the mentioned feline.

After reading it, I would like to share some opinions. The first one is the issue of shelter. 😂Why do you have to live in the deep mountains and old forests while waiting for rescue? How can you wait for rescue? Isn't the place where you want to be rescued closer to you? Another thing is that according to the background of the book, the island where the protagonist is located should be a tropical island. Tropical rain is very abundant, and it is an island, so even if it is not the rainy season, it will basically rain lightly every two days and heavy rain every five days. Also, the protagonist's aura is a bit serious. In the first wave, if you eat cold food immediately after being hungry for so long, you will definitely get diarrhea, which will cause the protagonist pain for a few days and then lead to death from dehydration. Also, after all, we are in a jungle, and there is no way there is not even one animal in any forest. Not to mention the primeval forest, even ordinary woods have hidden murderous intentions. Old hunters are extremely careful when hunting. Animals can attack at any time. The primeval forest has everything, but it has not been attacked. . . There is another loophole when setting traps to hunt those birds. In reality, animals in some undeveloped areas are not afraid of people. Maybe you will be scared for the first time because of their size, but if your behavior harms their survival, they will attack in groups, and the protagonist will die miserably. Moreover, animals are very loyal and loyal. If a companion is in danger, they will not run away, but will find a way to save it. As long as it does not endanger the entire group, if you want to take it away, they will fight to the death with you. In addition, since there are so many prey here, there should be hunters, and at least some snakes will be guarding there, but there are not. Judging from the behavior of these birds, they should have maintained this habit for a long time and come here to find food, so there should also be hunters. We have controlled this place for a long time and formed a stable biological chain. Otherwise, it would be unreasonable to only have birds eating here. When you catch birds, the hunters behind you will come out to compete with you. Moreover, the birds hang around for a long time without being eaten. You know, animals have a very sensitive sense of smell and can react immediately to the slightest disturbance. Also, the protagonist sleeps so deeply at night. In fact, realistically speaking, he would be dead a long time ago. If I were that lynx, I would choose to sneak attack at night. Cats are very cunning. If you want to write this to keep it close to reality, I am sure that few people can sleep deeply in the wild. They are all half asleep and half awake, and can be awakened by the slightest disturbance. However, the protagonist has not been alert after so many days, which is ridiculous. . . Also, the timeline has been slowed down by you. It should be written in a jumping way. There is no need to cover everything. The content is very watery and fake. It is impossible to cut so much wood in an afternoon or even a day. In the jungle, the trees are very tall and thick. If you want to cut them down, it is appropriate. Tools are necessary. A short knife is not suitable for cutting down trees at all, and this kind of cutting is only suitable for stabbing, not for chopping. If it is chopped, it will not be too powerful. If you use a stone axe, it will take more than an hour to chop down a tropical rain forest tree according to the physique of ordinary people. What does the protagonist use to move? One piece of wood weighs more than 500 kilograms at least, and there are more than a dozen pieces. You can have fun making one piece a day. Even if you make it, it cannot be used immediately. Fresh wood needs to be dried in the sun, at least 3 or 5 days. If this were reality, I am sure that you Those fences you put in, within a few days, your home will be dragged down, and the roots will grow into your bed. It feels like the protagonist is living with his passion. There is also a question about salt. You need to have salt to eat. It is very easy. Can't you just wash the food with sea water once? If there is not enough salt, just soak it. Do you have to follow the ancient practice of drying salt? The Caspian Sea is far away or other factors, so I chose to sun-salt, wash it with sea water, and then bake it. It still has salt, but the author's writing is pretty good. The author does not have to learn the traditional online novel format just because the readers can't stand it. The novel is very weird, and the luck is too good, which makes people feel fake. Hey, author, work hard. In fact, I read your novel and want to write one. I hope those who are interested can come and read it to support it. It is also unsystematic, but some logical aspects will be clarified, but the language aspect. . . Maybe a little unsatisfactory.

Discovered this novel on the first day of the new year! I also write about desert island survival, I hope it sells well!

Generally speaking, it's okay, but newcomers with new books need exposure But we losers don't have much ability, so we can only support the author a little I hope the author can become popular Thank you for your hard work (▽)

Can you be less dramatic when writing about characters' psychological activities? Those who didn't know thought the protagonist was Ma Jingtao

There is a heroine who is tricked into entering. . .

Come on. It's a good first time.

Use first person to dissuade 90% of readers

It's okay, the plot is pretty good, but the inner description of the characters is too exaggerated. At the beginning, Rambo flies away, and then he has various dreams, which is too exaggerated.

Very well written. . I used to read too much of the first person and it was fine. But the author kept saying that there was no female protagonist at the beginning, but it got really cool later haha

303 And 304 are the same. I ordered two chapters of the same one.

A good novel, there are very few of this type

It's very well written, I finished it when I was reading it

The writing is okay, the plot concept is okay, but the writing skills are a bit poor. When will I write the next book?

Boss, when will you open a new book?

I don't need so many suitcases anymore