Cast a Future

Strongly recommend thatthe author rewrite the beginning. The beginning of this book was not well written, especially the first impression the protagonist gave me was very bad. He was a complete retarded tease. Such a beginning will put off readers who have high intellectual requirements for the protagonist. The most important thing about a book is the beginning. If the beginning is not well written, fewer readers will stay. Even if the writing becomes better and better later on, readers will not know if you leave at the beginning!

The rhythm of this book is much better than that of the literary one. It feels comfortable to read. Please give it a try, author! I'll take care of it first. Don't have sex anymore. If you have sex, then...

Let him be strong and let him be strong. The following sentence is... Is there anyone who has the right code?

Hurry up and leave the Lakers. No matter how well they perform, they are still Kobe's team. I don't know what the point of going to the Lakers is.

Ahhhh! One day, with a knife in hand, I can kill all the dogs from the starting point

The previous writings are all good, but unfortunately, the plot of chasing Sharapova in the end is completely disgusting. I really can't understand whether you want to write a basketball novel or an urban love novel. It's like I haven't had a girlfriend for eight lifetimes. Unfortunately, it's not our cup of tea. I wish you good luck and goodbye!

I really have no feeling for domestic basketball. I picked up to the last one and haven't left yet. Let's wait until we get to the NBA.

It's okay if there are few updates, but a game with more than ten chapters is too watery. Important games will be over in three chapters, and unimportant games will be covered in one stroke. Don't write the game in too detail, otherwise it will be watery.

In 2004, you defeated Argentina, Spain, Serbia and Montenegro, and New Zealand. However, your winning rate against the United States was less than 10%. How did you calculate that? Not every "dream team" is a dream team. You've even won Argentina, Spain, Serbia and Montenegro, so what else are you thinking about?

Going to the Lakers was a bit confusing. I wrote earlier how the Heat assistant coach was very optimistic about the protagonist, and he traded to sign the protagonist. He was traded to the Lakers in the blink of an eye, which was very baffling.

Will the volute lose in a duel? It's too fake. Volute's isolation performance is among the best in the league, and his defense has also scored first defense. 🤫

Wanting to explode but being suppressed at the same time, it is difficult to get ahead in the Lakers

Your book is actually good, but the only problem is that you didn't write it well at the beginning. Then the pacing was updated. It took me more than a hundred chapters to get to NBA. The pacing was so slow that there was no need to write many game details!

Are you a eunuch? Well! The writing is okay but the grades are not. If you subscribed to the last few chapters, delete the book!

I think if the author updates it more quickly, the results should be pretty good. Anyway, I quite like reading it. The same is true for the book that ranks No. 1, 2, And 3 in the world, but he updates it more quickly and the results are pretty good. The author can give it a try.

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

Be careful about AI blocking? With a height of 199cm, long arms, and a bounce of 80~90cm, how can AI block shots? Why did Durant do it, with his strength? Isn't it because of his height, wingspan, flexibility, plus strong strength and small forward speed? If anyone with less than 180 can block the protagonist, then anyone with around 187 can block Durant.