I Want to Hold the Sky

Huang Shen has entered the world of mortals and has achieved enlightenment for three thousand kalpas. In the future, if you don't look at the immortals, you will dare to fall into the mortal world. ... Just change it as you like and lightly spray!

Author, do you need a box of razor blades in the new year? If not, just add more😃

Does the author have permission to change the introduction? If possible, book friends will work together to come up with a poem that rhymes and does not deviate from the author's original intention.

It's so far-fetched 😰😰😰 Chapter 1 So the characters have changed a lot! The author takes it too much for granted

Why do you have to grow up to be a killing god? Is killing that important?

If you are a native, it is easy to say that a time traveler is still a mature time traveler at heart. If you like a girl movie, there are not many people who are so perverted except for lolicon.

Introduction Is that a poem or something? It doesn't rhyme at all...

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Piaopiao tell me how much to reward➕Update🌷

This number of clicks is a bit scary.

Set up a supporting building. If anyone has a nice name and character, please reply below.

How should I put it? This is a pseudo-travel fantasy novel. I always feel that the male protagonist's words and deeds do not reflect his identity as a time traveler. It's not that he is not good enough for Long Aotian. But in the author's writing, the male protagonist is like a local person who has gained some modern knowledge. The lolita control they are talking about is not unacceptable. I can't tell what's going on. The overall feeling of this book to me is like the growth history of a local little guy. Rather than the process of a time traveler becoming stronger. Since you have decided to write about the cruel side of the world of cultivation, please pay attention to the modern environment. Do you think that in modern society, ordinary young people in this society still believe in feelings other than family affection? Although I am an inexperienced child. Furthermore, the male protagonist changes too quickly, from an infatuated seed who believes in love to a person who is always on guard. Although I feel like it's better to get back to my true nature. Finally, I feel that in the article, I did not see any indication that the male protagonist is a time traveler. In this context, it is also difficult to reflect. However, I always feel that this male protagonist is a local protagonist, but he has a photographic memory and has learned a lot of knowledge that does not belong to this world. Of course, all this can be explained, because he has lived in this world for ten years, so he is more accustomed to the rhythm of this world. But! The male protagonist has been a scholar for these ten years! ! ! And he's a top student! Straight A student! ! As a top student, don't you think that it took ten years for the male protagonist to pass the top exam, which makes him feel a little sorry for his status as a time traveler? I have a photographic memory! Although you explained that remembering does not mean understanding, after all, he still skipped the memorizing time compared to others! Isn't ten years a bit long? To be honest, until now, I don't even know what I have written. I feel like a troll trying to criticize this book. But! That doesn't mean the book doesn't have merit. This is a standard dark novel that wants to see all kinds of ugliness in human nature. The writing of this book is quite good. Very nice! The change in mood of losing a loved one, the surprise of being calculated beyond expectations, and the cruelty towards oneself. They are all very well written! In addition, the author also writes very carefully about the mini world of cultivation. The author puts the dark side of human nature on the bright side, and then the author works very hard to express the process of the male protagonist completely integrating and adapting to this rule bit by bit. The author is working hard to write vivid supporting characters one after another. And it was quite successful. In short, this is a good source of food. As long as you ignore the identity of the male protagonist as a time traveler, you can eat it very well.