During the Years After My Transformation, I Was Hanging Out in a Girl Group

Very nice, the only drawback is that updates are too slow

I read the latest chapter in one go and made some suggestions. First of all, I feel that the whole text is too colloquial, which makes me feel that the whole text is very out of touch. Most of them are dialogue descriptions, which are a bit monotonous. I think the author can try to use scenes to render them. It was a bit off-putting at first, but then it became less intense. Secondly, the emotional description is not too delicate, and it feels more like daily slapstick. When you get good grades, or at more important moments, it feels like the description of emotions is just a brushstroke. Maybe just say that everyone cried with joy and that would be it. It is more difficult for people to empathize with emotions. Then, as for relationships, I still hope to have a single female protagonist. Starting from the beginning, Korean entertainment dramas really have too many harems, including Mary Sue and harem stallion. Not realistic at all. I was really too much of a charlatan, and in reality I cheated without being beaten to death. In general, the overall situation is still improving, and I hope that the writing style can continue to work hard. If the author can control the novel, he can also try to write a villain to fight and have a sadistic plot. The author wrote this article not long ago, but I have been looking for Hanbaiwen for a long time, which shows that the author's article is quite difficult to be found. The author can try recommending some book lists to try. Finally, I like Taigu the most~~

I was browsing the book list today and wondered why others passed me the same subject matter but I couldn't! In the end, I was asked to stand aside 😢 The key is that my mentality has been a bit broken recently. I want to stand aside but don't dare to stand out too much. I have been thinking about whether to let myself go. Most of the main lines of the girls are maintained, and the rest are used by themselves! Why didn't what I wrote originally pass the review? 😭

The writing skills of newcomers are not very good. I also have this number. At least there are no typos 😁 Write as well as possible. After all, it is my first time to write a book. There's a lot to learn from, I just write books. Actually, I made a bit of a mistake in what I wrote earlier. I hope you understand 🙏

The author tries his best to catch bugs and correct some inappropriate places. He will go back and make corrections from time to time! Dear men or ladies, if you find anything wrong or unreasonable, please feel free to mention it. Although I may not necessarily accept it, I will look at it carefully and consider it seriously!

Damn it! The author is out of the palace again! ! !

After watching more than a dozen episodes, I feel a bit confused. . . . . .

2019.02.10: Happy birthday to the best boy in the world, Suyong and Oppa! 2019.03.09: Happy birthday to the best SNSD singer in the world! 2019.04.18: Happy birthday to the world's best little iceberg princess Zheng Sika! 2019.05.15: Happy birthday to the world's best SNSD CEO Lee! 2019.05.30: Happy birthday to the world's best SNSD facade, Lim Yoona! 2019.06.28: Happy birthday to Seohyun, the best SNSD maknae in the world!

The author can read Korean Entertainment's Girls' Generation. It's very well written. It's also written by Lily. It's very detailed. You can refer to it and absorb it. And it's a true lily. The protagonist is not a man wearing a woman's clothes 🤭

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In order to strengthen my motivation to add more updates, and to give you the opportunity to add more updates, like some authors, I also set a rule for myself to add more updates. 1. If the subscription reaches 500 on the same day, an update chapter will be added the next day. If the cumulative increase, the update will be added cumulatively (ps: the day when the update is added will not be counted). 2. If the total reward points exceed 10,000 points, one update will be added. 3. For every 30 monthly tickets in the current month, one additional change will be added. 4. One update will be added for every multiple of 1,000 recommended votes. 5. One chapter will be added every time the collection reaches a multiple of 500. After reading my own rules for adding more updates, I feel like there is no possibility of adding more updates (laughing and crying)!

Chinese version of Girls' Generation ~ Hahaha

Passing by

In terms of Lily, is it exclusive or harem?

I want to get your character to two stars. Will it collide with the next door? 🤓

This book has actually been released. Come on, I will keep up with the updates.

The writing is good and the ideas are okay, but! Focus on it! When writing about girl groups and Korean entertainment, this book requires a sense of immersion. In order to prevent harmonization, the names are customized. . . Homophonic meme or you can comment it below after writing it. I guess it's really uncomfortable.

Please add more updates, 🪖