Cultivating Immortality from the Nascent Soul Stage

This is my first book, and I still have a lot of questions. I hope everyone can point out the questions to me after reading it. I am not afraid that someone will ask questions, but I am afraid that no one will ask them. Thank you all!

Have you borrowed and paid it back? () How many years are left on the mortgage?

Clean the dust and be handsome!

Brother, your Nascent Soul transformation makes people feel like you are not even as good as a Qi training period. . . . . . . I'm drunk too

Everyone can put forward good suggestions. Now is the time when the first book needs these suggestions. 👌

Smile a little and the heart becomes clearer (under production)

After reading a few chapters and making suggestions, I feel that it is better to write less expressions, as the text is too stiff. Either hey hey hey, it's hahahaha. Then add an expression at the end to make it easier to create a scene. There are also descriptions of the characters. They are all elders who are hundreds of years old. They cannot be middle-class people like ordinary old people in the world. Among the elders of a sect, which one is not a high-ranking person? Controlling tens of millions of lives, and having a high-level sect, it is impossible to be so happy, without any struggle, and a small public factory is divided into partisan factions.

The writing is a bit poor and looks a bit embarrassing.

👌Don't worry, everyone, although this book still has many problems, it is my first book after all. I promise that it will not be a eunuch. It has to be written in a million words. Although the update may be slower, it will definitely be completed!

Worship it, have collected it, read it slowly, and work hard! Welcome to return and give advice!