Immortal, Please Stay

Let's take a rough look, and let's talk about my personal feelings first. As an old bookworm who has been reading online articles for six or seven years, I have to admit that the writing of this book is excellent. The first thing I thought of when opening the text was the Fairy Sword series and the scene of the battle between immortals and demons. The second thing I thought of was Three Lives and Three Worlds. The characters are vividly drawn and have a strong sense of empathy. We often see this phenomenon in online articles. The author desperately wants to involve the readers in his plot, but it always seems like there is something missing. There is no way to empathize with the protagonist. But this is not the case with the author's article. The way it is described with clear clouds and clear winds makes people feel very comfortable after reading it, as if the last time I felt this way was when I was reading a physical book. Secondly, there are some mistakes in the selection of the book's categories. I don't think anyone who reads it will think that it is a fantasy romance. The Qidian female channel's fairy tale romance category will be more suitable for this article. Maybe the author made a wrong choice when creating the work. In fact, this is a very disadvantage. Apart from the writing style, the most important thing is the introduction, the cover and the category selection. The author has everything, only the category selection is wrong, which may have to be made up for by your excellent writing style. Finally, to summarize, the article is good, and I like this writing method very much. I hope the author can keep it steady, because this writing method can easily speed up the pace and the plot will be rushed. This phenomenon has not yet occurred in this book, so I put it on the bookshelf first and slowly fattened it up. The author remembers to keep updating it, and don't let us readers who are looking forward to wait too long!

The writing is delicate and looks like the character of Sansheng Sansheng. Please keep updating and I hope you will be better.

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I really like this dull style of writing. Reading it gives me a fairy-like and quiet feeling, and it is indeed a very beautiful article. I hope it will be put on the shelves soon, so that I can have a reason to update 😁

Welcome everyone to my book circle. 😊 I am the author 🥺 This is my first time writing a fairy tale book. Welcome to collect, vote for recommendation, and reward. When I was writing this book, I was really feeling uneasy. 💀💀💀 I don't know what the result will be, but I will try my best. 😚 Thank you for your tips, messages, and recommendation votes. 🌹💋❤️ Thank you for your support. I love you

After reading the third chapter, I couldn't help but say something about it first. Ningyuan got a bell from her master and took it with her. This is the fairy version of the "ring and jingle bell" in "Luo Shen Fu"~ I have to say that the writing style of Yunshan Jun is elegant and fairy-like. The heroine makes people feel distressed, but I also like her unyielding little qualities. Continue to follow the article. Come on, stay tuned~~

Dumb, dawd, hehe, the book is really beautiful, just like your person.

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