Love Sword Fengyun Jue Shenqin Demon Sword

Please give me hope, support and hope for the author. Thank you so much!

Thank you for your support. I have lost confidence recently and want to give up, but I still give myself strength.

Now that the traditional martial arts market has declined, there are still some followers of fan martial arts.

It can be seen that the author is very perseverant, otherwise he would not have written more than 700,000 words. After reading two chapters, let me share my thoughts: 1. Is the title of this book too long? 2. After reading the first chapter, I only remembered the names of Lan Qianhao and Hou Ziyang, but you had at least ten people appear, right? I was confused by the relationship between other people. I told a bunch of strange stories and changed five or six scenes. Later, even the main point of view had nothing to do with the protagonist. If I hadn't seen the relationship diagram, I even thought the protagonist was Hou Ziyang. It's like I've rushed all the stories and information into my head, and I can't remember it. Even if the protagonist like Jin Yong comes out late, he won't give you ten names and their relationships in a 3,000-word story to make people guess

I would like to make a small suggestion. Many of the words used in it are inaccurate, and sometimes there are logical errors. It looks difficult, so use some caution in the writing.

Collected, support each other, and wish your article a hit!

Cheer for the author and hope that martial arts works can be reborn

Do you dare to send more monthly ticket red envelopes?

I feel that the author is very careful. This book should be used as a training book. After all, only a few people become famous with one book. Let me write at most half the level of the author, come on

Some passages are too long and the pace should be faster. It's also a good experience to persevere and finish the book! Come on!

Come on, author, the key to writing about martial arts is persistence, and although martial arts is not dead, it is indeed in decline, which does make those of us who love martial arts and write about martial arts a little sad.

It's best to publish chapters so that people can collect and subscribe to them. Come on.