The Man Who Overturned the Times

The most taboo thing about writing novels is unclear classification and no goals. If you want to write about business empire, then write about business empire. If you want to write about film and television songs, then write about film and television songs. If you want to write about developing games, then write about developing games. If you want to write about German orthopedics, then focus on daily life with your sister. You can write about anything you want, but in reality it is most likely to fail and be full of loopholes. Take the food delivery platform. External platforms are actually burning money like crazy, subsidizing users and merchants, and will only make money when they develop later. How can they be profitable in the early stage? Therefore, there must be a main line and a focus, otherwise everyone will be dissatisfied. Those who want to watch Business Empire think it is not good, those who want to watch German Orthopedics think it is not good, and those who want to watch Songs to Become a Star think it is not good.

Um~ Let me tell you my personal opinion. The early stage is really to my taste, but after reading about 200 chapters, it becomes a little bit different. The harem is absolutely no problem, but Tang Ting is really unbearable. There are so many beautiful, hard-working and positive girls. I have to write this. I think this has forced many readers away. Although it is ultimately the author who has the final say, it still feels a bit negative. Generally speaking, if the various scenes with the heroine and the heroine are not well written, a lot of readers will be lost, huh! That's all for the time being. I hope the author can continue to work hard ＾0＾

I just read the first thirty chapters, and I feel that the author is really weak in business. The first pot of gold was obtained through system game resources, so I won't go into details. But is it funny to start a business for the first time and learn the Meituan model? How much capital do you have to do this? If a business giant is eyeing your business model, do you have a huge amount of funds to compete with others to burn money and subsidies to occupy the market? Business models like Meituan, Ele. Me, and shared bicycles are doomed without financial backing. You want to make money by squeezing merchants and riders, and others will steal your market share every minute. Since the games in the parallel world are lagging behind, it is better to learn the Shanda model first, start online games, build a proper cash cow, and then go public and raise funds to become bigger and stronger. With the capital, we can develop other e-commerce, smart phones, and takeaways, slowly develop, and diversify our operations.

First of all, let me make it clear that I don't hate harem stories, especially when I see siblings in them. I even got a little excited and stayed up late to watch it now. There were really no problems at first. You said that the author didn't understand the law, and didn't know about copyright and financial conversion. After all, he didn't specialize in this field. But after a few women came out, the taste changed. It's not that I don't like to read harem stories, it's that the female supporting characters are just like the usual buffoons who set off the protagonists. They come out as purely disgusting? I have read so many harem stories and pornographic stories. Even the female pornographic stories have never made me so disgusted. zzThe author and protector 🐶 give 👴 claw.

First of all, the overall point is that some parts of this book have a strong H atmosphere, and sometimes I feel like I am reading a book (this is indeed liked by some people). What I wrote above is actually okay, but the characters are not realistic enough, Su Weiwei's actions are too artificial, and Su Yang's behavior seems stable in terms of career. The two contrasts seem to simply highlight Su Yang and pave the way for the rise of her sister. It's just that my sister writes too much about fei and H, as if she just uses H to make people like her (many people withdrew the book because of this) I won't say much about the following chapters, and will go directly to the language and narrative aspects. The author expresses the poisonous points when expressing some people's meanness and infatuation. For example, what Hao Wei said in public (you can do it seven times a night like Ai Xiaoke) is too much. Generally, no one would make such a joke in front of others. There is also the aphrodisiac in Chapter 202, which is where I persuaded him to quit. Although I understand that this is a harem novel, there are not many people who sell themselves directly for aphrodisiacs, which makes people feel that the male protagonist has a helpless face while having a chaotic relationship. In general, this book tells the story of a protagonist who has achieved great success in his career and is emotionally ambiguous with many women. The above are my thoughts after reading it in one sitting yesterday. Well, maybe it will be deleted. 😅

I really liked this novel, but after reading the Tang Ting part, I really couldn't stand it. It was really disgusting. I didn't want to read it anymore, so I gave it up.

I think this book is a good book, but the part about Tang Ting made me give up immediately. The blood poisoned me to death.

On top of that, some chapters of this book already involve crimes. For example, Chapter 262 "Forced Wall Bang" involves the crime of threats. If someone calls the police to arrest you, you will go to jail, but if you use your connections to exempt you, what is the difference between you and the scum written in your book? I have the ability to give you an explanation. I will insert two chapters after 262 and write about the protagonist going to jail for two years. I have reported it, are there any book friends who support me?

The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. I take it too much for granted, and it's embarrassing to watch. You took out an entire mobile phone patent... What did you think, and asked others to register the patent for you... Isn't it brainless? And this one who writes about semiconductors has a complete set of direct lithography machines. Where did your stuff come from? Even if the state doesn't investigate you, I'll feel sorry for you. If you act like this, you will definitely be raised as a pig.

I no longer have much interest in reading it. Every day I read the other books on the top of my bookshelf before reading this one. Now I want to jump to a chapter. Nine out of ten chapters are about rough women. Why don't I just write an H-text?

The creativity is great, but there are a lot of loopholes. The PC-side live broadcast can still be watched by 300,000 fans without any brains. The system releases songs without registering a patent, which is such a big poisonous point that it can only be emmmed. The return of funds in the food delivery industry is surprisingly slow, and it is useless for the world. In the market, peers compete and promote, and it is impossible to win without 500 million.

The comment section may be that the poison resistance is too weak, and I am a pirated reader, but I think these poisons are not a problem at all. I read it last year, and I still feel a little bit unfinished after reading it. There are so few sibling stories like this, so writing it like this is enough. I have been reading novels for six or seven years, but I never get tired of harem stories. Now that I am still a virgin after finishing the novel, I have doubts about life. Isn't the protagonist in the novel a normal human being? Even if there is no eye contact, don't we need to address our physiological needs? This is not the most uncomfortable thing. The most uncomfortable thing is that the female co-star is written very well. She explicitly and implicitly plays with it, but refuses to accept it and pretends to be a straight man. . I know that I don't have money, and if I don't recharge, I have no right to speak. But what I am talking about is the current situation of online novels. I feel that this situation is pathological and does not belong to the so-called purified online novel environment. After all, a male protagonist must have a female protagonist in his life. Nowadays, single female protagonists are very rare.

The first part was fine, but in Chapter 202, a few things were instantly poisoned.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The author's writing is good in many aspects, but the pretentious plot is really unbearable. One after another of clichéd pretentiousness and slaps in the face, to be honest, author, if you write less of these plots, many people will be less likely to abandon the book so quickly. .

Author, although you said before that you don't want to write a cheesy story that will slap you in the face, but that's not a problem. Since you have written it, you should be responsible and write it carefully. It doesn't matter if it is cheesy. It is acceptable for the villain to have a low IQ, but you have to have a certain temper. For example, when I rescued Miss Yu, I was not caught in a QJ, robbery, or theft. I was doing well as a professional liar. Why should I equip myself with weapons and become a gangster? Fortunately, this guy only holds a knife. If he wants to hold a gun, I'm afraid a large number of readers will have to kneel down. The scolding is because what I wrote above is really good, just like a bowl of nutritious stewed chicken. I was eating well, but suddenly I found a few small lints on the meat. I endured it, but as I ate, I found another small lint on the back of the meat! Do you think we should eat or not? Don't eat it. This stewed chicken tastes good and is nutritious. It would be a pity to throw it away. But eat it, you are annoying to watch, and you are even more afraid that there may even be a patch of black hair coming out from behind. You said you are entangled or not.

There are very few real readers when writing book reviews, and 90% of the reviews are by robots. If the writing is not good enough, I won't be allowed to give any comments. Really haha.

After ordering the author's previous book, I also ordered this book. But I feel that after more than 200 chapters, I started to repeat the routine of the previous book, pranking the anchor to earn points, flirting with girls to earn points, and the stallion harem engaged in technology to continue the same thing. It's not that the writing is not good, it's just that it's okay to read the same thing once, but it feels a bit boring after watching it the second time. It feels like something is missing in it and it's no longer interesting. Maybe I didn't express what I wanted to express, but the above is my personal opinion, nothing more!

After seeing my sister's character, I decided to give it up.

The more I write, the more boring it becomes. I am ambiguous every day, otherwise I just have sex. Author, you should just write pornographic stories.

I looked at where there are so many trolls in the comment area. They are too irritable. Everyone has a problem with the positioning of this book. It is a brainless and cool book with some benefits. Don't pay too much attention to details and over-read. It is definitely a good book. However, it would be better if there were fewer such low-end slap-in-the-face plots in the United States. There are also a bit too many female characters. I hope the author can control the number. The protagonist's first lover has basically disappeared. There are too many and it is difficult to control. It is better to have more career plots. Come on, don't pay too much attention to the trolls.

I saw a lot of people scolding Tang Ting. Is it because the protagonist drugged this woman and allowed her to be fucked?

It looks good in the front, but the plot in the back is really poisonous. I can't stand it any longer. Goodbye.

It looks good from the front, very good, but the more it gets written in the back, the more obscene it becomes. Let's change the name. It's more appropriate to call it "The Porn Book That Overturned the Era". First it's the sister, then it's the classmate, and then it's the sister. Now there's a mother and daughter, ready to be a stallion.

What's the difference between this and Qin Ze's Salted Fish King? Does the framework count as plagiarism?

Authentic perverted novels where the sister is a tremolo, Qiao Xiaoqi is a lolita, Luo Ying is the royal sister, Yu Yuechan is the school beauty, I have read all the stallion novels like this. The thing that makes me unable to stand it the most is that I clearly know that Tang Ting is approaching me for money, and I can accept this. Tang Ting is a lily. The green tea bitch and the high-end prostitute have maintained an ambiguous relationship with many men and women. I don't know how many women they have rubbed against. The protagonist said she doesn't like second-hand goods and slaps herself in the face. The author is so eager for women that she wrote this ***

IG won. Will there be more updates? Waiting for more updates every day.

Finally waiting for you, I am Xiao Yancheng.

Nowadays, the whole family is killed in the novels starting from the seventh level and above. The protagonists in the sixth and above levels are impotent eunuchs, but they are still virgins at the end. Half of them have no female protagonists. The novels with about two levels have all the characters killed, as long as they are female. It is simply abnormal.

Farewell to Tang Ting, the villain counterattacks the male protagonist, I can't accept it, and what the hell is the sister? Can't someone set up a child bride?

Why isn't it on the shelves? Keep up the good work, and be careful with 404