Nightmare Internet Cafe

I secretly took a bite of shit to refresh myself⊙ω⊙

According to this pattern and quality, you will become a god after writing it, big brother.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is completely incomprehensible, and it doesn't feel exciting. The theme is an Internet cafe. You can do it for 3 hours a day, 3 times a week. What the hell? It's so poisonous. One person earns 72 yuan a week? When I say that your Internet cafe only has 12 machines, and they are all fully charged, the cost alone is not enough, and you can earn tens of thousands per month, and it is still the case that the premise is full 24 hours a day. I only read half of the chapters, and many of them talked about the protagonist going through the dungeon process, and it felt like it was getting longer and longer. 🙂 Now I think some people are going to start trolling me, so I'm going to take my leave. What I wrote is just my opinion of the book. The author can really improve in some aspects.

Just looking at your name makes me feel delicious

ⅰI have eaten it Author, it tastes so good

Good book, but not very appetizing. I didn't want to read it after reading the first copy.

. . Why it has to do with reality. .

Khan, I was so focused on reading that I forgot to update my novel...

Change your pen name, it's a shame!

It feels more and more chaotic, and it seems to have nothing to do with the Internet cafe.

Don't make the scene too big at the beginning. You can have an evil castle, 1408 Phantom Room, fight zombies, etc. Just start with a city. How will you write it later?

Eunuch?

Because of the setting, the writing was a bit broken before. Now I plan to come back and fill in the gaps. I have slightly changed the previous article. Because major changes require deleting chapters, I'll leave the new plot to the later articles.