Golden Mountain Forest

This book is generally good, but some of the plots don't make sense!

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Wild yam: local price, 7 yuan per pound in 2018. It starts to be sold in April, and it is hard to find wild yams in the market at the end of May.

This doesn't feel right, a red envelope of 100,000 coins for recommended votes. Nothing like bubbles.

If the protagonist could be bolder and crueler. That's good, the subject matter is good, but the character is problematic. As a new author, it is easy to dissuade some people. Without accumulating fans, there is no way to maintain writing.

I'm a big loser and I never give up. One day I had a sudden impulse and wanted to break the pen. I hold 2HB in my hand, and I feel very frustrated. I don't know why, I'm crying and my nose is running.

After watching it, I felt that the countryside was very dark and the protagonist was a failure as a person.

It's not unreasonable for the protagonist's family to be poor. It's okay for his grandparents to be like that. The protagonist also has no IQ at all, and he still graduated from high school.

This book is not easy. It is the first to be released. Please support the author. Say the author is a girl? 😍

Why do you feel that the protagonist's grandparents always press the protagonist to ask,

The author has worked so hard. I beg you all to subscribe and add it to your collection. Thank you for your support. By the way, please give the author a vote.

IQ 🙅🏻‍♂️ is online. I can't keep up with the taste of children, so I will withdraw it now.

The author's writing style and plot design are good, but I want to express my thoughts. Some of the plots in the article are a bit too much, such as the protagonist's way of taking chicken that costs 120 per pound in the countryside, and the protagonist does not stop it. There were many times when I was tricked and slapped in the face. Once is fine, but repeating it multiple times is not good for people to read. I read rural novels because I want to relax and don't want to read those twists and turns. This is just my feeling when reading the book. It doesn't matter whether the author accepts any suggestions. Don't let anyone sneeze at me. You can do it. Just a suggestion

Is it a book written by a female author? No wonder!

No wonder Daniel's family is so poor, everyone is taking things without giving them money.

Seeing that the author handed out so many red envelopes (although I didn't grab them), I came in to take a look, and was immediately repelled by the dark side of the first chapter. I don't know whether the village bullies will take advantage of the poor households, but I am really convinced by the township leaders who dare to take the eggs of poor households. Angry... In addition, the concept of poor households was proposed in the past few years. I suggest that the author should change the first chapter. Otherwise, if the book becomes popular in the future and someone is jealous and reports him for "smearing the poverty alleviation policy and sowing the relationship between the party and the people," it will be too unfair.

Is it dark and flowing in the countryside? As a rural person, I have never seen anything so weird.

The protagonist is a bitch. If it were me and anyone dared to take advantage of me, I would definitely chop him to death with a knife. It really makes no sense for the author to write a novel like this.

It's still good, you must stick to it! !

The update is too slow! ! ! !

I hope to change the protagonist. This protagonist is disgusting. Rabbits can bite people. The protagonist is not even as good as a rabbit.

After reading a few chapters, I decided to give it up...

It costs more than 200 a day to move bricks out.

Did you upload these chapters in the wrong order? It feels confusing.

The author is so cynical and writes about the human heart in such a sinister way.

Collect it first, take a good look at it when you have time, and hone your writing skills. Less pretentiousness and slap in the face, more heartwarming and struggling plots. The green grass smells slowly, cattle, sheep, chickens and ducks flock in. The countryside is interesting, and farming is endless fun.

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The writing is okay, keep up the good work! Find ways to write well, ability comes first

What can I say? If the three views are not correct, why are there so many intrigues?

How should I put it, I persisted for a long time, and finally I couldn't stand the pig's feet anymore. When I saw the author's avatar, it turned out that it was written by a girl, without any blood or backbone of a man.