The Legend of Jian Lan

After reading Chapter 160, some of them are really unpleasant 1. The plot advances extremely slowly. You can say that the author's descriptions are detailed and the rhetoric is on point, but what I see is more meaningless repetition. 2. Some readers said earlier that the head of the Qingyang Sect has a very bad character. The author said there is a foreshadowing, which will be explained later. OK, the secret was revealed in Chapter 160, but I only saw that Qingyang Sect is a bunch of local chickens and dogs from top to bottom. They claim to be for the sake of the sect, but secretly they are just their own bastards. The question is that the so-called "for the sake of the sect" is still mentioned repeatedly in the plot dialogue, are the readers treated as fools? Did you write Qingyangzi as a fool? Can such a leader lead the sect well? Is this the second largest sect in the world? The advantages of this book are nothing more than good writing, ambiguous women, and a semi-invincible protagonist. World pattern? The protagonist's character changes? The heroine's change of heart towards the hero? Basically not. Forget it, let's just make do with it. For me, it's somewhere between food and grass. I can read it. I hope this book can keep me going for another hundred chapters.

It's well written and the author is very attentive.

The plot moves too slowly, and it feels a little too repetitive to write about one thing over and over again. . . However, this book is really good. I personally think it would be great if it could be made into a TV series.

This book is not popular, which is normal, and its flaws do not cover up its flaws. The pace is too slow. It describes one thing over and over again in more than ten chapters without seeing the advancement of the plot. This arrangement of the online novel is really unpleasant. Furthermore, the didactic meaning of this book is too strong. I understand that the author wants to express some philosophy and understanding of immortality or life, but it should be stopped at the end. The long description is too short of a word count and is too revealing, which is not beautiful. The author may have misunderstood women. The female characters described are not likeable, either willful or paranoid. The bright supporting male characters forcefully conflict with the protagonist. It is natural for men to be lustful and for women to be strong, but their inexplicable affection is difficult to resonate with readers. Finally, the word "genius" appears too frequently. As an ordinary person, I do feel a little disgusted with it. Of course, this book is placed in the Qidian. Com online writing group, and the writing style is inferior to that of novices. However, there are very few online reading readers who value writing style. If the author refines the plot and speeds up the pace, it is not impossible to become a god. It can be seen that the author is very careful. This is indeed a good book. I hope the author will work hard.

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It was too easy to destroy Kunlun. . . The first sect of cultivating immortals was destroyed without any explanation. . .

It's not about fairy tales, it's about martial arts, or the kind of traditional martial arts that are full of intrigues, fights for fame and wealth, and the characters behave strangely.

Come on, the writing is very detailed and contains unusual thoughts and principles.

This introduction means that the author's brain thinking is different from that of normal people.

What's the use of losing something without even trying to find it back, but rushing to sacrifice one's cultivation to atone for one's sins? It just caused Kunlun to suffer greater losses, and it didn't help anything!