Zhu Xian Immortal Story

This is the best Zhu Xian fan novel I have read so far. It basically makes up for all the regrets I had when reading Zhu Xian. Come on, the author, keep up the good work, and I hope you will 👍👍👍

The book "Zhu Xian" is really not suitable for starting a harem. The female characters have too distinct personalities. No matter how you look at it, they are not the ones who can make you open a harem through compromise, so it is really uncomfortable to read.

Going out to practice is really distracting. What the hell is the original plot written? There are also ridiculous views. No matter how you say the right path, there is a basic moral bottom line. In a world like Zhu Xian, the demon path directly uses people to practice. In order to lick Baguio, all three views are bad. After going down the mountain, Zhang Xiaofan became more and more frivolous.

The main character is written in a sadistic way. He wants to be a hero and saves the beauty but he has no strength. Even his own disciples dare not retaliate. If you don't have the strength, don't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger.

Why don't you take Shuiyue in and play the role of master and apprentice together? Wan Jianyi doesn't like her anyway.

Dressed in white as snow, with peerless appearance, Zhu Xian is the most beautiful woman

To paraphrase a reader's comment, a novel is a novel. Reading novels is for fun and pleasure. Don't listen to the moralists. Those who try to apply reality to reality have problems.

Love forever!

There is something wrong with the author's writing. Isn't it wrong that the name of the Qingyun Sect is not mentioned in the twenty or thirty chapters? You have to fight with others for a long time and then be recognized by others as Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao. Doesn't it show how advanced and awesome your martial arts skills are? Don't you think the protagonist seems to have no brains?

The original plot is very blunt, and the brainless pretentious slap-in-the-face plot does not fit well with the main storyline of Zhu Xian. The second-generation original characters of the sect added also look like they have shit in their brains, but in fact, none of the disciples of Zhu Xian's big sect have this style of painting.

The characters written by the author feel like they are suffering from schizophrenia. The state switching is too abrupt. The character's personality is forced to change for the sake of the plot, without considering the sudden change of the character's personality, especially the change of the protagonist's personality.

Baguio😁

Hypocrisy, you obviously don't like Tian Linger but you still want to flirt with her, you're a scumbag

The timeline is too outrageous, have you always been sixteen?

Damn it, you said you love another woman in front of a woman, you are such a scumbag.

Absolutely brilliant front and center and worth a look. However, it is recommended that newcomers to the trap give up after seeing Baguio's resurrection, because everything is over after that, and the protagonist's character directly changes from a heavy lover to a stallion.

It's the best among Zhu Xian fan works.

Although I haven't watched it, it's cool to see these familiar characters.

Famous scenes

The autumn frost is as cold as face and heart, and the spring breeze is gentle and pleasant. Flowers bloom and fall in Xianchi Pavilion. Who will give birth to a daughter in the Lu family?

For the first time, I saw the Zhu Xian fic that I wanted to read. The author is very grateful.

Author, you basically made the leader a grown man.

A sad and strange woman lying on the ice platform, with a watery face that makes people pity. Who is the reason for the golden bell? Infatuated and unrepentant as a young man.

This fanfic is more of a romance style~

When will this book be released? The author has written so much but still hasn't put it on the shelves. Without income, wouldn't he be considered a eunuch?

Author, what identity do you plan to set for Zhou Xian?