Multiple Time Travelers

. . . . In March 2018, the author came back, this. . . I dare not look at it 😰

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Overall, it's not bad. There are some problems in the first three chapters where the setting is greater than the plot, but the problem is not big. Overall, the fluency is good, and there are relatively few typos and unclear sentences. Will continue to wait and see. Come on!

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Leaving aside the writing style, just the hyphenated words make people uncomfortable. It would be impossible to sign a contract now. I suggest you change the hyphenation of the previous text first, it will bring a good impression. Based on the current reviews of popular novels, the setting is very average. I don't know if it's a mortal flow or something else, but I personally don't have the point to keep reading. The number of words is so large that it is unrealistic to change it again. I sincerely advise you not to insist on it and just cut it out This book is not suitable for the current online writing environment. Even if it is put on the shelves, the average subscription will not exceed 20

After reading Chapter 7, it can be said that the author is already very powerful. He can code 510,000 words in more than 100 chapters, and his writing style is better than that of many new authors. Unfortunately, almost no one can read it patiently in the current online literature. After reading a few chapters, I feel that it is too cumbersome. Many readers read it in fragmented time, and this book... How should I say, it is a bit confusing to read. If you read carefully line by line, you can clarify the plot, but now it takes about three seconds to read each page, and it will become confusing if you read too much. Especially the protagonist and supporting characters are still in English, and the names are difficult to remember. Later, when you see the protagonist and a certain supporting character, you don't know the cause and effect. I can only say that it is a pity for this book. Now everyone reads it is simple and easy to understand, which is too complicated. Judging from the current performance of this book, Ge Ge suggested that the author write another book. If the author is writing for himself and does not care about the performance, he can still continue writing and practice his writing skills to prepare for the next book.