Ten Thousand Beasts Chao Huang

Disappointed, not as good-looking as the enchanting and female thief. The writing style is exaggerated and naive, and the description of the psychological activities of the protagonist and supporting characters takes up a lot of space. I feel that the supporting characters' speeches are as exaggerated and stupid as if they have no IQ, waiting for Xiaoxiao to use his strength to slap him in the face. The character is average, neither powerful nor high-profile. The story is much less interesting, and the description of the heroine's speech and demeanor is also exaggerated, making her look a bit stupid and naive. At the beginning, the heroine is obviously not very strong and very ordinary, but her mental activity is such that she is about to be crushed at every turn, and suddenly she is written as if she is very strong and determined. Some of it is hard to understand. There are too many supporting roles and it feels a bit confusing.

This writing is so bad. I think she wanted to cater to the market before, so she limited her ability to express herself. But judging from the feeling and details, it is exactly the same as Feather said. The enchanting writes about light and darkness, the female thief writes about life and death, and the beasts write about the most willful and casual, because Maomao is writing "I". After the later stages are laid out, turn around and look at the beginning. Now Xiaoxiao's true nature is like this, she has always had this feeling of being a bit of a dilettante. Human beings are always complicated and changeable. Only when Xiaoxiao, who can toss around the dilettantes, slowly grows up can he be swept away from the dust in his heart. He finds the eternal answer, which is just "I". Maomao's writing style also stabilizes with her in the rampant exploration. "Nine Phoenixes, True Immortals, Enlightenment to the Heaven of Immortality", Maomao still has many stories to write, and they may become more and more unpopular. I hope everyone will continue to accompany Maomao on this journey...

La la la, I hope everyone will support Maomao and support all beasts

Stopped for a longer time. When will updates resume?

Uniform reply 1. The starting website is QQ Reading, the starting point is forwarding, the starting point monthly ticket and the QQ Reading monthly ticket are totaled, and the others are not totaled. 2. This is a new pen name, starting from scratch. This is not a random thought, it must have been carefully considered. This is a decision made after weighing the pros and cons. 3. The issue of writing style. Enchanting is written very happily, and the female thief is more profound. The new article is read on QQ, where the readers are generally small, and they prefer cool articles. They want to attract more readers, so the writing style will be much more cheerful. However, please believe Maomao, the new article has a big framework and it is estimated that 6 million words cannot be contained, and it may take three years to write. 4. The official VIP threshold is 2,000 fan points, which is 20 yuan, verification: 613231. 5. Various activities are basically held in the comment area and VIP group of "Ten Thousand Beasts Chaohuang" in QQ Reading. There are activities every month, and various peripherals and red envelopes are given out. [The following are the original words of Feather] I have made many attempts on this article. In the future, it will involve many writing methods that I have not tried before, as well as a deep exploration of myself. I would like to explain here that there is no abuse, misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists, etc. The emotional line is a small sweet story. As for Zi Huan, I don't want to reveal her direction, because it involves the main plot, the blood-haired god and demon are not dead, and the drama is not heavy. The main theme of this story is built around a really small self-awakening. The artistic conception, emotion, etc. That are expected by some old readers should be taken slowly. Actually, I don't like to deliberately sensationalize. What I like is to tell a good story. I hope this story is not boring. It should be used for entertainment and entertainment. At the same time, it should have something to say and not be reduced to a mere toy to stimulate the senses. After reading this, all gained.

The best fantasy, you can read it as a man's fairy tale, produced by Feather, it must be a high-quality product!

There is no emotional relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist's best friend! No past life entanglements! There has been no direct communication between the two so far! No bloody plot! The male protagonist and the female protagonist Shuang Jie 1v1! There is no third party! (The following is an explanation of misunderstandings, spoiler warning) ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Sort out the relationship between Xue Zhou, Xu Ling, and Zi Huan Shenxiao Taoist couple Xu Ling is dead (there is currently no sign of resurrection), and Dameng and Shenxiao world Shen Lian Bingmeng Together, they gave birth to Xue Zhou, and took away one of his souls (later transformed into the main soul of Misty Sect Ermeng Tianfeng) and replaced it with the remaining soul of Xu Ling. They wanted to use the cause and effect between Xu Ling and Shen Xiao to induce the reincarnation of Shen Xiao (Purple Ring). This also caused the cause and effect between Xue Zhou and Xu Ling, and later fell in love with each other. Shen Lianbing gave up his eternal obsession and broke through the realm of the gods to take away Shen Lingbing and took away the part of Xu Ling's soul that belonged to Xuezhou. This also caused Xuezhou's soul to be incomplete and his sense of taste was missing. Later, Xuezhou's soul collapsed. The main soul was drawn by the cause and effect and fell into Zihuan's house, where he met Xiaoxiao who had moved away. Summary: Xue Zhou is not the reincarnation of Xu Ling, he has no emotional relationship with Shen Xiao, and they are not Taoist lovers in previous lives.

Many people say it doesn't look good and is disappointing, but after the map is rolled out, it still feels familiar and looks good. After all these years, female fans still love watching feathers the most.

The heroine is "very girly" and at the same time asks people to "call me daddy". Again, "both biological father and adopted father are big men", the mother takes a back seat, and among the ten high-ranking figures, nine are men and one is a woman. When I looked at the type of article, I saw, "Heroine". Obviously I didn't feel this way when I read the author's previous works. Maybe it's because most girls have updated their minds but the author hasn't. Please trouble male-oriented female authors to go to the male channel. Except for the above points, the writing style of this book is also very impetuous and feels jabbering. Reading the discussion forum and saying that it feels noisy is accurate.

More than 6 million Yuanluo has read it at least four or five times. I just want to know why Feather's writing is so good but it can't even be ranked on the ranking list. I want to cry.

It is undeniable that this book still has shortcomings. Maomao later discovered some problems after receiving suggestions from other readers, and he could only make adjustments and improvements later. I don't want to say that writing is a closed thing. I can only say that serious feedback from readers and asking questions are important, and writing also requires communication. If you raise a problem now, correct it immediately. After a long time, you may not have the energy to modify the previous one. But those meaningless "Is this really Jian Yu's book? I'm so disappointed" have no effect except hurting myself and others. If possible, I hope everyone can explain clearly why I am disappointed, where I am disappointed, what I hope or think can be done better, which plot is useless to me, etc. After all, only in this way can Maomao improve. The better she writes, the more enjoyable it will be for us to watch, right? Finally, I wish you well no matter whether you are leaving or turning from pink to black. Thank you for stopping by.

😰 It's been a long time since I've been here, so is this Jianyu Dada? The thief likes her novels, and the second half of the book The Soul-Controlling Thief is no longer published😔 What a pity, I want to collect them all

I have drawn a fanart of the enchanting Summoner. I really hope I have the opportunity to give it to Mao Dada. Is there anyone who can help give it to the author? Because I am a foreigner 😭, who has a gmail~?

The author's talent has really been buried. I love this author's book. The plot is great, but some of the text is really watery. It would be better to remove the watery plot a little. Personally,

The enchanting summoner is so good-looking, why doesn't he seem to be more famous? The story is obviously bigger than many male pornographic novels, but it is a pity that no one has turned it into a comic... I didn't meet Bole in this novel. If I were a good artist, I would definitely recommend that I turn her into a cartoon 😭

The content is quite interesting, but there's really no need to call it a heroine. It's written like a male comic book, so it's hard to comment. I've seen it, no less than ten times, and it's actually a woman. I don't even want to say what's so great about this bitch. Then the heroine comes and slaps her in the face. There are so many scenes of patriarchal preference. If you have already become immortals, is there any need to be so obsessed with men being strong and women being weak? Isn't cultivating immortality the true beginning of equality between men and women? There is still this prejudiced view that men are strong and women are weak. Also, every time the male protagonist appears in various appearances, he automatically gains a group of fans. Why don't I see that the female protagonist has fans as soon as she appears? She also has to be looked down upon by others every time, and then she suddenly has fans after being slapped in the face. What people admire is not the heroine herself, what he admires is Qiang. He doesn't worship women at all. As for the male protagonist, at that point, countless people kissed him. The female protagonist also had to fight with other female protagonists who liked the male protagonist. Two women competed for one male, and they were drunk. Every time the male protagonist and the male protagonist stood together, the male protagonist was definitely in the C position. The male protagonist did not dare to compete with the male protagonist. So, is our female protagonist a gift? My love for my boyfriend has reached this point, and I'm really drunk. There is also the male protagonist who has always been stronger than the female protagonist, so much so. He became an immortal in a dream, the female protagonist keeps leveling up and fighting monsters, and the male protagonist sleeps every day. Is this a male protagonist? Let me ask. Hey, even the female supporting character is more popular than the female protagonist. Seriously, if this book had a different female protagonist and made the female protagonist a purple ring, it would really be called a great heroine. The 666 female protagonist is the descendant of the mercenary who protects the female supporting character, and she is also the protector of their love. Yes, if this book is about the growth history of a small character, then there is no need to assign him such a humiliating identity, and there is no need to assign him such an embarrassing male protagonist. The male protagonist is born because of the female partner and the male partner. I am drunk, and I want to ask who the female protagonist is? The heroine should be Zi Huan, right? The male protagonist should be Xu Ling, right? I really love men to no end. There was one chapter in particular that made me very angry after reading it. I would like to ask what does it mean for the heroine to stay with the male protagonist as the heroine? A heroine novel about a heroine is written with such righteous words. I would like to ask, has the male protagonist ever described the male protagonist as the heroine's furnace? For a while, he fought with the male protagonist as the demon lord, and for a while, he pretended to be beside the male protagonist as Lu Ding. The limelight is all given to the male protagonist. Who knew that the powerful demon lord was the female protagonist? Everyone can only see that he is a pitiful little deer tripod who is picked up next to the male protagonist. I said, do you need to describe the female protagonist in this way? Let's go for the main female lead, there's nothing more to say. In fact, I am also a little despairing of this world. I have never heard of those stories that are called male protagonists, because everyone assumes that men are better than women. Is this even true for words? It's obviously a space for brain communication, but are women's bodies weaker than men's? Are brains weaker than men's? I don't believe it! Really angry

Is it my imagination? I feel like most of them have won Upgrade, fight monsters and pick up treasures, cave academy auction Complete the task and download the copy, change the map of the fairy world. I am extremely talented and have good bones, and one year of training is worth ten years. I am an expert in all aspects of alchemy, weapons and formations. The partners are all fighting scum, and they stand aside to show their surprise during the fight. If you have lots of ideas and are lucky, junk skills can turn into treasures You can sweep all the players at the same level, so it is not difficult to fight across levels.

Maomao's achievements in previous works "The Female Thief" Won the first place in the Xiaoxiang monthly ticket list

Some people say it feels noisy, some people say it is representative, and some people say that they do not write according to their own style in order to cater to the market. What I want to say is that if an author loses his own style in writing, he will only try to cater to the market against his will, and will only lose the soul of his writing. Even the novels he writes will give people a sense of The feeling of being soulless. Even if you imitate the style of other authors to cater to the market, it will give readers the feeling of having only a form but no soul, making readers lose the pleasure of reading. This is why some novels of 2 million words have more than 1,000 comments, while some novels of 7 to 8 million words only have 1,000 comments. There are two to three hundred reasons, and I have read this novel from beginning to end, and it gives me a feeling that it is not written by the author himself, nor does it feel like a ghostwriter, but like it was written by dozens of people. It reminds me that e-commerce sales companies implement a system of firing people after one to two weeks of poor performance. As a result, in the long run, dozens of employees have chatted with customers in a business account. Then when I opened the communication record of that customer, there are various chat styles. It's messy. Just discuss the matter as it is. Don't complain if you don't like it.

It had been going well up front, but it ended in a hurry. Still the most perfect female thief who controls the spirit

I only admire Maomao as a female novelist. Her writings frequently shock me. It can be said that they have shaped some of my reading preferences and outlook on reading. From Enchanting Encounter, to Controlling Spirits, to Ten Thousand Beasts, over the years, my preference in reading articles has continued to change. From long-form novels to JJ short articles, my patience in reading articles has gradually decreased. I once thought that I would never be able to read long novels, even 200,000 to 300,000 words. Until I met Maomao again and saw all the beasts, really, the flavor was right. Maybe it wasn't my patience, but the rhythm of Maomao's writing was so good and so immersive. Even if I wrote the article for a long time, I couldn't forget or abandon it after reading it. Every time I read it, I still have something to say. In short, Maomao's female mystery is an important cornerstone of my reading journey, and it is a mirror for me to view all fantasy and immortality themes. I express my love for Maomao, so when will the new article be published?

There's nothing to say about the writing style of Feather's book, but I really don't have the desire to read this book, which is a pity! The halo effect of the heroine is too great. The heroine's own hardships and growth are ten thousand times more interesting than the Golden Finger halo. Why do we need a male protagonist? Even if there is one, I hope it can be used as a background board. Looking forward to a new book, it is best not to have a male protagonist. Except for Ao Qing, the male protagonists in all the books are annoying. The female slave thief is Bai Yueguang in my mind, second in enchantment. There are very few authors who can compare with Feather. Feather is also number one in my heart. I look forward to better works.

＊＊The great realm of Lingu: ＊The realm of monks seeking immortality: The first step is to refine the qi: condense the qi, build the foundation, and consecrate the light. The fourth step is to refine the emptiness and combine the Tao: Dongxu, Mahayana, and Hedao; The fifth step: Celestial Immortal, True Immortal, and Xuanxian; The upper three vacancies: ignorance, purity, and dryness The middle three vacancies: extreme, split, and hazy The lower three vacancies: emptiness, silence, and epilepsy The ultimate: eternity Moon gazing: dark moon, white moon, silver moon; Risheng: turbid yang, red sun, shining yang (Those who get yue gao are expected to form elixirs; those who get sun gazing, they are the seed of heaven and earth) Those who are nine feet tall are top-grade miscellaneous roots; those who are nearly ten feet are top-grade miscellaneous roots. More than ten feet tall, reaching the true spirit. ＊Elixir quality: Drug dregs, broken elixir, three-split, two-split, one-split, flawless, perfect, containing light, five colors, wind and cloud, sky light, returning to nature, beast shadow, fourteen realms of heaven and man. ＊Weapons/Coins/Beasts: Step One: Magical Treasures/French Currencies/Spiritual Beasts Step Two: Spiritual Treasures/Spiritual Money/Spiritual Beasts Step Three: Divine Treasures/Divine Silver/Divine Beasts Step Four: Taoist Treasures/Taojin/Divine Beasts Step 5: Immortal treasure/immortal yuan/immortal beast ＊＊The great realm of the sky: ＊Mecha combat power: ten levels each Apprentice machine, elite machine, master machine, hermit machine, divine armor, powerful divine armor Martial Arts Master = Out of Body, Distraction, Return to the Void Martial Arts = Dongxu, Mahayana, Hedao Martial Gods = Celestial Immortals, True Immortals, Xuanxian Great Powerful Martial Arts Gods = Taiyi, Daluo, Hunyuan Daluo Xuanxian = Bronze Army Lord Taiyi Immortal = Silver Army Lord Daluo Immortal = Gold Army Lord Hunyuan Daluo = Army Emperor Alchemy King

The author is great, with layers of foreshadowing and plot twists. The story is exciting and majestic, just like Enchanting and Taming the Spirit. It's really good to read. Although some people say that the previous writing style is a bit exaggerated and white, I think it is the author's cute little humor ~ Buqiyu. In my heart, it is better than the Fairy Gourd of Mortal Women. It is my favorite novel along with the Atlas of Immortals, Long Journey to Immortality, and All the Male Cultivators in the World series. I sincerely recommend it. I pray that the author will write a new fantasy novel about immortals. I am willing to spend two or three times the money to buy the novel to support it❤️

The new text is here and there... There is no sign of a sequel... Author, have you forgotten the porridge Zhou Zhou on the shore of Daming Lake! ? ? 😭😭😭

It's a very good book. I've already read it for the second time. It will become more and more exciting after leaving the initial world of cultivation.

First of all, it was indeed written by Maomao himself. It has been many years, but I still remember that when writing this book, Mao often stayed up late coding and we stayed up late to work... This book was first published by Yunqi/q. Mao considered that the readers on the other platforms were generally younger and made many attempts. This is also the reason why the writing style is very different from the previous books and has changed many times br>Qidian is just a channel, and internal changes in Yuewen have caused this book to be put on and off the shelves several times The copyrights of Enchanting and Female Thief in Xiaoxiang have expired, and are now taken back by Maomao himself, without renewal. Now Yuewen does not have the copyright of these two books, so they cannot be seen The former female thief The publication was also due to internal problems due to the acquisition of Xiaoxiang, and all the connections were abandoned. The author himself did not get any profit and even posted a lot There were some changes in Mao's family, which took up a lot of time, so there was no activity in recent years There has never been a studio or ghostwriting... The author also has no publicity. Company, just signed a contract with the platform Maybe the writing in this book has many problems, is not brilliant, and fails to meet your expectations, but it does not pretend to be someone else's name to make money And there is a time to spread rumors in the comment area, so why not just go into the bird's nest and ask Maomao himself with the full order record of any of the author's works?

Oh my god, I thought this writing style was a bit enchanting, but I also felt a bit ignorant. After reading the book review, I realized that it was actually the original author! ? But isn't this result not very good?

This book has been finished for a while, and I suddenly saw the comments using my Qidian account, and I had some old things to say. The first 100,000 words of Ten Thousand Beasts were really revised several times. When I started writing, there were editor suggestions, summaries, and readers' opinions (including mine). The result was that what Mao wrote at the beginning really did not meet the book circle's standards for good articles at the beginning, which was not good for recommendation, so some elements were written differently in the rest of the article. I feel the same way, but friends who have read old articles know that her articles are just like this. They lay out the lines and bury the pits naturally, and the more they read, the more interesting they become. I won't say too much about them, but they do have their own advantages and disadvantages. Books have always been like this. At the beginning, we choose the book, and then we will keep people in the later books, and then we will get to know the author. Finally, wait for each other and trust each other. I would like to say sincerely, if you like Nv Xuan and insist on Nv Xuan, I highly recommend Ten Thousand Beasts. If you really can't chew it, please leave politely. See you elsewhere in the book circle.

I'm still very curious, how did the author write the setting that the male and female protagonists are derivatives of male and female partners? Is there a contrast? Laughed