Rising Star of Style and Sports

I originally thought I wanted to write about sports, but ended up going to film school😅

Can you write faster? I really don't like the writing speed.

Read a few chapters and tell me your feelings. I feel like you basically don't use any embellishment techniques in your writing, it's too colloquial, and you feel like you just write whatever comes to your mind. It's okay to imitate how other entertainment novels are written. Also, it's a bit cool. Basically, a problem occurs and then the problem is solved. There is no foreshadowing or anything like that. Also, the purpose is not very clear. Although you are writing about entertainment now, you said in your article that you will engage in sprinting in the future. In fact, it is not necessary. If you started out as a sprinter and then became a big star, it would be more comfortable for readers. If you started out in entertainment and then moved on to sports, some people might feel uncomfortable. Entertainment texts are originally niche texts, and sports texts are even more niche. They should be interesting from childhood to adulthood, right? Just say it, I hope the author's novels will get better and better as he writes them.

Since I write about literature and sports, women in the sports world should also be included

Although the writing style is a bit dull, come on, there are not many authors in Huayu now. Should the author consider whether the heroine Tong Liya can imitate Lao Xu? I will definitely nail it 😁😁😁

The whole article is full of "white". It can be seen that the author is indeed a newcomer, but I still like the author's subject matter. I hope the author will be more delicate when dealing with the relationship between characters in the future. The villain's IQ should not drop too low. The most important thing is to practice his writing. Come on

Just now a sparrow ran onto the glue that stuck the mouse. Although I got it off, it felt like it couldn't survive. There was too much glue on it. How could I get it off? I washed it with gasoline but it didn't work.

Author, I would like to give you some advice. Liu Tianxian also grew up in the United States, and her family is relatively close to the upper class. However, the character you describe is the kind of princess in fairy tales who is inexperienced in the world. And the audience of our current Chinese entertainment literature is basically around 20 or 30 years old. It is difficult for them to have a sense of empathy with your description of the character. Moreover, Tianxian's own artistic quality is quite high, let's not talk about singing 😁, so the character you describe is the mentality of a thirteen or fourteen-year-old girl, which is quite different from the imagination of many friends 😁 Personal advice. . . 😓😓I think your grades will be much better if you change your personality 🤤🤤

I guess there is only one book friend reading my novel, and the rest are his trumpets. Otherwise, how could it be so neat and uniform?

Personally speaking, your book doesn't feel as pretentious as other novels, and there's no such thing as a harem scumbag and a gun king, so you can try adding a competitive plot, similar to an all-around athlete, and in terms of acting, I think you should focus on dog food, such as creating a variety show male star. You can write more about sports, and then occasionally act, or you can put on variety shows and spread all kinds of shit. Of course, these are all personal opinions and thoughts, and the author's own thoughts are the most important.

Author, you don't actually need to create any system. I'm tired of reading system articles. The protagonist, the rich second generation plus a time traveler, is already very powerful. Adding another system is completely superfluous.

Come on, author💪There is no need to care too much about other people's opinions. The current online writing circle is too restrictive for new authors. There is no need for authors to be too stressed. You can treat this book as a practice. I am optimistic that your next book will be a hit 😁😁😁

The 100-meter score jumps forward at 0.1, 0.1, And it doesn't show up in training... The acceptance level will be relatively low.

Is it on the shelves? ? ? Come on and write! Hope there will be a good subscription! 🌹

It's better to just change Lin Yifei to Sissi, it's easier!

The author could just change Lin Yifei to Tianxian, which would be more pleasant to the ears than the current name.

What about my previous posts? I still want to add something...

In fact, the author's writing style is a bit immature. The second book's writing style is smoother, but there are many more empty-minded people and heavy ink descriptions, which is very hurtful. Only the author can persist in writing and will master the writing power and routines that China Entertainment needs. Speaking of this, I really want to fuck that salted fish's ass

I feel like I have lost my soul😶🙃😶

Yang Mi was still a young actor at that time, and how could she get hundreds of thousands? Moreover, the salary at that time was still very low. It would be good to get hundreds of thousands for a TV series, and the TV series at that time only had 20 or 30 episodes.

When you see Chapter 66 and give out red envelopes, please ask the author to be more careful, look up more information, and try not to just talk. I point out a mistake here. When the word "Da Tui" refers to banknotes, it refers to the third set of RMB with a face value of 10 yuan. Five pieces of "Da Tui" are equivalent to 50 yuan. . . .

How can the latest chapter make me feel like the Godfather of the Movie? 😓

I can't understand the latest two chapters. I can only say that this is the most vulgar routine of Huayu novels in the past few years! ! ! Full of greasiness! The author needs to improve his writing and plot description

Does the author have a harem?

The shortcomings of this book are that the protagonist is tall, rich and handsome, but he is still Long Aotian and the Almighty King. The most important thing is that the protagonist is too easy-going. The author himself likes certain celebrities. The protagonist is too friendly to certain celebrities, unconditionally willing to help others, and treats celebrities too lowly.

Author, why don't you have any new books?

The author is also Biao. It's such an entertainment novel, but the label is sports. You're kidding me! No wonder there are so few people now