Wu Zhou Xiaoquan

Let me tell you, there is no problem with the general direction, but the writing is too impatient. Is the protagonist acting willfully or is he stupid? From the description, I see a person who is impulsive, irritable, panicked, and easy to take things for granted. Not only the protagonist, but other characters are more or less too impatient. In addition, the plot description is too simple, often passing by in one stroke, which seems very deliberate. The plot is important, but the description must match it. Okay, maybe it's a bit blunt, but I still hope it can give some help to new authors.

Although the writing style is a bit rusty, it is still a good book at the starting point. For example, the ancient people's speech should not have any trace of modern people's speech except pig's feet. Come on.

I think this book is good and very informative.

The red envelopes are unlocked. It's good. I was attracted by it from the beginning. I decided to add a bookshelf to enrich it. Good luck to the author!

What a noob🙏

It's not very popular. It's such a pity for a good book.

Don't be discouraged. The only way to get a new book

This book is bound to be a hit! I hope the author will not be impatient, stay down-to-earth, and write according to the plan.

Stick to your own style, listen appropriately to other people's suggestions, and be yourself, that's enough. Come on, Hansi

Always feel something is wrong

It's quite interesting, I hope to improve it to the next level.