Escape That Secret Room

Thanks to the beautiful author for making me suddenly feel like picking up the eunuch's book. I have finished reading the book, and I hope the author will continue to update it. However, since I have read the book, I think it is a bit regretful not to leave anything behind, so let me talk about my views on this book. 1. This should be the author's second book. Compared with the first book, the author's current writing style has obviously changed, becoming much more mature, and the logic is much clearer; 2. The author chose a suspense style. In my impression, suspense novels require stronger logic. Although it can be seen that the author tries his best to avoid logical errors, compared to the high-demand suspense novels, the author's logic is still a bit out of the ordinary, especially in the first chapter; 3. As for the writing style of this book, I feel that the author Da Da's description of dialogue and emotions is more popular with me, and the writing is more delicate. This is also one of the many advantages of the author Da Da. However, I think it still needs to be strengthened in the dialogue design. A sentence with an obvious meaning was written by the author Da Da, which made me a little baffled (the last sentence of the first dialogue between the heroine and the dormitory aunt); 4. Last but not least, the author must persist. The first reason is because this book has been signed. The second reason is because there will be no results if you don't insist on writing a novel. The third reason is that this book has potential in my opinion. As long as the author does not make plot design mistakes in the subsequent plot description and strengthens the logic, this book will be a relatively high-quality novel.

Although I am a male author, but as a bookworm for several years I would like to make a few comments. Author, your writing style is a bit poor, that is, it is not very full. But as a new author, you will definitely not be as strong as the great masters. I suggest you read some novels written by great masters to learn from them. Although I have never written a novel, I have been a bookworm for several years. I hope some trolls can take a detour. Thank you.

Although I am a boy, I beg you to add a few more chapters 🤭🙏