The Greatest Thief of All Time

People on the right come over and subscribe to support! Old man, you are a little obsessed with this book! Friendly advice, finish it as soon as possible and open another one!

，，，，，，，，，       High, the routine is similar to what it was a few years ago. If the author wants to write well and attract readers, he or she should study the 100 or so books on the list. Those are more meaningful. If you still want to write according to your own ideas, it is recommended not to give out red envelopes and save some money. Of course, the author may not care about the money, but if the quality of the book itself is not good, even if it attracts readers, it will not be retained. I didn't read the book carefully so I just mentioned it briefly. Come on, author!

Forgive me, I really can't understand 😅 The preface doesn't match the postscript, what's the highlight of the theme? The characters are always mysterious people, and after rebirth, they are the so-called Aunt Zhu, who has been the adoptive father and mother. Aunt Zhu, who has raised the protagonist for sixteen years, wants to kill the protagonist when she first sees him! What do you want to express!

First of all, thank you to the author for the red envelope. I give you the vote. After reading the previous chapter, I feel that the author's writing style really needs to be improved. The first chapter should be as calm as possible, and the background of the characters should be described more to make the characters as full and three-dimensional as possible. The previous plot is too tense, which highlights the problem of too many and too old routines. The author should read more and learn more, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Come on, author, give me some personal opinions. After all, I got a red envelope, and I don't feel comfortable with the protagonist's name, Thief Xiaoliu, Yaomei... If the name is better, I feel it will be more comfortable to read.

I got the red envelope and reluctantly read Chapter 15. I was so addicted that I would like to remind the author that the beginning of a book is very, very important. Your beginning can make people confused, especially the first chapter. This routine should have been OK ten years ago, but if it is used now, many people will give up after reading it.

I was attracted by the author's red envelope for the second time. I wanted to vote for you three times, only to find that today's votes are gone. I'm sorry. Although I was fascinated by it, I thought about it carefully, what would happen if I wrote it myself? Well, it probably looks like this too. But I don't even have one percent of the author's perseverance. Well, (holding head in hands) after reading your homepage, I admit that your perseverance impressed me. I won't read the book. I want to give you some attention, boss. .

YouIf you want the novel world to change because of you, you must first enter the novel world and subtly change your readers from those who read cool novels to those who read classics. You also need to tie your own literary level to the golden finger of the protagonist, otherwise you will not even know. What else do you want us to think

Come on, the best thief in ancient and modern times by Little Flying Monkey

Writer, please work hard!

The No. 1 Thief in Ancient and Modern Times by Little Flying Monkey

The little thief is here to steal experience😏

"A strange world where martial arts and cultivation coexist"? ? ? What does this sentence mean?

The lack of subject is serious, I hope a subject can be added.

I give you a vote of recommendation, your writing still needs practice.

I was attracted by the red envelope, so I was too anxious to write. Today's readers are all about fast food, and no one will scrutinize your foreshadowing. It would be better to write the causes and consequences clearly.

Actually According to logic (for those with strong spatial thinking ability), it is not difficult to understand this book, and it looks good. The main thing is that what I pursue when reading novels is just the word "enjoyment". If I can't string together the first three articles, I will give up. Let me introduce you to a book about psychology. Once you understand the psychology of the protagonist or the psychology of the reader, you will be able to write better. Also, thank you for your article, it's very nice.

WhyWhy do I just get 13 starting coins and tell you so many things that you may not read?💔

Thank youAuthor red envelope

Why add the word "thief"? Are you afraid that others will not know that you are a thief? I totally can't understand using this character as a surname. Even Lin Xiaoliu and Wang Xiaoliu will do.

The new book "Crazy Martial Arts" has 100,000 words and is ready to be read!