World Shuttler in Marvel

After finishing the seedlings, my usual review_(:з∠)_ A very good novel with a reasonable plot and an online IQ. The protagonist's principles are also in line with most people's views. He usually abides by the rules, but will overturn the table when encountering someone who doesn't follow the rules. I also have a few comments to make. First of all, since the protagonist is not the Bone King, don't engage in any talk of 🐔(ಡωಡ) Secondly, since the changes have been caused to the world, don't engage in world will, plot corrections, etc. In the future. . Finally, I hope you won't be like a certain river. Every time the protagonist does something, there are unknown potential consequences, as if the world is against the protagonist. . Finally, come on, author~

I really wanted to write this character, and Anne also occupies a very important part in the outline. But everyone said they don't like the character of Anne, so after I finish writing the current plot, I will try to reduce Anne's appearance as much as possible in the future.

The little girl may be a poisonous person, the author's description is not good

It means that I was very embarrassed watching the plot between the protagonist and his sister () = convex!

The protagonist is introduced as a cautious person at the beginning. This is the character template setting, but it is almost invisible in the subsequent plot. Has the magic changed? Being cautious means thinking more and doing less, not a sign of low IQ. How high is the starting point for a protagonist who has achieved career success and has not exposed himself for ten years? When his sister is in trouble, he seeks strength in another world. That day is a special key point. There is no need to prepare in advance for such a day. Waiting for others to take advantage of their weaknesses to distract themselves? He claims to be a businessman and capitalist, but he has no sense of precaution at all. What can he do if he shows hindsight? And then a cautious person gets some strength and then drifts away? When negotiating a deal with Tony and knowing that Tony was being targeted by SHIELD, did he immediately reveal his magic? He is powerful and powerful, but he doesn't even know SHIELD is aware of the counter-investigation before taking action? Then suddenly he was exposed by S. H. I. E. L. D. So cautious! Let's not comment on the protagonist's sudden act of letting go of himself and wanting to be a villain and rub the earth. You started the war, but the initial purpose was just to show your strength and gain status, and you suddenly wanted to start a war with four forces at the same time~ Even the rare props that made you snap your fingers and the instant-death props that could kill purple sweet potatoes were used in such a meaningless manner. He also established a hostile force that would have to be destroyed in the future~ If we say that adopting a younger sister is because she is lonely and cold and needs the warmth of a family, then that's it. But from the beginning, I planned to develop a lolita. What kind of trick would it be to become a playboy later~ The contrast in the character of your protagonist ten years ago and ten years later has made you underestimate S. H. I. E. L. D. Or Hydra.

Hey, I've read more than 70 chapters, so let's make a review. I'll just say that the author's understanding of the Marvel universe should be easy to find. The author didn't check it before writing the book. He just wrote based on the settings he understood from watching the movies. Therefore, many settings make readers who are familiar with Marvel very uncomfortable. But this setting can be ignored. What makes me uncomfortable are the several turns in the plot. 10 Years The last point was very abrupt. My sister was kidnapped as soon as I came out to make a phone call. It was very abrupt, but it was all caused by not much writing. It was a bit like some cutscenes were deliberately edited to control the length of the movie. The most uncomfortable thing was the appearance of the braised eggs. Tell me, why were there so many pitfalls and so many plot points that could be written, and then you turned around and the plan changed? Didn't you write an outline? When I saw you conquering the earth directly, I thought you had mixed it up with fake wine. The plot was suddenly changed. I'm not talking about the original plot of Marvel, but the plot of your book was suddenly changed. You are making people laugh and can't keep up with your pace. It may take you a week to write that plot, but we readers only need an hour to watch it. We can't keep up.

How can you cook when you have lost your memory... Won't Annie question it? Just accept the protagonist's words?

My sister is indeed a poisonous person, I suggest you tone it down

The protagonist of a time-traveling book doesn't even keep the most basic confidentiality, and immediately loses interest. Also, if he is calm and cautious, there will be nothing he can do.

It is recommended to downplay the role of Anne, because if the description is too much, there will be a feeling that everything the protagonist does is for her, and it feels a bit licking.