Multiverse Delegation System

I came here from Dim Sum Dada's "I am the Northeastern Horse Fairy" to comment on it. When I opened it, I discovered that I am actually a writer. I took a quick glance at what you wrote. What can I say? Your logic is really touching. I would like to ask, you guys who know so much about being on the street, and are stupid here and there, why can't you use your energy on your own works and avoid being castrated repeatedly. You've scrambled your eggs, and you're still scolding other people's cooks for making dishes that are salty? When you compare your results, don't you feel ashamed? Your place is pretty good, there isn't even anyone looking for trouble 🤭

The rhythm control is a bit poor, there are many irrelevant plots, the contradictions are poorly established , and the writing is immature

I seem to see the fate of this stupid new guy from Africa, but persistence is victory. Who knows if this person will leave his name after a century. Wish him good luck...