Making a Name in the NBA

Why is the current timeline of the author's blood novel so early? It's already 2015. As a 93-year-old, I suddenly feel old. Is the author planning to retire after only writing about the game for a few years?

Read Chapter 17. It feels a bit plain and doesn't catch people very much at the beginning. If we compare it to a table of dishes, at present, the cooking techniques and hygiene are good, and the taste is quite satisfactory. It is definitely not unpalatable, but it is not attractive either. It just lacks some features, but it's still watchable, and there's nothing bad about it so far. But you can also put it down at any time, without the urge to stay up late to read.

I just saw where my grandfather appears and the description of his connections. Is the protagonist a mixed race? This setting is not pleasant. I suggest the author first explain the background setting and era of the protagonist when starting a book next time. Are you a seasoned reader of basketball articles? Will you choose a book based on the content you want to read instead of slowly spreading out the outline like a fantasy novel? In fact, I think it would be more appropriate for you to write a fantasy novel, or a fantasy novel. . .

If you want to achieve results as an author, you should be more catered to the public. If you just want to write something you like, there is nothing to say.

I feel like the writing is too bland and I really can't stand it 😅

Finish it quickly and start a new book

Emm, can the author's update be stabilized?