I Stole Your Luck

You can learn from the Yakuza's upgrade model at the beginning of the book, but you can slowly adjust your thinking later. I believe it will get better and better

This extra post,,, seriously affects the reading experience.

Let's reopen it, what I wrote before is very poor. Besides. There are too many wry smiles, and the word wry smile is the most poisonous point among poisonous points. The traces of writing software are also too heavy.

Come on, author🤭

He brutally killed Chen Zixing and cheated to seduce the heroine. The more exciting the killing, the more rewards.

Chapter 24: Ninth level of health-preserving skills. Upgrading uses divine power. Paste and copy. Forgot to change it?

Starting from Chapter 25, the water has reached the bottom. You are going to the street.

It's too watery, and it doesn't work when it comes to women in the back. Although it's watery in the front, you can still read it after a quick jump. But when you write about women in the back, you start to feel alienated. It feels like the protagonist has various problems. I don't know how other people feel.

Passing by ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

It should be interesting if you read it carefully, but unfortunately this is the starting point. The biggest problem is that the pace is too slow, followed by the serious illness of young people.

I feel like the writing in these pages is so confusing that I can't understand them. . .

The plot arrangement is too deliberate and makes it uncomfortable to watch.

Very well written, about luck, stealing luck requires skills. I think this point is well written. In the past, I saw that there was a system to tell whose luck to take, and it was easy to get it. It was disgusting. There was a period in particular when I was jealous of my classmates' intelligence and good grades, and then used the system to steal their wisdom. . . . Then there are also those who kill people to seize luck, which is acceptable, but still not as innovative as the author's writing. Is this another problem? If you can conquer a person's luck, what should you do if you become a good friend? ? ? The following is my suggestion. You can write more about luck stealing strategies, and focus on how to strategy. The second is to write more protagonists. For reference, there are many stories about cleaning up time travel, such as when the big devil wakes up or. . . Find the title of the book. .

Author, when will you publish a new book?

The author's writing skills, plot and imagination are not lacking. I guess he didn't intend to write it well at the beginning, and he copied it from others. After seeing the results, he now wants to change it, so if he supports it, he may become a platinum master. It is recommended that the previous ones be readjusted and formatted.

It feels like Xiaohuan is the master, and he treats the protagonist as a slave for a long time.

Author, I'm speechless. Can you write the main plot well? There are also characters like "Ah Shou", "Big Eyes" and "Zhang Small Eyes". They are not the main plot characters. Why are you writing about them? Can you write a big main plot that goes on and on? You write so many other aspects and they are of no use to the protagonist. I have no interest in writing anymore.