The Swimming Fish Goes North and Returns to the Underworld as Kun

I was blown away by the girl's beauty... Not by her talent. Let me just say a few words: I always feel that good writing is made by grinding it out, just like stewed fish. It is simmered over low heat and high to reduce the juice. After stewing for a long time, the flavor will come out. Writing is not a takeaway fast food. It can be used as soon as the microwave is hot. It can only satisfy hunger, has no nutrition, and will damage the kidneys after a long time - cough, hurt the body... The fish stewed by the girl is excellent: First of all, the writing style. I came from a major in ancient Chinese, which is equivalent to graduating from a gold medal chef school. Anyway, at my level, I can only worship it. As for the dialect... The occasional embellishment is quite interesting, but too much is not good and ruins the atmosphere; Chronology, careful consideration of words and sentences, striving for perfection, even ordinary characters are required to collect name and characteristic setting poems (?), Which is very rare. Good cooking skills also require a good attitude, which is also indispensable; The last is the story, at first I thought it was borrowed from The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, but I ended up overthinking it. A girl can have such a concept and layout that is comparable to that of a master, and the characters she creates are flesh and blood. The protagonists and supporting characters have their own styles, and they are not just based on their own styles. I admire it very much. Women are not inferior to men, and this is what it means. After praising, I have to complain: the heroine really died too early, so that although the story is interesting, there is always a sense of sadness when reading it. I do not reject tragedy, but there seems to be a saying that it is sad but not sad? Personally, I boldly suggest that the girl should find a way to reconcile and ask the male protagonist for a second love, sincerely 🙏

The mountains and rivers are surging, and great treasures will be poured out; the sky and the earth are clear, and I am afraid that I will lose my old king. The treacherous, sycophantic and rotten Confucianists say that the emperor's orders are true; the good generals in the border towns patrol in vain because of their merits. In such a big country, although its golden palaces and silver palaces shine thousands of miles away, in the world, it can only be clothed in sackcloth and cry with sorrowful clouds. At this time, the Xuanping Lu family suffered a disaster, prompting the youngest son Ming to rebel. Eventually, Beichen changed hands and Greedy Wolf was assassinated. Silang first joined the Zhao army and met his close friend Yan Qixie. In the following decades, the two supported each other, broke through barriers and conquered cities, and seized great treasures. Shilang became emperor and Xiaowu became king. How can they live a happy life? However, things in the world are yin and yang, and misfortunes and blessings are intertwined. Shiro is indeed the British master, but he is destined to be the only star of evil. First, the first wife fell into the city and died, and then the eldest daughter died before she was a month old. When you reach the great treasure and your heirs die, how can you bear the pain of two sons drowning? Finally, Mrs. Cheng entered the palace and got both children, but she made a big mistake. Although Lu Mingzhi collapsed, how could everything follow the wind? Dynasties change, the color of heaven and earth changes, and there are all kinds of right and wrong. What does it have to do with the concubines of the Ning family, Liang family, and Cheng family? However, the deeds of a hero will eventually harm his family, and the deeds of an emperor will harm his descendants. The ancients said: "Don't talk about the matter of making a prince. One general can make thousands of bones wither." If ten thousand bones are just generals and soldiers, the soldiers will use their lives and sacrifice their lives for the country, which is their duty. But among all the bones, how many are innocent? Beauty geometry? What's the geometry of the vertical hair? Shiro achieved unparalleled great achievements, and he also carried out unparalleled great deeds. This is the only path that people in ancient times must pass. However, although Shilang had experience, his character was less aggressive. He was not as thick and black as the Han ancestors, and lacked the absolute justice of the Tang Zong. Therefore, he was in a high position but did not have a prosperous age. Looking at his life, things started from Ning's words, and the gods were disturbed by Ning's death. Everything after that was all because of this. It can be criticized in one sentence: "A Ying is a success, A Ying is a failure; A Ying is a life, A Ying is a death."

Lu Mingzhi, whose courtesy name is Beikun The name is Qikun Shenming, and the courtesy name is Beiming Shenkun. The name came from an elder in the family, but he was homeless when he lost his name. Swords and swords, wars and disputes, iron-blooded armies, tender bones and long-lasting love. A romance from the perspective of the male protagonist, a story of dramatic changes in mountains and rivers. Ning Chen killed his father, killed his brother, forced his aunt to death, and obtained the title of Marquis of Qi Wei. Later, under the emperor's instruction, the entire Xuanping Hou Mansion was massacred on the charge of "anti-thief". The emperor was extravagant and extravagant, and the people of the world were in dire straits. Rebels were everywhere, and Lu Mingzhi also joined one of Xuanping's rebels, and later named the army "Zhao". Ning Yichen is one of the characters that impressed me the most. Sheng Huai'an, the first minister of the dynasty, praised her as "Gan Luo's appearance and Yan Ying's talent". When Ning Chen took action, she rescued Lu Mingzhi through secret arrangements. She secretly engaged in horse breeding business, ran a pastry shop, and satin shop. While subsidizing the household expenses deducted by Ning Chen, she supported Zhao Jun's expenses. Later, the Zhao army killed Ning Chen and captured Xuan Ping. Ning Yichen followed Lu Mingzhi to the north. Along the way, he also showed the characteristics of taking the overall situation into consideration, thinking carefully and acting calmly. Lu Mingzhi has a jade face and starry eyes, outstanding marksmanship, Yan Qixie is a bit of a genius, modified artillery, Yan Chu is a child prodigy in Xinglin, has superb medical skills, Cheng Nianrong is accurate in divination... Xue Yanbi can be regarded as a young hero. I originally thought that Thorn Star would follow Po Yue••• I originally thought that Lu Mingzhi was actually a "dead person" after the Lu family was slaughtered by everyone. This is probably the "love of life and death". However, I was still too young to guess the plot. I also thought that Nian Rong was the little girl that the nun carried out under the ruins of the Lu family. What was her identity in the Lu family?

Short review: Kun lives in the deep dark, goes north to the underworld, and travels ten thousand miles Book title: "The Fish Goes North and Returns to the Underworld to Be Kun" Author: Yi'er Keywords: war, rebellion, ancient sayings, fiction, classical Work link: Commentator: I am not Xiaoxiu Introduction: When Lu Mingzhi was fourteen years old, someone threw the iron certificate of his family's alchemy book in front of him. From then on, he marched north, and there was no Mingzhi in the world. You Yu went north and returned to the underworld as Kun. After ascending to the Ninth Five-Year Plan, he wanted to go back to the time when he was fourteen years old and call the girl who broke the iron coupon of the elixir book: "Aying..." Book review: I was just casually flipping through the book, but after reading five chapters, I suddenly became interested and read all the way. When I read the end of the fourth chapter, the "History of Zhao" appeared for the first time: In the eleventh year of Jianping in the former Yue Dynasty, Taizu first met King Yan Qixie of Changning. Taizu was young. When he saw King Changning talking about the secret of his life, he was so angry that he strangled King Changning's neck, and the king nearly died. "                                                                                                         In the early years, this usage was included in "The Story of the Founding of the Kingdom of China" and "The House of the Three Kingdoms", and more recently in "The Overthrow of the Han Dynasty", but in this book, it is more consistent with "The Chronicles of Taizu", sometimes "The Family of the Prince of Changning", "Aristocratic Families of the Hexi Province", and there are also references to "Tiangong Kaiwu" and "Collection of Cultural Relics and Anecdotes". Most of the time it is a brief summary of the classic plot, and sometimes it is used to replace part of the vernacular. The classical Chinese in "Zhao Shi" is very considerate of readers. The word selection is common and simple, and the grammar has also been adjusted (?). In short, it should not be completely incomprehensible to those who have not studied ancient Chinese. But occasionally I feel that there is a problem with the grammar (whisper) The style of this book is close to that of Ming and Qing novels, similar to the semi-white writing style of "A Dream of Red Mansions". I was a little uncomfortable with it when I first read "Red Mansions", but I gradually got better at it, so I could easily get into the plot when I read "A Dream of Red Mansions". In addition, the description of the appearance and clothing is also a bit like a classical novel, which is very detailed and gorgeous. The main plot is that the Zhao army started from Xuanping, marched northward, and marched all the way to Duogan, Suzhou, Chengyi, Gongchang, Qingyang, Datong, Shuozhou, Yongning... During the Xuanping activities, Ning Yichen and Lu Mingzhi could only meet in secret, but after going north, they followed the army. Their decisiveness and plan were also a big help. The personalities of the characters are also distinct, Ning Yichen is calm and wise, Ning Yihuan is naive but tough, Yan Chu is chic and nagging, Yan Qi is free and interesting... The one drawback is that in many places involving the battle and troop layout, it always feels wrong when examined, and the details are not solid enough. One hundred chapters of high torture... You should have guessed it from the introduction... Let me knock...

The following comment comes from a dog who does not want to disclose his education level. As an event enthusiast, I came to participate in the book review event this time not only for the bonus, but also mainly because I like this novel. First of all, let me tell you some trivia: first, this is a novel with a strong ancient charm (isn't this nonsense); second, the author is Zhongda (another nonsense); third, it is not nonsense - the book is called "The Legend of Stewed Fish" (Zhongda said he wanted to poison dogs and sell them as dog meat). This novel tells a legendary story during the Dai Viet period. Readers... No, Zhongda took him away. Gouzi - came back - wrote a book review! Okay, I've already talked about two hundred words and haven't said anything yet. Let's talk about it formally this time. First of all, the title of the book seemed a bit too pretentious to me at first, so... I never read it. Later, I discovered with Zhongda Shuiqun that she was a girl. Based on the principle of same-sex repulsion, I read this novel and got out of hand... I have to say, the writing style is so strong, so strong! The beginning of the whole book is full of ancient charm... Let me say something special here, this is not classical Chinese, this is at most a vernacular novel in the Qing Dynasty language style, and it is very different from a traditional novel in the true sense. The habit of traditional Chinese novels is to start with the general trend of the world and even the birth of Pangu, and keep mentioning that Zhang San and Li Si were drinking and causing trouble today before the main text begins. The science popularization ends here. Zhongda directly introduces the protagonist at the beginning. The narration at the beginning of the story is close to daily life. It is a typical beginning of Western novels (not many people write serious Chinese style...). The advantages are extremely obvious and the sense of substitution is strong. Of course, the disadvantages of this writing method are also obvious. First, the layout of the opening chapter seems a bit small (after all, the content of the subsequent story is not small). Second, this writing method tests the character creation ability. Fortunately, Zhongda is very good at character creation, so there is no deduction in this aspect. Next, let's talk about writing style. Writing style, I really praise Zhongda's writing style. Dear friends, please remember this: Sister Zhongda's writing style has been certified by the eyes of uneducated dogs and dogs - it is excellent! It is said above that this is not a classical Chinese novel, but it does not say anything that counts as classical Chinese. I will mention it here (I won't say that I forgot to mention it before). Please look at the "History of Zhao" that she often mentions at the end of the chapter. That is classical Chinese. However... Zhongda's writing style is not without fluctuations... She was calm and profound at the beginning. After about five or six chapters, her style suddenly changed and she started to become brisk and sandy. But after about ten chapters, she gradually became calm again. I think this fluctuation is likely to happen to any newcomer. After all, she has not yet fully formed her own style. But the amazing thing is that even if the style changes, Zhongda's writing is still online. You want to see her fall, but she is just hanging in the air, which is helpless. Then there is character creation. To be honest, I have always said that characters are more important than plot, and plot serves the characters, because the original intention of novel creation is to express the author's thoughts through the choices and encounters of typical characters in the general environment. In terms of typical characters, Zhongda did a very good job. The male protagonist and the female protagonist (the names are too difficult to type) have very obvious personality traits. You can tell who is who with one sentence or one action. In addition, the dog-headed military advisor and good friend are also very eye-catching. The soft and waxy little bun image of the female protagonist's sister is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people (I also want to have a sister like this). I've talked so much without realizing it, okay, let's give a summary. In short, if we rate it on a 100-point scale, I think Zhongda's novel can score 97 points. You ask me why it's not a perfect score? Because three points return vitality.

The writing is very good and the storyline is very attractive. I highly recommend it to everyone! ! I hope the author will update it soon! Compare yourself to the author❤️

I'm too lazy to type words today, so I came here to take a break. I always said I should take a good look at your book, but I never had time. I read several chapters in one go tonight, and I felt really happy! I sincerely praise, the girl's writing is really good, and the plot design is also reasonable and rigorous. Although I know the spoilers in advance, it does not hinder my interest in continuing to read. In the first chapter, there were still some awkward parts, but when I read it again today, it was completed in one go and made me feel so comfortable. However, it may be that this article is in classical Chinese and has a small audience, but it does not prevent it from being a very good story and a great novel! Keep up the good work, little sister, I'm optimistic about you~

I have never written a review for anyone, and I am also the kind of invisible book friend who only reads books silently and never speaks! When I encounter the poisonous points in the book, I also smile with forgiveness: the online article is just something for Boruto to enjoy, there is no need to take it seriously! But after reading this book by Sister Yi'er, my thoughts have changed: it turns out that there are also good books in online articles! The first feeling after reading this book is that it shouldn't be classified into the category of ancient Chinese, but should be classified into the category of history! In this touching description, the love between children is not the most important part, but the story of how the male protagonist worked so hard to sit in the temple! Although the heroine is the cinnabar in his heart, making him the guide and motivation in the temple, this is not the reason why this book has become an ancient saying! Since ancient times, heroes have struggled with beauty. The hero in history does not have the white moonlight in his heart. This is why I think it should be classified into the historical category! Let me talk about the girl's language first. As a science student worthy of the name, although I like ancient literature very much. But to sister Yi'er, a regular soldier in the Chinese department, the poems in my book seemed so pale and feeble! The use of classical Chinese in the entire article makes me feel ashamed. Compared with some popular books that are not even used well, this book can be called a masterpiece in classical Chinese! Talking about the description of the story, both the setting and the plot arrangement are relaxed and relaxed! What impressed me deeply was that the costumes, shapes, and fighting scenes of the characters in the book were all described in great detail! For example, in the first chapter, the character description of A Ying when she appears is very detailed, making you feel like there is a pretty little girl standing in front of you after just one glance! The vividness shows the author's literary skills! I have only read the first 15 chapters of the book so far, and there are only so many comments I can give! I sincerely hope that book friends who like to watch historical dramas will take a good look at it! This book will definitely not disappoint you! As an old literary youth, I give sister Yi'er's book a score of 95 points. The few points less are to prevent her from being proud and give her the motivation to make better progress! Come on sister! Finally, I would like to recommend my own book. Although I am not as good as my sister in the use of classical Chinese, I can still read it! Ha ha ha ha!

Big support for the author! !

The impression after looking at the appearance, four words, the old saying is big boss.               ，，， Chuxing thought for a long time, if he was allowed to write ancient poems, would he be able to have such a good literary talent? The answer is no, after all, I am good at making fun of people, and suddenly I become serious, which scares me. However, this is a serious drama article that needs to be treated seriously. Chu Xing also needs to restrain his cheerful temper and comment seriously. From the first chapter, I knew that Yi'er was a wolf fire, and the ancient charm revealed between the lines made me admire her.          :           "，，，，，，，……"       If you ask me to write a drama, I will probably go crazy. However, the story between Lu Mingzhi and Ning Yichen gradually became colorful in the colors of the drama, full of thoughts and awakenings about life. The difference between a drama and a general novel is that it can always give you some inspiration about life. Things are fickle and the world is full of twists and turns. Cherish the people in front of you. Strictly speaking, this book should be in the style of a typical martial arts novel and should be classified into the martial arts category. The author's profound cultural knowledge can be seen between the lines. The words and sentences of ancient poems and the Spring and Autumn writing style for describing history are all easily accessible. People who like traditional culture will especially like this. There are not many people who can write this kind of writing nowadays. Give Yier a big thumbs up! ! !    One word, good! Two words, excellent! Three words, awesome!   …                                                                                                                     ，，，，~             ，， This is a book that needs to be calmed down and savored. The plot is compact. Don't skip reading, otherwise you will miss the wonderful plot. To be honest.            ，，            ，，， Today, Internet literature has developed into various genres. Although fewer people read martial arts, it has many advantages that modern novels do not have. The writing style is smooth and smooth, and the plot has ups and downs. It presents a majestic world in just 200,000 or 100,000 words.              ，，，，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       "           ，                                                                                                                                                                                          Frequently coming up with a stroke of genius during the slow reading process, make people wonder, how can those words and sentences be used so accurately and appropriately?          ， Continue to add after reading. Without further ado, let me add a few words from my colleague. Bring along your own book, hahaha

Squeeze out some time, grab a sofa, and wait until it's over.

KeMy beloved girl Ning "er"😜

To test the poison! Looking forward to the subsequent development of the story👍

Collect it, the writing is very good, support the author, Great work!

Yan Qixie instantly transformed into "Tang Monk" after meeting Ning "Er" 🤭

The article is written more delicately, with clear logic and detailed annotations. The protagonist is humorous. I like it!

It's a bit of a river-side reading, support it, come on!

La la la la, little sister, I'm here from Xiaohui

Come on, support us and encourage us together!

Come on come on! 😃😃😃😃

Flying sand filled the sky, gravel was scattered randomly, and a cloud of smoke and dust was raised in the vast desert. Through the smoke, you can see a military camp. There are horse fences on all sides, elite soldiers and strong generals guarding it. The handsome tent in the middle stands in the wind and sand, looking glorious and solemn. Although the wind and sand continued, the guards in front of the tent still had resolute faces, stood upright with guns, and performed their duties. If you look at this camp from a distance, this camp is solemn and solemn; when you get closer, you can suddenly hear some sounds that do not suit the atmosphere. The sound was buried in the howling wind and sand. If it wasn't very close, you wouldn't have heard it at all. That was a sound of laughter and laughter, floating from the big tent. In this wind and sand, the coaches were drinking and having fun together. The commander of this camp is named Xu. He is a subordinate of Yang Cen and a famous general in Yumen Pass. He was extravagant and lustful, lustful and greedy, but his men were strong and brave, so Yang Cen could only turn a blind eye to his usual misdeeds. At that time, Yang Cen was defeated by the Zhao army and had to retreat to Yumen Pass. However, he couldn't see General Xu's behavior of eating, drinking, whoring and gambling all day long, so he asked him to set up a formation two hundred miles in front of Yumen Pass to intercept the Zhao army. I thought he would be more restrained on the battlefield, but he raised his tail after repelling two attacks by the Zhao army. Seeing the wind and sand in the sky that day, he guessed that the Zhao army would not attack again, so he went back to his old business - enjoying life. After two cups of yellow soup, he shouted: "Where's the girl? Why hasn't the girl I wanted come yet?" The military advisor next to him hurriedly came over and smiled and persuaded: "It's windy and sandy today, so the girls should come slower." A few people talked and laughed for a while, and suddenly someone came in and reported: "I've invited two singers, just wait outside the tent." The man surnamed Xu shouted: "There are so many of us, how can two girls be divided enough?" The guard over there looked helpless, and when he was about to explain, he shouted again: "That's all, let the girls in first!" The guard breathed a sigh of relief and hurried out to deliver the order. Not long after, two figures came into the tent. At a glance, one of them was wearing a green dress, and the other was wearing a goose-yellow dress. The two girls were wearing veils to protect themselves from the wind and sand. For a moment, I couldn't tell what they looked like. I only knew that they were tall. Even the short woman in Tsing Yi was not much shorter than the general named Xu, and the taller woman was about the same height as General Xu. When General Na Xu saw it, he immediately smiled and said: "Hey, such tall girls are rare. Come on, come on, let me see the beauty of these two girls." The two Cong Shanruliu took off their hats and veils, but they saw the two beautiful faces underneath, which made everyone present marvel. The tall woman has red lips and white teeth, long sword-shaped eyebrows, slightly raised phoenix eyes, and extremely long eyeliners that slant back and forth. She looks soft and charming, but she also has a heroic spirit. The shorter woman in green is equally beautiful, but compared to the taller woman, she looks as cold as ice, with no expression on her pretty face. The tall woman folded her crotch and said softly: "The little girl Si'er and Chu girl are here to serve you masters." These words were very useful to the ears of Xu, who smiled and said: "Okay, two girls, come quickly, come on!" Si'er chuckled and walked lightly to General Xu. General Xu couldn't wait to take her into his arms and asked with a smile: "Can the girl know how to drink?" Si'er nodded with a sweet smile, and General Xu put the wine glass to Si'er's lips. At this time, Miss Chu also walked to the seat next to her, leaned over and sat down, as if she had closed her eyes and was concentrating, showing no reaction or saying a word. Several generals watched the general take over the fourth girl, and they were already ready to make a move on the first girl here, but the general hadn't spoken yet, how could they dare to step forward casually? "Good drinker!" At this time, the four girls took a big gulp of the glass of wine, which attracted a cheer from General Xu. He filled up the empty wine glass and asked Si'er to drink the second glass. Si'er pushed the wine glass away and said with a smile: "What's the point of just drinking? There must be some show to accompany the drink."

The author's writing style is extraordinary, I admire you⊙▽⊙

The following are purely personal suggestions, 🤣 Excellent aspects. The author's writing style is smooth and delicate, and it is very comfortable to read, especially the dialogue between the characters. The ancient Chinese and vernacular are well connected. The plot is well laid out, from the protagonist's growth to the later palace. Some ancient Chinese quotations contain historical prototypes. It can be seen that the author has checked a lot of information, or it may be that the author has a deep cultural heritage🤣I It can't be done. Personal suggestions for improvement. The author's writing style is very delicate and comprehensive, but it also feels too long when reading, and the rhythm is too slow to enter the plot. The rhythm of the first few chapters is good, but there are a lot of daily life, psychology, and dialogue descriptions in the later chapters. Although it promotes the development of the plot, the pace is not fast enough. Internet articles are really rhythm-hungry. Those who read patiently There isn't much, so the next paragraph should be introduced after the previous plot. The author can omit a lot of chapters. The plot is condensed and essential, including frontier wars, palace battles, and court strategies. It would be good to intersperse the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but emotion is not the main theme. In general, the author's intentions can be seen in this book, and the writing and plot are good. It is a very good article. Chapters, but the issue of rhythm is very important. The author's next book can speed up the pace, and it definitely has the potential to become a god. Nowadays, there are not many authors who are serious about writing books. Most people are more impetuous and support the author to polish the details more. It will definitely become popular and have a big lead in advance. (This article is ten thousand) Finally, crazy hint, I, I want to🤣

I'm back. I've been too impetuous recently and need to calm down. As I said, you tell wonderful stories like a storyteller. Just sit next to me and tell them. I also like to listen.

I'm a navy man hired for 10,000 yuan, nice!

I haven't remembered how to write it yet

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Investment with confidence] A director graduate from his previous life, accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning, sold a miserable job in variety shows, professional cheating, blackmailing people with group performances, and live broadcast begging Detect ghosts and scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make scary videos to scare people, make funny skits, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect them into movie materials, and come back to scare the audience crazy on the big screen in reality

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