The Gods Breed Goods and Cultivate Immortals

Can you please stop inserting reality into it?

The author writes more thoughtfully, but how can I put it, since he has traveled all over the world, he actually fell into love between men and women in the early stage, and the trading pattern is too small, so he is not a qualified businessman.

It's well written, but too little. The development is also slow. I don't know what the author's main line is, but it's too slow to deal one by one like now. It is also inconsistent with economic principles. It would be simple to establish a market. Also, according to the usual practice, when there is a Little Japan, the Little Japan must be beaten, and Li Yunlong has come out. Little Japan is not far away. There are also practical problems, and you can trade them. Why don't you give the country a trading card? If you don't already have supplies and weapons, such as minerals and oil, exchange them for weapons. If you exchange the combat weapons and materials for Li Yunlong, wouldn't your development be faster?

I was addicted when I saw the 5th picture, and gave up. Writing this kind of article, but also trying to create a warm atmosphere, isn't this being cheated? Especially Huang Rong,

Although it is a simple article, but... I want to ask, practicing martial arts? A hundred years? That's all? ? Do you think this is cultivating immortality? As you said before, he was the one who purified the scriptures and cut the marrow, and he also had Ip Man's memories of martial arts training? According to the Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Bao Dan, practice the spirit and it will not be bad. Let's talk. It took you a hundred years to become enlightened? Damn it. Your qualifications are better than those of a pig, right? ?

It's already obvious from the beginning that the protagonist looks like a novice. To be honest, doesn't a novice like him have no idea when doing things? It's simply a downer

Why are the protagonists written as perverts? Have you never seen a woman? No matter how lustful a normal person is, they can still distinguish priorities. Let the preferences of characters in novels and movies affect their judgment and purpose. This kind of person is an idiot! If you don't have to suffer more beatings from society, who has such a great opportunity and wouldn't think about how to make yourself stronger and how to maximize the benefits

The beginning is very smart. Huang Rong is only fifteen or sixteen years old. She is just a junior high school student and is stunted. How can she be that good-looking? He acts like he has never seen a woman before, and there are some transactions that he cannot understand at all, and his strength is really bad. He only has this strength after so many chapters, and the most important thing for a book on trading in the world is that it has a strong character. It is too much for you to trade directly at your own home, and there cannot be a female protagonist. Only in this way can you continue reading. I suggest you read "The Strongest Store Manager in History" and learn the routines in it!

Anyone who has a female protagonist in the early stages of Zhutianliu will rush to the street, or the author will write a good female protagonist. For example, the protagonist of this novel cheats and travels through time, but his cultivation level is not as good as his wife!

It is best that after you finish writing, read it again with the same mood you used to read novels before sending it out. Otherwise, you can find a reader to read it for you before sending it out. This way, if there are any problems, you can correct them and the quality is good.

This kind of book is not suitable for a female protagonist. Even if there is one, it should be written as little as possible. The most important thing is that Huang Rong, who is in junior high school, is so good-looking. Also, let's improve the exchange's performance, expand production, and create greater glory.

If this book is not greatly revised, it will definitely become a eunuch, as evidenced by this. Most novels without an outline are like eunuchs. Either no one subscribes to them, or they are poorly written, or they are just made up, a hodgepodge of many things.

The transaction novel can only be read by the shop owner, other sensory IQs are not online.

I was really interested at first, but the more I read, the more confused I became. First of all, it is set up as an unreasonable setting that all the customer's things are profitable. What the protagonist exchanges is of no value, only the commission from the customer's transaction; secondly, he took Jiuyin from the beginning, but it has never been of any use, so what's the use of taking such a big risk; thirdly, in the real world, there is no brainer to lower the IQ, but he doesn't hit the mark. Finally I can only say goodbye

The trading system is actually a behind-the-scenes boss flow, but after reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist has no character at all, and even ends up personally. In the trading part, I also feel that the protagonist is like a money-splitting boy, with insufficient IQ and heart.

A super licking book! Just a few chapters into the game, I said goodbye! ! !

It's so messy that I don't know what type of book I'm reading

After reading it for a while, I lost my interest in reading it. What kind of heroine does this kind of novel need? Since he was demoted to B status, as the boss of Zhutian Trading, his personality is very important. It was as if he had not seen a woman in several lifetimes. He suddenly became a D-shade.

There are loopholes in the beginning, everyone recognizes the master, and it is still the kind of Goldfinger who dies when the master dies. Even now, Goldfinger also exploits the host, and the protagonist's IQ is not online.