Warden of All Heavens and Worlds

What's the point of a good prison that doesn't arrest people and change other people's fates?

It's boring. Most of them are writing about science fiction. The martial arts and fairy tales combined don't have as much content as the Marvel world. Immortal cultivators are beaten by science fiction powers. Since you like science fiction so much, you should write about foreign science fiction worlds and don't come back to harm our fairy tale dreams! So many TV movies and novels are not enough for you to write? If you have to write about Marvel and Western European mythology, it's understandable if you like to write about it, but to come back with Marvel's superpowers to challenge our fairy world is too much! In the early stage of foundation building, adding two attribute points will bring you to the later stage of foundation building! This is cultivation, not skills. Cultivation can be improved, so what kind of immortal is this? Still needs to work hard to form pills? Just click on it, you can order it anyway!

It's so well-written and looks very dramatic. The author wrote it completely according to his own preferences. It's just for self-pleasure.

The author is afraid that 404 will make the protagonist too cowardly... Only when you get to know a few girls will your mood improve.

This writing style still needs to be improved. The plot is good. The first part of the article is too simple. I feel that there is a lot of room for simplification. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Most of the things written about are foreign products, which makes my head burn a bit.

The protagonist's telekinesis is so abnormal that even a cultivator has not become an immortal. How can his head withstand such a strong increase in mental power? In a sense, the protagonist is still just a mortal! Moreover, when the protagonist is fighting, he doesn't step forward and confront him. He doesn't know any cultivation spells and doesn't use any magic weapons. He just plays around with telekinesis. Then why do you have such a strong physique? If you don't use it for fighting, you use it to seduce women?

Let's complain about the setting. It's so baffling and far-fetched.

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that I don't really like the contrast between the realms that cover the sky, so I'll skip over and wait for you to write the next world.

The first three worlds are pretty good, but I won't mention the latter ones.

From what I've read so far, the author gives me a feeling of a relatively open ending. It may be an arm-wrestling between the protagonist and the major forces, or it may be another force (that is, the system creator). You can even refer to the concept of three thousand worlds in the book, big, medium and small. The protagonist is a powerful person in the big world. Arrangements made to break through bottlenecks. Furthermore, it may be the same ending as Deadpool's invasion of the Marvel Universe in Marvel. The protagonist once again travels to the main universe and continues his journey. Of course this is just my personal opinion and conjecture. What happens next depends on the author. I hope it doesn't end badly and doesn't require a eunuch!

Men should be like their brothers. First: Never show off. Second: Be able to hold on at critical moments. Third: Ability to train successors. Fourth: Good at attacking and making people feel happy. Fifth: It can both create friction and make everyone feel happy together. Sixth: Be able to shrink yourself humbly after victory. Summary: low-key, courageous and capable.

Science fiction can be finished in a dozen chapters, but martial arts has dozens of chapters. The author should finish it quickly.

There is nothing wrong with the author using the same actor in different roles. The author's setting is that different works are different worlds. Jet Li's Zhang Wuji and Huang Feihong are the same person in different parallel worlds, just like I might be Zhu Yuanzhang hundreds of years ago in another world. In this setting, Jet Li is just the name of the other two people in our world.

There is so much room for creativity in this book. Just imagine, catching Zhu Bajie and feeding the pigs is a light novel, catching the heroine is a harem novel, catching Sun Wukong to nurse the child is a spoof style, whether it is fun or not depends on the author's preference. I feel like I could start a series.

Chapter opening: The system says you can arrest whoever you want, whatever you want. Then a wave of free systems blew up and the protagonist was filled with joy. Next few chapters: You have to catch someone, especially the capture mission of a certain character that the author dislikes (the arch says: Why must he be captured? The system doesn't know, but in short, you don't care about the protagonist). The mission has rewards and punishments. You can take it or not. It's up to you. If you don't complete the mission, you will never come back. The protagonist still thinks that the two statements are completely consistent and very free. Actually, you can really see the whole story from a few chapters later. The setting at the beginning is so logically contradictory. The point is to emphasize that the protagonist lives a free and nourishing life even if everything is fine. He can arrest whoever he wants. I don't know what it means. Then there is the logic of the plot of the novel. It seems that there is nothing wrong with most of it. It basically means entering various worlds. These are film and television plots that are recognized by the public. In other words, they are all written successfully by others. How many contradictions and inconsistencies can it have? Then it comes to the author; in the opening chapter of the novel, the main character comes back from the Qing Dynasty and shaves off his braids and leaves a bald head. Is there anything difficult to explain? You opened your mouth and told your parents that you were filming for an endorsement. Why don't you take the things you endorse to see? The next ancient world system changed its long hair. This is a wave: [The details and descriptions are really good, great god] Since you have this ability, why don't you change it back and still need an endorsement? , To catch the first criminal, the system "Master Xing" was very intelligent and asked the protagonist to bring Li Bingbing in on the grounds of "catching a beautiful criminal and the protagonist will be happy". I was filled with questions? ? ? Although I am writing a novel, the illogical logic only shows that my thinking is not in place. Is the meaning element too heavy?

Long live science fiction! In fact, you can write about the God of Gamblers and the Saint of Gamblers, who will win the whole universe in the future.

As for aesthetic issues, I don't think Wonder Woman is beautiful at all, so I quit because I couldn't stand it.

I don't know why, but when I see Marvel, I don't like it.

I don't really like the protagonist's character, it's too unscrupulous. Every time I see the protagonist using coercion to start a harem, I want to say: Give me the pen and I will write. I guarantee that I will kill you in one chapter! (Of course, the novel is a novel after all, and the author can write it however he wants. Anyway, the author will protect it, and the protagonist will not die.) (Of course, I still want to ask here, if one day the protagonist meets a super beautiful woman, and then he still wants to bring her into the harem in his usual way, but the other person's father is an invincible strong man that the protagonist can never catch up with, and he is also a daughter-in-law, can the protagonist survive?)

The main character is of low character, and suddenly becoming the warden of all worlds is a poor man who suddenly becomes rich. A wretched and hanged man lowers the quality of the book. The author forcibly lowers the IQ of celebrities in other worlds. Men who do not submit to the hero are wretched and scum. Women who are beautiful and famous in Pig's Foot are just a coquettish bitch and must be taken into the harem. This kind of novel can only be read by those who are of the same status and heart as Pig's Foot. The writing is lousy and the thinking is lousy.

As a Chinese, I really don't think Alice is beautiful, and she is even ugly. Why do so many people say she is a beauty?

I really don't understand. The pig owner has cultivated to a higher life form, and the second lady in the Pacific Rim world is covered in bacteria and parasites. She is as disgusting as a dog in Japan. Couldn't the protagonist's level 8 telekinesis still be able to see whether there are parasites on a person? Does it become more rubbish the more you write? 😰😰😰

I just read the first chapter, and the author probably plays too many online games, so skills and attributes are separated, and the skills and attributes remain unchanged when upgrading. Let's make an assumption. The protagonist has obtained the Dragon Elephant Boruo Gong and has just enough skill points in his hand to fill it up. This kind of power should be able to smash rocks, right? Then, because the protagonist didn't add attributes, he punched it and broke his hand. . . Isn't this funny?

This book should not be called Warden of All Realms, but should be called (Piledriver of All Realms with a Cave). Readers who like to read about traveling through all realms to find a woman, and then taking the woman across time will probably like it very much, and it is the kind that brings you back to the real world.

He wrote dozens of chapters just to win over Dongfang Bubai. No matter how hard he practices, he is still a bastard. It seems that the author likes men deep down in his heart.

The author may have some misunderstandings about Zhetian. There is indeed something wrong with the rules of Zhetian. However, the practice system created by Emperor Huangtian is similar to using force to prove the path, using the body as a seed to develop various secrets in the body. As for why it cannot live forever? Because Emperor Huang Tian passed the method directly to Xiantai, that is, the immortal method after the emperor was not passed down at all, so he could not live forever. Those who did not become immortals in the chaotic ancient times could only rely on immortality materials to live for a long time. When the immortality material is exhausted, it will look like covering the sky...

This is not like a prison, where the people arrested have become a background wall, with no description, no proper use of their abilities, no rules and regulations, and no management organization. If we still have to support these people, is this really a prison? Except for the occasional need to describe a little bit, the people inside are completely like air. Although I haven't watched a lot of them yet, it seems that they are slowly upgrading and changing the maps. Many movie worlds are becoming more and more the same, without more interest and characteristics. Go in, arrest people, find treasures and leave. The golden finger of the protagonist is simply very powerful, and so is the game itself. It is hilarious and fun, and there are no unnecessary system requirements. You can be more imaginative and write something unique in each different world. Anyway, you are not forced to write the same thing. The concept itself is very good, and the characters are easy to watch. From the beginning to hundreds of pictures, it has always been the same routine. After watching it for a long time, I get tired of it.

The prisoners in the prison are all the father and mother of the protagonist. The story is not like a prison at all. It is as poisonous as possible. The protagonist is also a bit mentally retarded.

Only three of the five or six hundred were captured. So many women were arrested and cloned just so that every man in the prison would have a wife. It was so funny. In 2012, TMD went to South Korea and arrested one or two Girls' Generation members and their families to make fun of them. If the protagonist doesn't want to be taken away, he'll be caught and thrown into jail and someone else will be sent to him later? The most powerful prison, I'm afraid it's not the most powerful dating agency.