The City of Merfolk

This is a late fake long comment. I started following this book by Natsume Dada from 100,000 words, and now it has 440,000 words. Regarding the update, I just want to say, I love Diligent Dada! I first came into contact with this book when I entered the three words "mermaid" into the search box on a whim one day. I read very few romantic youth-type books, so the comments are all personal opinions and not representative. If there are friends who accidentally poked in, just laugh it off. There is nothing to say about the writing style of Dada. I am a bit picky when it comes to writing, and I especially cannot tolerate grammatical errors, misuse of punctuation marks, typos, misuse of words, etc. The writing style of Dada is smooth, the pace of writing is appropriate, and it will not make people look funny. It is my favorite type hehe~~ When reading novels, the story is the core. Mermaids have always been my favorite. The heroine Mu En has a mysterious and beautiful fish tail. The heroine's character really struck a chord with me. The first person to appear was the male supporting character. At first I thought he was an ascetic "gentle scum", and I wanted to put a sack on him, but later I found out that he was a tsundere who seemed to be keeping some ulterior secrets. In addition, after a long time, he was very good to the heroine later on, so I temporarily lost my memory and let the past be forgotten. Ps. Luo Wangchuan's little bad possessive attack is a bit exciting. Hehehehe... Then there is the male protagonist, a young master who is growing up. He is responsible but often impulsive. His performance in the later changes is passing, and the fairy puts away the sack again. The last mermaid is struggling to survive in the human world, and her unique beauty can be turned into a weapon, but I guess the kind-hearted Mu En will not do this (as expected, I still prefer evil-hearted guys, such as Luo Wangchuan 233) I seem to be a little off topic... I haven't caught up with the latest updates, and I only saw Chapter 109. I don't know how it will develop later, but I still hope that the male and female protagonists can grow up (maybe it depends on the mood of the son and daughter? My aunt laughed). Take advantage of the free time to code the long comment, it doesn't seem to be very long, cough cough cough, don't mind it. I like the writing style of nature very much. It is not too pretentious and pretentious, and it is not too bland and tasteless. I should say it suits my taste. There is also a big talk, which is a bit cute hehe. (If you put more effort into some of the characters [e. G. The female supporting character Pei Shiyan] and some of the plot settings [not giving an example, ORZ], the results may be even better!) In conclusion, my writing style is great and my people are very patient. If I keep writing with my original intention, it will definitely become more popular! I would like to wish all my friends in the deep sea and those passing by a happy National Day~ PS. The most important point is that the long list above is just my humble opinion. If there is any inadvertent offense, I apologize in advance PPS. I would like to express my gratitude to the most diligent person on the bookshelf, Natsume, Happy National Day!

Aren't you talking about Master Ji's mermaid? ? ? ? Why did the male protagonist become Luo Wangchuan again? ? ? ?

So far, the popularity of the male supporting cast is relatively high. Build a building for the cuties in the male partner party. If you want sweets, come in here Plots that cannot be written in the main text will be updated from time to time in the small theater in this building~ Luo Ji sprinkles sugar. If it's not sweet, it doesn't cost any money~

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There is always a cute little girl in the group who wants to straighten Luo Wangchuan, so building this building shows Mu Ji's status as an official wife. In the end, Mu En is still Ji Shao! Slightly slightly

Big cheers for the author! 🤭🤭

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I saw that I could post fanart, so I hurriedly rushed out. How about it? Not colored yet! I don't know what color the male protagonist's hair is. . .

I used a heart-pounding picture, which I think is very suitable! Little Penguin---Mu Ai

Ji Shen should be more handsome and mature than him