Virtual Engineer

To be honest, everything is good, except that the protagonist is exposed and poisoned. Everyone knows that such a dark technology is seeking death. And he also wants to go abroad to seek death +2.

After reading the latest announcement and looking at the previous statement, I just wanted to ask, does my face hurt?

It's all the trolls' fault, this was a good thing and now it's being rewritten. . . .

I skipped the plot of the class reunion. Is there anything to watch? It really makes no sense for the author to go to such trouble to write this paragraph! It's not just this novel that I won't read, it's all the class reunion scenes!

It's eunuch again. Didn't the author say that he won't do it? Hey, there are always eunuchs these days.

Didn't the author say rewrite? ? ? Where are the books?

To be honest, the writing was pretty good and I didn't feel it was broken. The key is that the hole dug by the author is relatively large, and it may not be easy to round out later. For example, why was the alliance destroyed? Why were so many civilizations destroyed? What is the game carrier that carries many civilized heroes? And how to divide the characteristics of various civilizations and black technologies, and how to make the distinction reasonable? Etc. The author doesn't seem to have a very clear definition of these. It only gives a general introduction to the first-level civilization through data (others are left to the reader's imagination, which is actually quite good, as it will make it easier to add things to it later). I feel that the author should not start a new book now, but sort out the plot according to the outline, check for omissions and fill in the gaps, and continue writing. After all, it's a good story! 👍

Interesting story setting, ugly story development Collect to see the effects

This subject seems very interesting at the moment, but some of the content is not very good, especially the part about the government. Comparing the shooting incidents abroad and domestic, there is more freedom outside, but do you know what the premise of this freedom is?

He even went abroad. If I want to check you, it will be easy for him to keep it safe, he can even guess you. Don't think that the United States is so democratic. Even personal safety cannot be guaranteed in the United States. I always think that abroad is better than at home, and I can feel free when I go abroad. It's much crueler abroad than at home. As soon as something like this appears in the entertainment market. The big conglomerates will definitely ban you, or they will control you. Not to mention that you can't be found, I still know you based on your temperament, let alone your current national strength.